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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
beautiful OS
loved loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
LOVED IT! im left breathless once again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
beautifully written. really enjoyed reading the OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice OS...loved how you showed Arnav's guilt...and the ending bit was fabulous!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I loved how he repented 
I loved how this was written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Very nicely written. Blending the original scene of crime to his realization of her innocence - poetic!

The end, though abrupt, is probably not very unreal! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wow it's beautiful shreya 👏
U r awesome🤗
Thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
I hate what I see now a days in IPKKND.  So what if it is IPL?  The excuse for poor storyline is lame.
 
I enjoyed reading your OS...I may not comment on your OS/FF everytime. I am supposed to be concentrating on something else.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
that was indeed very beautifully written... 
Oh how I would too love to see arnav crazily begging for months...
loved how he knew she would leave & waited for her outside...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Beautifully written. Loved it (:
please continue.