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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Risha_ipkknd
--EDITED-- Rae :') You made me cry literally!! Yours was hundred times better-I remember this random day me and my best friends were saying how none of us will cry when we get married :P I am not so sure anymore! Amara-beautiful name for one...Arnav was so realistically portrayed here,the grumpy father on a daughter growing up Loved it truly!! Except that-Papa!!!I love You :') Lord please help people understand what a miracle a girl is.Amir sure inspired both of us today😆Love it and Love you🤗

Shush! Yours was really nice! And we both concentrated on different parts of their journey. :)

And that thought about not crying...I think we all have it and then realize later how futile it is, I think. :p

And btw, Amara means eternal. :)

Thank you so much, Risha! :)

And yep SJ inspired us both and hopefully others too. :)

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Sakshi Kaul

@sushi-la

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: peepli
That was so beautiful.. I had tears in my eyes at the end of it,... its so true.. a daughter is a blessing and I dont know of you;ve heard of this-- "a son is a son till he gets married, a daughter is a daughter forever"
👍🏼great OS.. thanks for the PM

What u said is so true...this line:
"a son is a son, till he gets himself a wife...but a daughter is a daughter, all her life"
Was in the beginning of Main Prem Ki Deewani Hoon, right before the song "Papa ki Paris Hoon main"

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awww.. Wonderfully written.. Girls do deserve the same love and affection.. Yours and Risha's OS were just wonderful.. 🤗 Watching SMJ and all that they showed, I cudnt hold back my tears today..

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-
RES !!
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I knew it I knew someone was gonna write an OS after today's epi of Satyamev Jayate cause I was damn sure someone would watch it !!
Seriously when I heard those stories the cases, I was like what the hell, I knew it exists in India but to this extent I never knew !! And my heart went out to every one woman who has been made to go through hell and every unborn girl child !! Cause every girl deserved the life like a princess !!
Princess not in money but the princess to her parents because of their love !! And this OS was somehow a perfect tribute to the wonderful parents who raise their girls as equally as thei boys and love them even more.. One more thing you are great as is to make me fall in love with the parent Arnav and Khushi !! You just make them look so damn convncing I can imagine scenes like that !!

Arnav and Khushi's journey with their daughter is something so pure and .and... well I have no words for it !! This OS just touched my heart and I loved it !! Loved the emotions you potrayed and they were just perfect cause I have seen my sister getting married and my parents go through the journey atleast from her school graduation and I can tell you we both are their princess just like Arnav has his own princess !!

Loved it Rae🤗

Is that someone supposed to mean 'me'? :D

Thank You so much Shobu! And this 'Thank You' isnt from me to you as a writer to her reader but as a person to another who understands an issue like it should be understood. :)

And a thumbs up to your Parents. :)

Glad you liked the concept and my writing style!

@Blue - Hear hear! :D

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG!! I am so in love with your writing that I constantly stalk your index😆. That was one extra-ordinary beautiful story!! I loved the way you bought out each and every emotion in your writing. Khushi seems to be much stronger emotionally than Arnav is, when it comes to their daughter. He was a total train-wreck. Amaara to him was like his heart walking around on the outside of his body with a life and will of it's own. I even teared up reading this and I'm not even a mother yet, but I know of the love my parents has for me and today I was reminded of that by your writing. That kind of love is so hard to explain. Fantastic job, loved it😃.

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I don't know what to do, whether to laugh or to cry, my left hand was covering my mouth while my right hand was going over the mouse, I am so moved by this OS. The little italics in between the different sections was and is so beautiful! I need to think of some new adjectives for your work. I have been rendered speechless yet again, how do you do it? I can- I won-

This-

I have no words.

-Aashifa

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Tat was really a very touching OS. Good work.

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Rae, Rae , Rae!!! You had me bawling like a baby there!

I actually shocked the hell out of my Dad by randomly running to him and hugging the living daylights out of him! Arnav as a Dad was so sweet! Oh my God! That was the Best OS I've ever read. And for the Record- I loved Ayan and Akshay- That's how Brothers are supposed to be! I even hugged my own Dadu- and my family is currently sitting in the living room discussing if I'm in need of therapy😆

BUT! Love you for this fabulous OS! Beautifully Written! And the song was just heavenly! 👏 Thanks for the PM!