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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART :6

"Nupur ,nupur, jaldi uth ja .shadi ho gaya par e ladki pe jimmidari namka koi chese abhi bhi nahi dikhraha mujhe ,nupurrr "

"kya hai maaa ,shone do naaa ,mayank bhi to sohiraha hai "

"damatji soraha hota to mai teri kamre mai ake ayse chillati kya? Dimag kyat ere E-MALL pe bechke ayi hai?"

"kyaaa ,mayank chala gaya????"

"ha diii ,kyun ?? gussa ho?tumhe batake nahi gaya islie??? Ohhooo"

"shut up gunjan ,par kab gaya wo?mujhe to patahi nahi laga"

"wo kayse lagega di?tum to abhi tak unhike sapno mai …….ayse sapno mai kya kya romance chalraha tha di?cencord dream to nahi?"

"gunjannn ,lagtaha hai aj-kal tere dimag cencored line pe bohot jorse chalraha hai .ayse ye mayank mujhe uthaya kyun nahi?"

"tumhare pati devtako tumhare pyare pyare sapne bohot pasand hai ,unhe usmai hot romance karneka mauka jo milta hai ,isilie tumhe nahi uthaya "

"gunjannn ,tujhe to maiii "

"nupur ,ladai bad mai ,pehle break fast to karlo"

After breakfast I was arranging my bed just den I noticed a paper under his pillow .i became confused .paper kahase a gaya?i opened the letter n to my astonishment I noticed it was for me n from mayank !!!!

NUPUR ,

M going early morning so had not wake u up .u seemed to be dreaming (I wish it was about me ).well wont bother u more ,just wanted to tell k ma has said dat till I come back u can stay here .so enjoy till I comeback .the day I will be back I will take u at our home .if aunty bother u about this just made her either talk wid me or ma .u take care .will talk u later on phone .love u .

Yours mayank

The last part of his letter sent a shiver through my body .i was proposed numerous time in my life .n during thos I was surprised ,stunnes,shocked,scared ,nervous but this feelings is something new .he had not even said dat .m just reading it still .wats dis?? N YOURS MAYANK …….this part has created a sence of responsibility in me n what .something was weired but I was clueless.

I read it again .aunty is so lovely n caring .aysahi saural to mai chahti thi .unknowingly I smiled den suddenlu someone snatched the letter from my hand

"ahhaaa ,shadi k bad love letter ,jiju is kafi romantic ,by gawd di u smiling reading his letter ,jijuneto jadoohi kar dia"

"gunjan letter de ,n kya laga rakha hai ?ye koi love letter nahi hai"

"tumhe waps karne k lie thodi na li hai ,ah haaa love uuu ,yours mayank wah wah kitna pyar ,ye loveletter nahi to kya di?"

"tujhe to ………"

CRINGGG

"lo ,lo ,uthao ……..jijukahi phone hoga"

I was too nervous to lift up the phone .i was always shy in talking on phone n when it comes about mayak I donno why I become too shy .i took the phone n was about to lift up but the call ended n taking the opportunity I kept the phone in silent mood n went from there.

In the evening I went out with gunjan for shoping .i so hate shoping but this gunji she just love to roam from shop to shop n I cant help but follow her wid bitter face .

When I came back ma shouted

"a gaye dono maharani n bare maharani ,aap ko bhol gaye ho k ab ap kumara nahi ho"

"kya ma .ab kumara nahi hu to mai shoping main a jau kya?"

"aysa nahi kaha maine but teri ek aur zimmidari bhi yad rakhna ,damad ji subhase pata nahi kitnebar call kia tujhe ,reply na pake land phone pe call kia tha ,subhae ek bar bhi call nahi kia kya tune?"

I was caught n lowered my eyes in embarrashment .i know I should have atleastr sent a msg to him asking weather he has reached safely or not .its not dat I was feeling anxious about him just out of my duty I wanted but every time ended up not sending wid shyness or nervourness I donno .

