ArHi FF - Every heart desires - Ch 23 (pg 1) - Page 4

Why did u stop here... It was awesome!!! Pls continue!!!!!!

i loved part 21.. i don't see what is wrong that you didn't like it.. it was perfect.. khushi didn't over react.. that weighs the point that she understands him.. 

Aww! The last part was soo sweet! And Khushi's so understanding! It's really good! Update soon. :)

loved it,  you got tears in my eyes with anjali's speak especially the hug between her and khushi.
finally arnav said the words I Love You!!!!!!!!!
but where was Karan??? Did he not come home with her?

So simple yet so romantic!! 😍

Really nice update.
Loved the touch-me-not part:)

Great update

Where is Karan? He's missing from the family festivities.

Yuks

Superb update. i was waiting for this.
Finally Arnav let out his feelings.

Waiting for your next chapter, continue soon.

Thanks for PM

Sowi - doubled up in error 😕 Edited by SNR7 - 12 years ago

Superb - Arnie finally opening up like a normal person 😃! And he admitted that he loved her 😉!!! Hopefully there will be heaps of progress... 😳 😆! And the promise of up coming updates is keeping me on the edge 😊