SS- Love can never die...part 5 pg-25 (note pg-34) - Page 6

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.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Beautifully described..lu vd it..make it a short story:-);-)

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..juhi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

oh dear very nyc part plz dont end it in next 2-3 updates plz make it more long i wud love to read it...continue soon thanx for pm😊

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Oh its lovely...plz update soon!...plz pm me wen u update!!...Edited by shreyadosi - 12 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

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IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

I really liked the way you wrote it. Thumbs up to you...continue soon!

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Diya

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

oh!!! Wow chiti... Its beautiful yaar ... He wnts 2 embrace her,touch her, kiss her...bt at d sm tym he keeps her away 4 her safty ❤️ *clapsss*

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Superb update yaar. I loved it totally. If u can make it a ss. I would love to read that. U explained abhay's pain beautifully. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awesome update

luvd it

Abhay changed his mind😭 now he will again hurt Piya

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

wonderful update

piya is so happy in her dreamland and abhay is gonna break her heart into pieces...

brilliant job

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573118

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

its awesome but sad too abhay's gonna break up now😭

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

hey dear, pls dont make it like the show.

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