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-monalisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

I love your writing style!

Yes, the ending was a bit unexpected going from the tone of the narration, but still a wonderful read like all your work! 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

Woweee bumble bee :p
this was egg-static :p
loved it
the remorse and everything!

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--drama_queen--

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice OS.

i wish there was part 2 of it.

btw lolz i thot i was the first one who commented.

but i am the 3rd one now.

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curiousbookworm

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Posted: 13 years ago

sooo sweet! its a one shot ? DARN !! i loved it ...

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 13 years ago

noice :-D
hope we get to see this soon on the soap...
I've had enough of comedy, I tell ya!! :-X :-P

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice os. I really can't wait until arnav realizes how wrong he is. I do hope khushi forgives him, but not too quickly. I liked the end of your os. She didn't completely forgive him; he would still have to work hard to earn her trust and love back. Btw, this is kind of off topic, but i saw your sig. Did you watch the hunger games?

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purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

RES :)

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OMG! Loved it!

Thanks for the pm!

Loved how he is really repenting now..

Khushi going in without protest was different.. For some reason, I thought she would put up a huge fight..

Anyways, really enjoyed the update... Are you thinking of continuing?? Cause you should!

Love,

Simi

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Nameera

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Posted: 13 years ago

ohh this is lovely read the first para then cam down to res!!

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Damn it second page by one post!! oh well...Loved the writing loved, reading something new from you!! 👏You are awesome as always!! Also i loooved that he threw her suitcase away and decides for her again! never gonna change that man...but we love him anyway!

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Oh nice! I love that he snatches the bag and actually throws it away! Go and get it hahaha and then without notice carries her inside. The contrast you made between when he carried her inside the first time, right after marriage, to him carrying her now is awesome! Lovely os!