THE JANUS MAN--- A Short Story.. - Page 5

Originally posted by: janardana

I have only this to say... Beautiful!!!

Originally posted by: Anamika163

omg omg omg Maris... u r back with a bang yaar👏👏 this is so beautiful😍 just perfect⭐️ how do u express so well yaar😍😍 love it... thnk u sooo much... this was a breath of fresh air😛 n thnx for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: -Ritu567-

It was really good. 👏

Originally posted by: maris08

Anu, Anu, Anu🤗Where were you dear?.. Really missed you😃..Thanks for the appreciation😳..Sorry feel like jerk in not commenting your FF😡. Will pucca do so by tommorow😃.. friend's promise..😃

Originally posted by: maris08

hi ..im subhashini...everybody cannot express their thoughts in words...you truly write very well...glad to read it...

 

Hi Subha, can I call you that? Nice to know you.. And thanks again for your compliment..😃

Originally posted by: maris08

TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH I'M NOW APPREHENSIVE ABOUT MY FF... IT IS NOT ANYWHERE CLOSE TO DHAMAKEDAR LIKE YOUR OS... MAN YOU BLEW MY MIND WITH THE WAY YOU WROTE ABOUT RAM.. THE COUPLETS AND THE HAIKU LIKE LINES LEFT ME TOTALLY AWARE OF HOW LIMITED MY CRAFT IS...

THIS IS NOT TO TELL I WONT COMPLETE IT... I WILL BUT I AM GOING TO HAVE TO BUCK THE HELL UP AND RAISE MY STANDARD OR ELSE I WOULD EMBARRASS ALL ON THIS FORUM

HAVING SAID THAT, I AM STILL READING THE OS, LINE BY LINE BECAUSE YOU HAVE SHOWN THAT SIDE OF ANGUISH WHICH IN ITS NEED TO BE SATED WILL KILL THE VERY THING THAT IT LOVES... MAN SUPER!

 

Oh ho! Nandy.. there you go again.. Too much compliments will create diabetes in my blood..😳😆

Dont underestimate yourself..Anyone with a little bit flair and prodding can write.. thats my motto since joiningIF..

Am a living proof of that..Started writing more after joing IF and now writing full fledged for my office magazine..😃

Thanks once again for the compliments..

Originally posted by: jayashs

Loved it Maris.  Amazing!!! Cant wait for the father daughter duo to actually bond :)! Lovely!