WW About Last Night (May20 - June01 2012) - Page 18

Really? Anjali asked for it??

Maya, You know i stalk this tread. It was absolutely lovely... words fail me to describe how much i enjoy this chapter.

Waaa...that was raunchy Maya!😲😳 Naughty Naughty you!😆

OMG i am still in shock state after the last line
"will you marry me yash?" But yeah happily shocked. Anjali really showed her true caliber in this story. Can't wait to see Yash's reply and Arnav's reaction. But i loved that. and i always loved Yash's honesty.

Awww Khusi is so sad about the pregnancy which she doesn't know yet. The make out in the car just wow 😃

continue soon... I really seems can't get enough of this story or your writing ...

Whoaaa!!! Anjali proposed! Damn! I love this woman! I'm glad Yash approached Anjali :) And so true what he said about the male gender was forgiven everything.

Awww! I feel sad for Khushi! She should trust her instincts not her lying husband! :P I want her to know soon! Did Arnav discuss with Yash about this? Wonder how he'll spring this on her!? :D

But what a way to make up for the 30 hours he kept away. I was drooling at the reference of a roguish Arnav!

Her husband was a business man, skilled at measuring need and timing action.

That was hot!!!!

Cant wait for the next update! :D

omg omg omg!! Ang-Yash are sooo amazing!! Love how direct they both are!! I hope he says yes!! I still cannot believe Ang proposed!!

i loved this part...a truth..well said

Haha wow!!! Anjali proposed ?!?!
Will yash accept..oh no
what is arnav going to say..ahhh...

Lmao khushi horny but.doesn't know.why..!!! Lool..

Great update.

why arnav is not saying that she is pregnant??? he is planning on telling her on her birthday as a gift 😳

Originally posted by: Inked

Thanks for replying. Yeah I agree that its ur story & seriously its v good with just the right balance between eroticism & romance. Just felt that it w'd be better if women take more interest outside the house & family coz i feel Indian women (i am also one :-)) always seem 2 get bogged down by the overwhelming family pressure & never ve much ME-TIME away frm their family. That way working outside the house (c'd b office or art or media or philanthropy) helps since they get 2 meet new ppl, make new friends, pursue other interests. This way their entire life & soul doesn't revolve just around their men & later kids. but then of course i ve no right 2 pass judgment since this is not my story but urs. You ve the right 2 write the way u want. Just felt like sharing my view. That's it. Plz don't get angry that i am telling u what to write & what not to write. As a writer myself i know how annoying that can be.

Anyway enuf of my boring rant. I really like ur story & ll eagerly chk the upcoming updates 😊