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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
nice updt
loving nupur's characterization..she is cute
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awwe it was a very nice update kheya...
u portrayed nupz feeling amazingly
thnx fr updating ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

nic update ..

hmm so nupur is so afraid of mayank ..
wanna read more about their journey...
do cont. soon
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
very nice update kheya.

u protrait nupurs feeliing properly.

it was awesome n sometime funny too.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
nice part...👏👏
nupur is too difficult to understand...
and her words.." koi aur tareeka nahi hai kya,..."🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
I like Nupur..lol very nice part...continue soon and thanx for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
waiting for the next part..
please do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

PART : 4

AS I pretended to sleep I heard the footstep entered in the room n it made me horrified as it forwarded towards the bed n finaly sat beside me n my fear came back .what kind of person he is !! why he came n sat beside me when he can clearly see that m sleeping .then suddenly a thought crossed me .what if he try to touch me n all .oh no …I wont care who he is .if he misbehaves n force me I will not leave him .i resoluted .when I was curshing him then suddenly I heard a suppressed laughter of him n in a instant I opend my eyes n peeped at him

" tum bohothi bure actress ho nupur u know if u shut ur eyes widout sleeping eyeballs will move more n dats y its easy to catch if some1 pretend to sleep" he gave me full lecture n I sat up

What the hell he thinks of himself .he might have always stood first in his life n light be most brilliant student of our batch but it does not mean that he will give lecture on our first night n moreover I myself is not a bad student .damn it .dats y I never wanted to marry any brilliant student .they always try to show their talent n knowledge n never romanmtic but problem is I can stand stand unromantic husband but never a foolish one who don't keep any knowledge n update of world . this time I suppressed my laughter .i thought as if I decided to marry mayank n he was my choice .true he was my batchmate but I have rarely talked wid him ,it must be only 3 or 4 times in school n coll life n sometimes chated on facebook .thats all.

"now ,why are u smiling?"he questioned

"nothing ,bas was laughing on ur silly lecture ,jo knowledge tum abhi abhi jahir kia na wo to ek cotese bache ko bhi pata hoga"

"wo accha ,itnahi pata hai to tumhe blanketse face cover up karke pretend karna chahie than na "

"kyaaa,dekho tum mujhe nataunki k teaching denewale ho kya? Tum samajhte kya ho apne apko ha? N by d way I was not pretending ,I was just trying to sleep"

"o realy? Ok den change first n den come to sleep"

"but where I will? U don't have any attached bath n neither any dressing room" I look at him little embarrashed

"well ,m going to balcony ,u close the windows n doors n den change "

Mayank was about to escape the room when I remind about my hair n called him out for help

"umm mayank …."

"kya hua?"

"wo ….mai ….matlab …wo meri bal ….they used so many clips n tied it in such a difficult way ,I need help to open it ,I mean can u help me?"

"ok ,m sitting dere ,u try n ask me if u need help " saying this he sat on bed wid a magazine .

I sat infront of the mirror n started trying to open my hair n he kept reading dat magazine .

Had hai ,I asked him to help me not to sit beside me wid magazine like a statue .unromantic creature .husbands supposed to steal glances at their wives in such situation n here he ……

I was curshing him looking down n trying my hand to open my hair when he came n removed my hand from my hair .i shuddered at his n looked at him wid surprise through the mirror .

" bal niche nahi hai ,upar hai ,ayse niche dekhke bal khologe to it will hurt " saying this he started removing my hair pin .

Damn this man ,lecture k siwa bat nahi kar saktekya!!

While removing hairpins suddenly his hand brushed on my ear n shoulder n I had a strange sensation .i closed my eyes n opened in a jerk .what the heck I m feeling .is dis what man n wife feel while …..chiii .i should not feel like dis n should not think about all dis .i moved away

"I will manage the remaining ,now I wanna change "

After changing he reentered in the room .

"nupur ,u go n sleep ,I will join later ,u must be tired "

I looked at him little embarrashed n took my place on bed just at the edge .

"aramse ,darneki jarurat nahi hai ,I will put a pillow between usn if u not confortable then tell me ,I will sleep on floor"

"no ,nahi ,its ok" I sighed "mujhe kya prob hogi ,mujhe koi prob nahi hai ,thx"

He smiled at me n sat on his wid that magazine again .

Though I tried to sleep but it was away from me .i was missing gunjan n my bed ,n my room n my pc .every night I spend huge time on net .m missing my onl9 friends .

"nupur what happened,is the light disturbing u ?are u missing gunjan" asked him

"yaaa ,n m missing my pc too " I replied sitting up

"what????" he was surprised

"m missing my onl9 friends ,my home n gunjan n …."

He laughed at me

"why the hell are u laughing .u know friends are imp part of my life ,every night on net I talk wid dem n now m missing dem ,missing chating wid dem ,gossiping id gunjan ,dining wiod parents" I was about to cry

"u crying!!!!"

"wats dere to be surprised?"

"no ,wo actualy ,u are the first bride who had not cried in her bidai n now u doing"

"wo ,dats because I never wanted my parents to break down ,u know agr mai roti to ma-baba dono bhi suru ho jate ,n mai unse rote hue nhi dekh sakti ,it hurts ,mai unke udasi bhi nahi she sakti n ashu to …."I was about to shob

"u can take my laptop n join ur friends "he smiled at me

"realyyy????" I almost shouted controlling my shob

I opened facebook n he loked at the pc screen eagerly…

"what?"I asked …tum mere fb id pe jasoosi karoge kya?like typican husbands?"

"no,no …..wo just ,I think ….u should change ur relationship status ,."

"wo ya ………it has changed na!!! "

I changed it n the first coment came from mayank ahmed

"congrats" I looked at him surprised and he showed me his mobile smiling which I returned

I looked at my status.life has changed n I need to accept this changes smoothly .i m not good at this task ,I can never accept changes n my past always haunt be ,be it better or worse dan present .but wid this change I need to change my this habit too .wid lots of love ,lots of new relations ,lots of problems n lots of compromise I have to make my present n future blissfull wid dis person .i looked at mayank who was busy in reading again .i smiled at him unknowing .i have to turn this I n u in a we .its tough for me but I will make our life blissfull


p.s : plz purdon my errors .i did not get time to rechek before posting n i know i make lots of typing mistake .try to understand them wid ur own help n forgive me for dat .😛😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice ff!
i liked all the parts...interesting story
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
waoo...
its such beautiful update...just loved it to core...

Mayank was too god...it cracked me whn he laughed at pretending sleep so right...

but he is really good person who was doing all tht he can to make her comfortable... amazing..

hay..online fnrds...ek din kheya bhi yeahi bol rahi hogi...pata chala usko wedding thread per woh raat ko hi online...

lovly...n pls cont soon

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