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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
superb part yaar...just awesome...
i love this nupur and can relate her with me...she is so different...
continue soon...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
very very cute and nice update. continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Very nice update,,,
luvd d characterisation of mayur very much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
beautiful update.

mayank was so funny ... he gave a full prof lecture to nupur ... lol

bt he was so sweet ... how nicely he gave his laptop,

awesome update.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
nice 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

waoo...
its such beautiful update...just loved it to core...

Mayank was too god...it cracked me whn he laughed at pretending sleep so right...

but he is really good person who was doing all tht he can to make her comfortable... amazing..

hay..online fnrds...ek din kheya bhi yeahi bol rahi hogi...pata chala usko wedding thread per woh raat ko hi online...

lovly...n pls cont soon



thx for liking it fiza
n ya ekdin mai bhi aysehi karungi as this NUPUR resemble me too much .or i must say this nupur is carbon copy of me 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

PART:5

i was going by rickshaw on Mumbai road .suddenly another rickshaw crossed mine n guess who was dere ,my sweet heart arjun binjlani n sourav ganguly .seeing them I just stood on the rickshaw n started shouting n moving my hand to them n their rickshaw stopped .they came down from their rickshaw n walked to me .i was so excited I ran to dem .blabbered my heart out to dem n dey smiled .ah their adorable smile ,the dimple of arjun n the cute innocence of ganguly .i just fainted their at that adorable site .then I hard their sweet voice calling out my name ……..

"nupur "

"nupur"

N then two voices became one made a futioned voice

"nupur"

But this voice seemed known to me .i opened my eyes ,had a blurred sight infront of me I widened my eyes n it was mayank .i jerked n sat straight up on bed adjusting my clothes .

I looked at him n gave a fake n confused smile .the dream was so real that I was still out of reality n confused about how I came on this bed .

"were u dreaming something? What was tha?" he asked me giving back a smile n well I was stunned .his smile was beautiful n he ,he had a dfimple like arjun,aw I never noticed it before n he looks so innocent while smiling .

I blushed a little both at my thought n reminding his question about my dream .just then there was a knock on the door .

"jaldi niche ao tum log ,breakfast ready hai "

"ata hu ,nupur tum fresh ho jao ,niche neighbours ate honge tumse milne n aj path phere k rasham bhi hai "

oh ,this thought made me tired again ,phirse parlour,phirse stage pe baithna like doll ..terrific

"hmm ,but where is the bathroom?"

"Chalo m taking u there ,tumhe thoda prob hoga ,purana hai ,damp hai n clean hai don't worry"

I looked at him confused n amazed

"I know about ur mania" he flashed his smile n I became embarrashed first n den lost in his smile .his smile is realy a adorable sight

Don't be fool nupur .u n going gaga over outer look .ho kya gaya hai tujhe? Sare boys same hota hai samjhi .baharse jitnahi sweet n innocent dekhe ,padaku ho ya flirt all the boys are same .unhe ladkiose bas ekhi chese chahie hota hai n unhe ladkio mai serif ekhi chese dikhta hai .

After frershing up we came down .all welcomed me so warmly I was amazed

"chalo bahoo to uth gaye ,ab shilpa rasui ghar dikha de ,aj bahooke hathke mitha khaungi"

"are ayse kayse bat rumki ,aj pehle din hai sabse jan pehchan to hone de ,40 din tak no rasui ghar beti" shilpa aunty assured me though I was ready to cook still I was relieved .m good cook but itne sare logoke lie cooking bohot difficult hai

"sorry bhabi aapko aj jaldi uthana para ,pata hai new bride ho ,tyired honge but neighbours atehi honge n phir jaldi parlouyr bhi jana hai rat k function k lie " one of mayank's cousin said

"ha ,ayse to mai earlyriser hu but kal sach mai bohot thak gayi thi ,isilie late ho gayi" I replied n wid surprise I noticed all started loughing at my coment .i looked at mayank n found him embarrash n blushing

I was looking at all confused ,unable to understand their reason behind loughing .

"kya bhaya ,apbhi na ,pehlehi rato thaka dia na bhabi ko " soma ,his cousin stressed on the word PEHLEHI RAT n I got the reason .damn mer .m always silly regarding dirty joke n always making foul coments give ppl to dirty joke about me .m never gonna grow up.shit .

I was hell embarrashed n was asking god to open the earth for me then shilpa aunty camer n saved me .

Shadi k ghar hai ,ratko function hai .kitne sare kam aur tum log tabse baithi ho .jao kam pe .nupur beti chalo breakfast karne .

At night after completing all the rasam of PATH PHERE I came back at my house .well we came back at my MAIKE as I should say now .

When the car stopped infront of our house I felt like no other sight cant be so beautiful .i felt like all the brze ,all the bricks were welcoming me .i hugged ma-baba n gunjan .ah its heavenly feeling having dem close to me .

Enetering in my room I sat on my bed .aww even the bed welcomed me .all my cpousins gathered round me n we were having fun ,gosshiping ,chatering .while mayank sat wid elders .donno what they were talking .