"abhi ake call karo unhe "

I reached t phone n tok it .from morning it wa under my pillow in silent mood .the light of screen flashed n dere was 100 misscall from mayank !!!!! befoire I could call him he called. N wid a guilty feeling n nervousness as well I took up

"hlw nupur …..kya bat hai?why are u not picking up phone?"

"sorry mayank ,wo last night before sleeping I kept the silent mood n subha bhool normal mood dena ,n subhase phone use bhi nahi kia to "

"ek bar socha bhi nahi k weither I have reached safely or not ?"

"wo ……mai .wooo,u reached safely na? n how was your meeting?"

"f9 for both ,accha nupur kahi tum mujse naraz to nahi ho k I lft widout proper bye ,wo bhi shadi k dusre din?"

"nahi mayank ,m not dat sensitive girl,Itnisi bat pe koi gussa kyun hoga? N mujhe as anise kisipe gussa nahi ata except ma,baba n gunjan "

"hmmm………………." There was a sigh

"accha mai rakhti hu ,abhi ayi hu bahar se"

"kaha gaye the?"

"shoping pe"

"kiske sath?"

"gunjan k ….abhi jau?"

"nupur is there any problem? Mai jab bhi tumhe call karti hu tum ek do replu k bat phone hang up karne ki bahane dhunte ho "

"mayank …wo actualy …maine tumhe bataya than na m never comfortable on phone .phone uthake hlw bolne k bad mujhe kuch bolne ko miltahi nahi .mai apne frnds k sath bhi rarely phone pe bat karti hu ."

"accha thik hai phir mai tumhe msg veja karungi aur tum reply jaroor karna ,koi imp bat ho phir call karungi ,done?"

"mayank ye kya bachpana hai ? aur mujhe accha nahi lagta koi mere har batpe nazar rakhe ,khana khaya k nahi ,bahar gaye the to kiske sath ,kya pehenk n all"

"nupur suno …….dusroke bat alag hai but we are husband wife .chote chote bate share karnese hamara communication barega n is rishte k majbutik taraf chote chote kadam bhi "

"accha thik hai ,abhi jauu?????"

" Accha byeee " he chuckled

Hanging up the phone I thought about him .he was right n its not new I myself very well know dat ,m not dat immature or stubborn kinda girl but I cant help but being uncomfortable n annoyed when some1 ask those silly questions .but its true at first step dose silly bat-chit hio strong cpmmunication k suruat hoga .

Common nupur ……in relationship ho ya shadi commitment n compromise is must .comprise not only for your partner but for yourself too .do alag alag duniase aye hue log sath rahenge to they ofcourse donoke lifestyle n nature match nahi hoga n for happy relationship two nture n lifestyle k fution karna parega .aysebhi ab futionkahi jamana hai .so just chill

After dinar I was about to open my PC then my phone beeped

"had dinar??"

"ya, u had?"

"um ha …chinese ,your fav,what are u doing now?"

"I want my share ,n nothing ,what about u?"

"just go to any chinese restaurant n have your share ,kisne rokha hai? M about to sleep ,thought to say u good night n wish u sweet dream s ,though I know now u will sit on FB still early wish "

"lol ya ,m just about to log in to fb "

"ok u njoy ,m to sleepy ,good night sweet dream"

"good nighyt ,sweet dream "

" 😃 "

Finishing this message chat I looked at my mobile screen re-read all the conversation .fpor the first time I did ot felt irritated rather felt nice n …….ya happy .suddenly I realized I was smiling like fool .

Tapping my head I concentrated on pc wid a light n happy mind which I felt after long few weeks .

