Virmaan OS:Burning Up updated part 3

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Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Wow loved it please accept my buddy request and do pm me if you do write in future

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Just...lovely. So poignant. And congrats for your good results!

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hopehot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

oh wow...aw...

lovely update..thnaks for the pm

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Aisha

@Aisha202

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Awesome Gayathri!

Loved how you set their reunion in the rain and that hug was beautiful! <3

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Congrats on ur superb marks...
May u always be successful inshallah and prosper in life ameen...
Amazing update but im sad that its ended but it ended so sweetly and typical of manvi to slap virat for leaving her aww
Awesome update i literally love it

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Izza

@memories_im

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

You are an amazing writer..Beautiful ending..Thanks for the PM 😊

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-Aswathy-

@-Aswathy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Gosh!!!The last update!!Totally luvd it!!
My heart was beating faster from the moment Maanvi saw him till they hugged!!!Lovely it was..the tension,love,urge to be in eachother's arms..Beautifully written...
The starting line cracked me up ''Every thought about Manan ending up in murdering him''lol 😆

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Sanam

@meant4uonlie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

omg!! u shudnt hv ended it :( i want you to continue ... but beautiful ending 👏

your writings are always so touching i just love them and dream abbout it lol

i just love the part when maavi saw virat ... i could just imagine everything the tension between them, the wait, the love and the moment they were in each others arms i couldnt help but smile :)