After dinar I entered in my room n for the first time felt new in this born to known place .first time except a guy is gonna sleep wid me .closing the door I went infront of mirror to comb my hair n to pss the embarrashment too .

"nupur"

"umm ,ha ,bolo"

"wo ek problem ho gaya."

"kya hua? " I sat beside him

"wo ,mere office mai kuch jaroori kam a gaya ,mujhe kalhi do dinoke lie Mumbai jana padega ,wohase atehi hum honeymoon pe jayenge ,kashmir ,your favourite place ,gharwaloko bohot muskilse manaya maine ,wo log to kashmirke names ghabra gaye the "

"awww Kashmir ,tumhe pata hai wo to mere dream place hai ,dull lake ,chasmasahi n all so beautiful places "

"tum khush ho!!! Mujhe laga k tum honeymoon k names tnsn mai ajaoge"

"wo kyun?? Tumhe nahi pata traveling n outing mujhe kitna pasand hai n wo bhi Kashmir pe by gawd .mai bohot khush hu .maine to list karkehi rakhi hai k Kashmir jaungi to kaha kaha ghumungi ."

"wo nupur ,mere mumbaise ane mai thoda late hoga ,meeting k bad mujhe meri new flat ready bhi karna hai ,I mean hamara new ghar ,honeymoon k bad hum woha shift ho jayenge n phir tumhari MBA classes bhi to jaldi suru karna hai "

"u bought new flat?"

"ha ,hamare lie ,n I decorated it according to your choice"

"tumhe mere choice kayse pata?"

"pata kar lia .pyar mai aur kitna kuch karna parta hai "

Oh shit I just hate these typical flattering dialogue .to avoid these I was about to propose to sleep but he started again

"ayse nupur ,I have seen a new look ofurs today ,u were so chulbuli in your home wid your cousins.but in college n school I mean the privates where we used to study together in school days ,u were always shy n silent .once I asked u your notes n u became so nervous"

"u remember dat?? I don't "

"I remember everything related to u nupur ,I love from our 8 std,maione bataya than a tumhe " he seemed little annoyed

Oh ho again dat flattering dialogue .samrat my best frind told me mayank once proposed his girlfriend saying this same dialogue .

Mai bilkul sahi thi ladkoke bare mai .are baba jhut kehneki kya jarurat hai .m his wife .uskahi hu .mujse ye sab jhute flattering k kya jarurat .merehi class mate hai wo .use kya lagta hai uska crash list mujhe pata nahi hoga .jhute ,bewkuf . everybody experience several crashes ,infatuations ,ye sab chupane k kya matlab!! As far as I know uska kabhi koi serious affair nahi tha .but I donno why uska ayse jhutse mujhe doubt horaha hai kaghi iska koi serious past to nahi hai .sayed use chupane k liehi itna sweet banna n ………..

Damn shit nupur …..hamesa dawa karti hai k "m positive " mere life k moto hai "be positiove ,think positive n live happy " to aj kahase kaha jarahi hai ? shadi ki hai tune usse .n u know him lil bit too .ayse chotese bat se kitni bari shak ke raste pe le ja rahi hai .chill .

but belive ,faith .i know him lil bit realy but is dat enough to believe some1 or to have faith some1?

Arrange marriage k faisla terahi tha .aur arrange mrg pe tu shadise pehle aur kitna jan payegi?wo tujse pyar na karta to kya 5 sal pehle tere rejection k pehle bhi aj tak wait karta??? Kyun negative sochta hai

phir usne jhut kyun kaha?

Itna mat soch …..instead of being at his place u cant judge wo kaunsi bat kyun kaha?log jhut acchai k lie bhi bolta hai .n moreover its not such a serious jhut .he may liked u .chilll.ayse sochegi to tu kabhi use thikse jan nahi payegi .n it will create misunderstanding .agr tujhe use thikse janna hai ,dosti badana hai ,is shadiko kamiab karna hai to tujhe uspe blv karna hoga .bina use thikse jane u cant judge him .abhi tere maksat bas use thikse janna hai n is rishte ko age badana hai .

"nupur ,kya hua ?kaha kho gaye?" mayank asked

"wo kuch nahi ,m sleepy" wid dat I drift off to sleep trying hard to remove all negative thought from my mind .reciting again n again " be positive ,think positive n live happy"

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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Very nice update.Awesome.Loved it 2 d core.Keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
a wonderful update...

the dream by God... to nuprish.. and morning joke was amazing

but this isnt right nupur has

Accepted him in her life she has too accept him ...he has been trying to be as caring and as respectful to him as much as he can... and she is actually not even giving a dam...

donot like it

PS: on ur rply...chalo bhi thik hai hum sab bhi yahin milay gay tum ko... live coments sunay k tum se .,..
aur akar yeah tumhari copy hai tu apny risht per aetibar rekha kero.. ur faith is there existance.. nothing else is

wonderful updated

cont soon

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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