N that contented smile was stamped on my face n to my astonishment I noticed my mind is not finding it foolishg anymore😲

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
aww such a nice update...

loved it...
i so like his patient behavior... she is complelety unknown to the facts of bonding a relationship... but she is learning... and i m loving the way he is giving her all the space she wants...

lovely part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
loving the character of nupur very much..
very nice part kheya

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
nice udpate.

nupur was so weird, bt she learning very fast, how to build their relationship ... loved her.

loved mayank ... he was so nice ... n he gave her all time to adjust her new relation ... loved him.

very nice update.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update. Pls add me in your PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm...I am kinda liking nupur..lol she is weird but i like her character...
nice update..continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb part yaar,...👏
it was amazing,...i want to read it more but it ended,...
do continue it soon,...waiting for the next part eagerly,...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U write!!!!!!!!! :O
plzzz do pm me next time...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HLW FRNDS .wishing u all a ADVANCE eid mubarak.
after long time m back wid my UPDATE .actualy m not happy wid the responce of this FF .i was determined to suspend it but only on req of FIZA m updating it .PLZ let me know whether i should cont it or not .


WELL I think all must have forgot prev story .so here goes a RECAP .
THx FIZA for writing it

nupur and mayank got married. As per arranged marriage rituals.. for mayank he is love with her and Nupur can also feel it yet she doesn't believes it or rather doont want to believe itshe is kinda scared. That how the life will be further..mayank has given her all the freedom to except it...
They got married.she acted as if she is asleep on her wedding night to escape any intimacy yet he caught her ..and let her have her ways. .including chatting with her online frnds and saying them GN in there wedding night..yet his ways let her belive they can make a way to bliss ..mayank do at times even reminded her tht he loves her from there skool life yet hse felt it very chessy. Mayank went to Mumbai for his sum urgent work promising a honeymoon at Kashmir..her favt place..and a new life at Mumbai

Being out of station he tried to talk with her on calls yet she was scared n nervous tht she ended up escaping tht he too noticed and asked if she is oky with this all knowing her nervouness he asked her to talk to him on text and she felt really nice talking to him like tht



PART : 7


"chayeee ,chayeee "

"besan k papri lenge ,besan k papri ,taza taza besan k papri "

"haye aye hai dilli ka laddu ,jo khaya wo pastaya ,jo nahi khaya wo bhi pastaye ,kise chahie dilli ka laddu"

"yeee chana bhaja ,garam garam chanaaa "

All dese sounds are buzzing in my ear n its making my face bitter n bitter .i was so excited when mayank told me dat we will be going KASHMIR ,my dream place ,by train .i just love train journey .it give so much pleasant views .natural beaty ,n sath mai we get to observer so many ppl ,so mamny stories .as if EK CHALTA HUA NOVEL K PAGE .aur sath mai street food ka mela by gawd .i just want every food to taste on train journey .but ……..

"Jahatak mujhe yad hai aj breakfast pe karela to nahi tha na ,nupur?"

"Karela???? Nahi to !!!" I was surprisd by his sudden question

"Phir tum ayse karela k mu banake kyun baithe ho?jahatak mujhe yad hai tumhe train bhi pasand hai aur Kashmir bhi !!!!"

"mayank ,hum first class mai kyun jarahe hai ?"

"tumhe first class nahi pasand? Maine to khas tumhare lie ye AC compartment book kia!!!!"

"book kia matlab!!! Is kamre mai aur koi pssanger nahi hoga?"

"nahi ,hamare naye naye shadi huaa ,humhe thora privacy chahie na ! "he winked

privacyyy!!! What the hell he is talking abt!!!!i bit my nail .mai to bhul hi gayi thi k honeymoon matlab ………hey khuda ab kya hoga!i was taking it as a outing,where well ,we might be able to be frndly but privacy!!!matlab I don't love him na n how come widout loving him I can ,come on nupur u r mrd n he has r8 over u ,r8 k aysi k taysi .ye koi bat hui ,ek kagaz pe dastkhat kya kar dia to use mujpe r8 agaya ,had hai rules ka ,shadise pehle kisike sath pyarse intimate ho to wo galat aur shadi k bad bina pyar k zabardasti bhi karo to wo sahi ..are pehle manke rishta to banna chahie ,but he claims he loves u na he might want dese,but I never have told him k I love him,but u never said k u don't .wo hell crap I have not cleared myself yet to him .but timehi kab mila! I was pland to tell him k I cant take dat step untill any feelings grow in me for him but pata nahi shadi k rat bhul kayse gayi!!!

