My little girl - OS *EDITEDThankYouNoteBestOS Pg19

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NOTE - There have been issues of plagiarism recently and they worry me like they would worry any writer. So I have two options - either to stop writing on IF or to expect from my readers a sincerity in their thoughts and actions and also a sense of responsibility towards this in the sense that I expect them to inform me if they find this/something starkly similar anywhere...can I do that? :)



Disclaimer - Characters you recognize belong to 4 Lions Production but the ones you dont are original and are mine. The lyrics are from Tim McGraw's My Little Girl. Respect this as someone else's creation and dont post in part/whole anywhere.



Plot - She was his little girl and she always will be.



Written as a tribute to all those parents who raise their girls no different than their boys, maybe with little more love, who understand that having a girl is like having a miracle in your life. I saw today's episode of Satyameva Jayate and my heart constricted at the cruelty all around us directed towards a fetus and a whole gender. We are humans, lets act like one.



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I did not expect such a response - so beautiful, personal and emotional. Thank You so much! Lets promise to take these emotions forward and promise to always treat our girls equally and give them the love our parents have raised us with. Lets celebrate being a woman, a human. :)





My little girl



When you were in trouble that crooked little smile
Could melt my heart of stone
Now look at you, I've turned around
And you've almost grown




"Jaan, you don't need any of that stuff...my princess is the most beautiful as it is!" Arnav cooed into his darling daughter's ears as she tried on eye shadow after eye shadow in the fancy Lakme showroom he had been instructed to get her too along with her mother and Bua so that they could complete her school graduation look.


"Papa! Please!" was her reply and a scowl accompanying it which would put to shame any that he had ever been able to come up with. He sighed and looked beseechingly at his sister and his wife as they both chuckled at his expense and Khushi winked at him that ridiculous wink of hers - hadn't changed in the 20 years they had been married!



It was all their fault! They were helping his little princess grow up! She was not supposed to wear makeup so early on! It was bad for her skin! Yes, that's it! He decided excitedly. That would be his excuse!



Striding over to where the two woman were, he whispered to them urgently, masking his face in a 'I don't think this is right for her health' look.



"Di, Khushi...yeh makeup nonsense is not good for her skin! Tum hi toh bolti thi na Khushi ki yeh makeup se skin kharaab ho jaati hai! Toh ab?!"



They both sniggered making him frown.



*EDITED - The rest is on a restricted blog due to blatant plagiarism of my other work.






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rae :') You made me cry literally!! Yours was hundred times better-I remember this random day me and my best friends were saying how none of us will cry when we get married :P I am not so sure anymore! Amara-beautiful name for one...Arnav was so realistically portrayed here,the grumpy father on a daughter growing up Loved it truly!! Except that-Papa!!!I love You :') Lord please help people understand what a miracle a girl is.Amir sure inspired both of us today😆Love it and Love you🤗
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RES !!
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I knew it I knew someone was gonna write an OS after today's epi of Satyamev Jayate cause I was damn sure someone would watch it !!
Seriously when I heard those stories the cases, I was like what the hell, I knew it exists in India but to this extent I never knew !! And my heart went out to every one woman who has been made to go through hell and every unborn girl child !! Cause every girl deserved the life like a princess !!
Princess not in money but the princess to her parents because of their love !! And this OS was somehow a perfect tribute to the wonderful parents who raise their girls as equally as thei boys and love them even more.. One more thing you are great as is to make me fall in love with the parent Arnav and Khushi !! You just make them look so damn convncing I can imagine scenes like that !!

Arnav and Khushi's journey with their daughter is something so pure and .and... well I have no words for it !! This OS just touched my heart and I loved it !! Loved the emotions you potrayed and they were just perfect cause I have seen my sister getting married and my parents go through the journey atleast from her school graduation and I can tell you we both are their princess just like Arnav has his own princess !!

Loved it Rae🤗
Edited by -Shobz.TaAnu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I cried along with them 😆😭 I hope we never have to see it in the show
I cnt see tears in arnav's eyes 😳
Ur OS was beautiful and one of the cuttest i read till now
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...its the cutest thing ever...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow this was beautiful :)
loved it and love your message as well!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww that was so sweet and cute 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww.. Really, that was a master piece..! Unique..

I would cherish this one forever! I loved the total concept!

Every girl's real hero is her father and telling a story of a dad and his daughter thru father's POV is really sensible!

You made it very beautifully! I was imagining me in there.. Total cute moment was the makeup session initially..

Thanks for the PM.

P.S: In every case, mom is really mature when it comes to their daughter, isn't it? How much ever the father is a rock heart person he becomes emotional when it comes to their daughters!

I love u, Rae!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was so beautiful.. I had tears in my eyes at the end of it,... its so true.. a daughter is a blessing and I dont know of you;ve heard of this-- "a son is a son till he gets married, a daughter is a daughter forever"
👍🏼 great OS.. thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Damn! This was so emotional and well wrritten! U made me literally cry rivers...Ganga, jamuna, you name it...all flowing in my too right now...

U made thunk of how much Im gonna cry when I have to leave my parents... Oh god!!! I don't know whether I want to find you and hug u or playful hit u for making me cry and then cry on ur shoulders some more 😛

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