Dil V/s Mind - A Swaron SS!! - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
RES

Madhura u updated πŸ€—
Read it, loved it 
Will leave my detailed comment before, end of the day πŸ˜³
Loved the update, to me it felt like both Dil and Mind may be happy but the silent battle still continue on, I am so happy that She thinks of giving life a chance, to live freely enjoying life to the fullest breaking in the outer shell, is what actually living is all about. Loved the mom and daughter touch u gave, its so true that they know us so well and every moves of us doesn't go unnoticed by them.


plus you just can't keep running away from them forever. You have to face them, once. So why not now?

these lines above, so true..Her mom, in her usual talks gave her another important life lesson..
To think of it..parents never stop with their preaching πŸ˜³ 
And how Sharon spilled the beans about Swayam, and how her mom said she should have listened to him, in the first place was nice.
Looking forward to the next update..on how and what Sharon has to say to Swayam. 

Edited by Sudha-SK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whoa, b4 I send pms 2 posts reserved..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 3rd 

*edited*

Okay soo m gonna start frm the very first chapter coz i missed out everything!
The war that you showed between the mind and dil was superrbb!! πŸ‘πŸΌ
 loveedd it how sharon shouted--impossible!! πŸ˜†
lol...she's actually realizing it! πŸ˜Š
And loved wen she spitted sum things wen she was expected to keep quite..lol...soo lyk sharon! πŸ˜³
and sharey are always a treat to read..! πŸ˜ƒ
sharon is actually losing it..she drank the cold coffee unknowingly or knowingly who knows! πŸ˜‰
and she spilled swayam's name in front of her mom..that was cute! β˜ΊοΈ

You write brilliantly madz..absolutely amazing story writing talent you have..sucha flawless writing! πŸ‘
 
can't wait to read the next! πŸ˜Š
Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^ Surbhi 3rd is good yaar!! Waiting for your feedback.
Srish and Sudha, always race to my SS to res a spot, and threaten me to upd, :).
Edited by Madhura.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

RES


Madhura u updated πŸ€—
Read it, loved it 
Will leave my detailed comment before, end of the day πŸ˜³

 
Hugs Sudha!!
 
Am happy u loved it, after reading all ur fab upds, I also got inspired, and honestly as I said, I wasn't updating cos of Grammatical stuff and flow. But I will fix and try to upd, :)
 
Sure dear, will wait for your feedback. Sorry for the delay, weekend jyada hua!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Teacherji...πŸ€—...
It was a good chapter...
Not depiction of the conflict but the understanding that has come to Sharon after careful thinking...
It also shows how we can't really fool our parents...
10-20 saal se humein jaanthe hain woh log, aise thodi na ullu bana sakthe hain...
Sharon mohtharma , baarish bekaar ki cheez nahin hothi...
Usmein ek aisi khubsoorthi hain jo aankhon se lekar rooh thak ko choothi hain..
Aazman ke dekh lon...
Once again, good job sweets...
Love 
Nidha 
PS - What's life without a change huh? (Username ke liye)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally, you updated and i'm glad to see that the war between Sharon's Dil and Mind seem to have found a truce !!! Sharon's mom is one smart lady and I loved how Sharon just revealed everything including the Swayam bit accidentally !! Looking forward to next chapter !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank god you updated!
god knows for how long i've been waiting!
i thought you just forgot about it!
well,i was wrong you didn't...coming to the SS
it was Superb!
just one word to describe it...i don't think there is any need to say more!
no one could describe sharon's POV better than this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated after so long ...😊
i was waiting for the update .
 
awesome update madhura !!
very nicely written πŸ‘
i loved how sharon has stop fighting with herself and is finally trying to change and try new things
for her betterment πŸ˜ƒ
sharons mom is amazing πŸ˜‰
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm.
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
To finally Madhura ne humne Eid ke din Eidi dene ka man bana hi liya and gave us the update. It was a refreshing change. Before this all the updates were mostly about battle between Sharon's heart and mind so it was nice change to read it from some other prespective. Awesomely written update. Sharon and Sharoon's mom part was nicely done with some interesting and meaningful conversation. Sharon definitely should loosen herself a bit. Waitng for the next update.

P.S- I don't know you have planned it or not or whether it even suits the theme of this SS or not but to be honest it would be fun to see a meeting of Swayam and Sharon's mom.