"nupur ,kya hua ?kaha kho gaye?"

"mayank wo mai wo mere matlab " by gawd nupur where ur confidence have gone! Tere bol bas ma aur gunjan k samnehi khulte hain by gawd .accha ek kam kar ankhe close kar n think k gunjan standing infront of u phir bol de .had hai nupur .ma bilkul sahi hai shadi k waqt tu apna dimag apne maykehi chorke ayi hai .jo bat shadi ,love n intimacy se judi hui hai wo bat tu gunjanse karneka imagination kayse kar sakti hai? Dekh himmat kar .patike samne abhi confident nahi dikhaye tozindegibhar wo tujhe chelate ayega n tu bhaish banker reh jayegi .i was preparing to tell him n so closed my eyes but before dat he called me .

"nupur ,bahar dekho ,what a beautiful sight "

I looked outside .we are on a bridge .the river water is sparkling by sun ray ,blue river has got a golden glow .small boats roaming ,little children juming in the river from a small tree .its such a plesant scenary ,the simplicity of those ppl n deir simple happiness is so infectious dat u are bound to be happy ,feel like u r in heaven .BUT THIS GLASS OF THE WINDOW urggg

"its beautiful na ,nupur?"

"kya mayank ,I hat this AC compartment .trains window must be opened .wind will blow ur hair .tumhe pata hai world k sabse beautiful flag hai larkio k bal!! n when wind blow on u it make u feel such serene n it feel like u r living the life of those simple ppl. chote chote bacche running beside trains ,gaoki bahue apne ghungat k nichese bohot excitementse train ko dekhte hai .kuch farmers khet mai kam karte hai to kuch farmers k naye naveli dulhan pyarse use lunch karwrahe hai .sab kuch kitne payare lagta hai .n I feel like only through that wind I can feel dem "

While talking all dese I went to another world par phir yad aya I cant enjoy all dese in dis train journey .i looked angrily at mayank n was taken aback .he is looking at me smilingly .or I must say he is staring at me .i felt embarrassed at his stare ,he has something in his eyes dat feeling me goosegump .but I controlled myself

"mayankkk ,kya hua?" I hit him on his was shoulder

"kuch nahi ,wo ,ummm ayse tum wiondow view to abhi bhi enjoy kar sakte ho na "

"kaha mayank ,through glass dekhnese aysa lagta hai k TV pe dekhrahi hu " I pouted n he chukled

"Dekho mayank tum ayse bat bilkul mat hasna ,tum ne to train k mazahi barbad kar dia .train mai dher sare log hoga ,street foods wale ,hawkers ayega ,hum khayenge ,diff logoko dekhenge yehi to train k asli maza hai na!!!!! n yaha AC compartment mai darwaja lock hoga ,koi a nahi sakega ,uparse u bookd it !!"

"hahaha ,ab ayi wapas asli nupur ,abhitak when u were talking abt dose rural views I was feeling like mai kisi philosopher ya phir classic writer k sath baitha hu "he chuckled

"r u making fun of my feeling?"

"are nai nupur ,seriously ,I never knew u have a depth of thinking .i thought u r a light hearted girl"

"heloww ,r u trying to call ME silly in a round about way ? "

"are nahi nupur "

"dekho ,I might not be book worm like u ,sorry u must be called noteworm ,by gawd mujhe yad hai class mai ayse note lete the jayse ki sir agr chikhenge to tum wo bhi copy karoge .mujhe pakka yaken hai k tum har books k publisher k nam bhi yad karte the .by gawd tum t 3 idiots k silencer jayse ho ."

