THE JANUS MAN--- A Short Story.. - Page 4

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Awesome imagination didi⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...the way you brought out the expressions and feelings was just superb👏👏👏👏👏...thanks a lot for this beautiful post😃😃😃 and sorry for late commenting😳😳😳

Originally posted by: maris08

Thanks Nady😳😃.. I wish the CVs too realise how ardent and loyal fans like us are anguished by their half baked ideas and tracks😡...

The character of Ram and Priya hold a lot of promise to be written in any way possible..I just handled the duality of Ram at this present juncture.. thats all..Glad to see such kind of heartfelt appreciations..Look forward for my poems, coz they are more closer to my heart..

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TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH I'M NOW APPREHENSIVE ABOUT MY FF... IT IS NOT ANYWHERE CLOSE TO DHAMAKEDAR LIKE YOUR OS... MAN YOU BLEW MY MIND WITH THE WAY YOU WROTE ABOUT RAM.. THE COUPLETS AND THE HAIKU LIKE LINES LEFT ME TOTALLY AWARE OF HOW LIMITED MY CRAFT IS...

THIS IS NOT TO TELL I WONT COMPLETE IT... I WILL BUT I AM GOING TO HAVE TO BUCK THE HELL UP AND RAISE MY STANDARD OR ELSE I WOULD EMBARRASS ALL ON THIS FORUM

HAVING SAID THAT, I AM STILL READING THE OS, LINE BY LINE BECAUSE YOU HAVE SHOWN THAT SIDE OF ANGUISH WHICH IN ITS NEED TO BE SATED WILL KILL THE VERY THING THAT IT LOVES... MAN SUPER!

Originally posted by: SriB

extraordinary  Dear Maris. totally awesome.each and every part made me want even more. you are superb Maris.

Originally posted by: fosla

Maris

Read it late y'day~ 3 parts in a row and Priya's diary!!

You are on a roll dear.  This is superb. The character sketch and emotions are a delight. You have a wonderful way with words. It's always a pleasure to read your works.

It's a request that you should definitely write more often. 

Originally posted by: ravichitra

Such a gripping story Maris. Couldn't actually think other stuff u know. Loved the man here. Man with vengeance. Such men are truly a venom but I get attracted to them. Loved it dear. No nonsense. Just what makes sense