SS- Love can never die...part 5 pg-25 (note pg-34) - Page 7

Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

thanks for nice update... but want to knw more wat u decides 4 our lovy dovy abhiya

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

@.Chashmish.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

amazing upd dear 👏

i love your writing style , sorry i forgot to un res my comment ' holding ears ' first was just awesome , u made the waterfalll much much beautiful and kiss was hot ☺️i just loved the way u described the emotiong of abhiya , cuming to this upd feeling sad for piya she was soo happy and now abhay gonna break up , in the show when he did tat i felt like throwing my chapaals 😡 plsss dont make the break up soo harsh 😳 love your os waiting for next upd 😛

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

superb update!!!!!!!!👏

just loved it!!!⭐️

you beautifully portrayed abhay's frustration.👏

precap is sad😭...abhay will break her heart once more..ho no😭...but plz make everything right soon between abhiya😍

continue soon n thanks for pm😊

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

amazing update...

continue soon:P

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

awome update citi
poor abhiya both again in pain yar
noo abhay plss dont do this yar
now piya suffers again
plsss cont it make it a ss
ok
loved it

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Oh its lovely...plz update soon!...plz pm me wen u update!!...

plz yaar ekta maiyaan ne jaisa show kiya tha vaisa mat karna but yu can show it like that after break up abhay ko realize hota hai ki ussne kitni badi galti ki aur vo piya ko manane ki koshis karta hai plzzz kuch aisa show kardena plzzz

gn tc ks hsd😊

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

plz jaldi update krna ok i cant wait for more...

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Its really nice dear...good start... i always liked the waterfall scene and hated that Abhay changed his mind next morning again 😡 poor pia was so broken.. though i felt bad for Abhay too offcourse becoz it equally hurts him...
thanks for the PM 😊

thanks alot...glad u liked it...

even i liked the waterfall scene and hated when abhay broke up with her...

here in this os/ss i am gonna show the same but dis time abhay is gonna regret it...and won't stay far for long...in the show they totally showed an angry pia but i what i feel is that when dere true love breaks up with them then they are angry but more than that they are hurt...which is more destructable...

and no need to say thnx...friendship mein thnx ki jaga nahi hoti...😆

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
beautiful. 👍🏼 pia is going to get a great heartbreak as abhay will back off. the way pia smiling face was replaced by heartbreak in the show is still in my mind. ur next update is going to be more emotional than this .waiting for ur next update. ❤️

thnx...ya pia is gonna have a heart break that too a big one...😊

i'll put all that in the next to next update...😊

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: .rumki.
gr8 update
next update Pia will be heart broken.feeling bad 4 her

thnx a lot...ya pia will be heartbroken in the next update...

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