"accha to tum mujhe itna notice kia karte the?" he winked

"ha tumhe leke comedy circus k joke banake lie ,MR bakra kahike ,bakre k tarha bina soche samjhe sab kuch kha lete ho ,aur mujhe silly kehte hai "

"nupur ayse meri beizzati to mat karo na ,dekho tum agr bakre k biwi ho to it will affect ur reputation too "

Had hai yar ,kud k galti to manta nahi mujhe insult pe insult kie jarahe hai I was about to give him long lecture this time but he stoppd me

"accha baba sorry ,chalo tomhare mood thik karne k lie tumhare fav song sunte hai "

I was hell angry at him ,I have heard dat ppl who never stood second in life has a habit of thinking others silly n seems he too like dat .URGGG I so hate such ppl …….i was gneeshing my teeth but den d song played n dat brought smile on my face n I was surprised too .how he knows my fav song!!!

Ae poth Jodi na sesh hoi

Tobe kemn hoto tumi bolo to

Jodi prithibita sopner desh hoi

Tobe kemon hoto tumi bolo to

[if this path never ends

How dat would be , sweetheart

If the world become a dreamland

How dat would be tell me sweetheart]

Kon rakhale oi ghor chara bashi te sobuje

Oi dol dol hasite rakhale

Kon ghor chara basite sobuje

Oi dol dol hasite mon amar mishe gele besh hoi

Jodi prithibita sopner desh hoi

Tobe kemon hoto tumi bolo to

BOLBO NA

UM Ae poth Jodi na sesh hoi

Tobe kemn hoto tumi bolo to

[which shpeherd

played its tune and made me want to quit home

for the green fields

swayed its head in laughter

i wish my heart could join them too

If the world become a dreamland

How dat would be, tell me sweetheart

I WONT

Um if this path never ends

How dat would be sweetheart]

Nil akashe oi dur sima charie ei gan

Jeno jai aj harie akase

Oi dur sima charie ei gan

Jeno jai aj harie,prane Jodi eganer resh roi

Jodi prithibita sopner desh hoi

Tobe kemon hoto tumi bolo to

TUMI BOLO

UM Ae poth Jodi na sesh hoi

Tobe kemn hoto tumi bolo to

[our song should get mix in the blue skies

overcoming all barriers

i wish this song also rule our herarts

If the world become a dreamland

How dat would be, tell me sweetheart

U do

Um if this path never ends

How dat would be sweetheart]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPErEox2hws

"ayse nupur ,I realy want this path nevr to end ,m enjoying our first train journey n ur first gussa " he smiled at me making me stunned .

Our first train journey is it dat much important!!!ya it should be nupur tune apna serials aur movies mai nahi dekha ? pehla train journey ,pehla tea sab important .phir mujhe kuch special kyun nahi laga .i wanna move on wid him ,I wanna make my mrd life blissfull n successful par ….

Aur gussa!!! He likes my gussa? Pehle gussa .ye bhi yadgar hai !Wo kyun? Are pagal tujhe nahi pata!!! Pati-patni k bich jhagrahi pyar ko strong karta hai .par mee dil mai to ayse koi feelings hi nahi hai phir pyar kayse karega n more over ….

"kya hua nupur? Abhi bhi naraz ho?"

He broke my spell of thought .i smiled at him faintly

"mayank I was not naraz ,I just felt bad n aysebhi ma-baba aur gunjan k siwa kisipe mai generaly gussa hoti nahi ,aur ho bhi jati hu to bus for mere seconds or minutes ,so u chill"

He sighd at my answer n his smile somehow vanished though he tied to hold it .n I was again confused .

I badly want to love him ,I badly want ……………phir kyun ……

Suddenly I felt scared ,very much scared n to make my self confident I looked outside….




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