ArHi FF - Every heart desires - Ch 23 (pg 1) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Hey rachita!!
I'm soo glad that u updated
The update was fab. I know khushi has an inborn forgiving nature and when it comes to the person u love, u tend to be even more forgiving but after last part, I wanted khushi give him a little hard time so that arnav can recall all his actions and repent them.

Anjali's monologue was really heart-touching and khushi is seriously a gem. I hope now arnav realises that khushi and anjali both can hold an equal importance in his heart.

Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
I didnt think it was bad at all.  I would have liked to see him grovel more. I loved the realistic portrayal between Anjali and Khushi.  What could these two say that would have fixed anything?  Can't wait for the other chapters.  Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Loved it! Waiting for Ch 20
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
girl your crazy if you think this is  shit!
I absolutely loved it, especially the last scene with arnav opening up

oh, thanks for the pm too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
finally! arnav confesses! 😳👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
this was beautiful!
the anjali khushi part was really heart warming!these 2 women share a different bond n though their lives have been interconnected in the worse way possible thanx to a deceitful man,yet these 2 find solace in each other!
n finally arnav spoke out...im glad he confessed unknowingly,otherwise he would never have brought himself to say those words!
n like arnav,even i found a new-found maturity in khushis character in this chapter n i liked that!
i honestly loved the part where she says that unlike him,she is able to hold a normal conversation with him even when she is mad!their was a new level of maturity n strength when she sad those lines which io absolutely adored!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
aww..tht was lovely..the whole conversation was so beautifully written👏
i want to read more..plz update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Absolutely beautiful!👏

Chapter 19 was awesome, Totally loved it! LA LA LOVED IT<3

YAY you updated after SOOO long!😃

It was amazinggg! (:

Awww so cute, Glad Arnav confessed his love!😳

Hope they both forgive each other and move forward!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
nyc update...
loved that finally he confessed😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
After a long break u really gave us a superb update . It was really touching . I m glad that Arnav has said that 3 magical words. Hopefully there will b no more tiff between this two.