Aashiq banaya apne-fanfiction

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Part-2......Kunal:u r joking right?i no that u r ...
                                                      Naina:no,i'm serious
                                                      K:naina?
                                                      N:yes.its better 2 b away from
                          each other
                                                      K:what r u telling?
                                                      N:i mean it
                          K:what do u mean?
                                                      K keeps his arms on her face
                                                      N:leave me kunal
                                                      K:u don't like me touching u
                                                      N:no,since u r nobody 2 me now

                                                      K:what did u say?look at my
                          eyes & tell
                          N:kunal...my dad has fixed my wedding with another guy.
                          K was shattered:what?then what did u say?
                                                      N:i said ok
                                                      K:what ?but we were planning 2
                          marry each other no
                          N:marriage with u?i was not all serious about it.but ya
                                                      i did'nt mind marrying u.but
                          when a better proposal
                                                      comes how can i reject?u r
                          just a degree.not so
                                                      bright.but my guy is smart.has
                          got a nice job in
                                                      states.its natural that when a
                          better guy comes we will
                                                      go 4 ...
                                                      K:enuff naina.plz don't tell
                          anything more.plz don't go
                                                      away naina
                                                      Tears cum out from his eyes
                          N:u r boy.then also u r crying?shame kunal.my guy is not

                                                      cheap 2 cry like this like
                          girls
                          K wipes his tears: naina...plz don't go
                                                      N:i'm sorry kunal.bye....
                                                      N goes.
                                                      K goes crying 2 sharada.he hugs
                          her:mom....i lost
                                                      everything
                                                      S:what happened beta?
                                                      K:naina left me 4 another
                          guy.he's very brilliant,she
                                                      said.not a muff like me
                                                      S:don't cry kunal.that girl is
                          ignorent.Everything
                                                      happens 4 gud.u'll get a
                          better girl who understands
                                                      u.she'll luv u
                                                      K:but she won't b my naina
                                                      S:but she'l b better than
                          naina

                                                      Months passed....kunal becomes
                          really an irresponsible &
                                                      useless guy.Goes out with
                          friends.Drinks,smokes,comes
                                                      home late,wakes up according 2
                          his wish.His parents r
                                                      upset about it

                                                      Kunal's dad Mayank gets a
                          letter from his childhood
                                                      friend
                                                      Anand.He is thrilled.
                                                      M:sharada…Anand & neeta r
                          going 4 a gulf tour.That
                                                      time his only daughter nimmo
                          is coming 2 stay here
                                                      S:really?we've seen her when
                          she was a baby
                                                      M:ya,now she has grown big
                                                      S:she is brought up at
                          USA.will she like this place?
                                                      M:she is Anand's &
                          neeta's daughter.she'll hav
                                                      gud culture
                                                      S smiles.
                                                      WAIT 4 NIMMO

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plz continue im waiting for the next part

Part-3.....Kunal is drinking in the club near 2 his
                                                      house.His mind is full of
                          naina's parting words.
                                                      He weeps.song of his painful
                          memories:tharapt....
                                                      He goes near the window.he
                          sees a girl coming out of the
                                                      car & walking.
                                                      He remembers sharada's words
                          that he'l get a girl who wil
                                                      luv him.
                                                      He goes 2 his friends:hey,a
                          pretty girl...
                                                      His friends:wow!where?
                                                      K:look out thru the windows

                                                      They look.they see no1.they
                          become irritated:no1 is
                                                      there
                                                      K looks:she was there.i saw
                          her.she had soft hair.
                                                      1 pal:soft hair?4 that did u
                          touch & feel?
                                                      Every1 laughs.
                                                      K:jeans & top
                                                      1 guy:u r drunk.so u feel so
                                                      K:no,defenetely i saw.i feel
                          that this is the girl whom
                                                      my mom talked about.
                                                      THey feel pity 4 him.
                                                      They:yes kunal,u'll get a
                          better girl than naina who
                                                      cheated on u.but we do not no
                          who that girl is

                                                      It was Nimmo whom kunal
                          saw.she is given a grand welcome
                                                      by kunal's parents.
                                                      Sharada:u've become so big.that
                          time u were tiny.a cute
                                                      baby.i used 2 carry in my
                          arms.
                                                      Nimmo smiles:i miss those
                          period eventho i don't
                                                      remember that
                                                      Mayank:nimmo beti,u r brought
                          up at USA.will u like this
                                                      place
                                                      N:no,there is no question
                          about it.bcoz i already liked
                                                      this place
                                                      All smile.
                                                      N:very beautiful
                          place.naturality is filled up in this
                                                      air.Eventho i was in USA i
                          kept up our culture.
                                                      S:we r going 2 giv a wonderful
                          dinner
                                                      N:no aunty.2day's dinner is by
                          nimmo
                                                      They were surprised.
                                                      N goes 2 the kitchen.
                                                      S:what a sweet & luvly girl!
                                                      M:ya...

                                                      THey all taste N's dinner.they
                          r impressed
                                                      M:so tasty
                                                      S:u cook nicely like ur mom
                          neeta
                                                      N:thanks a lot.by the way
                          where is ur son kunal?when wil
                                                      he cum?i want 2 meet him
                                                      M:he'll cum after
                          midnight.gets up in the noon.u can see
                                                      him 2morrow nimmo.

                                                      Next morning...
                                                      N:kunal did'nt get up?
                                                      S:now he won't
                                                      N:let me go & giv him a
                          surprise

                                                      N knocks his door.K who was
                          sleeping gets
                                                      irritated.
                                                      K:don't u allow me 2 sleep?
                                                      N knocks again.
                                                      K gets fed up & he opens the
                          door.N slips & falls on
                                                      him.both of them hav fallen
                          down.N on K's chest.

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cute , waiting for the next part very eagerly 😃

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm so romantic 😳 .
post soon.

Part-4.....NImmo gets up.Kunal was surprised:who r u?
                                                      Suddenly sharada cums.
                                                      N pretends 2 b crying.
                                                      S:what happened?
                                                      N:this guy pushed me down.i
                          fell down
                                                      S becomes angry:Kunal!u did it
                          bcoz she tried 2 wake u up

                                                      K:no mom,she is lying.i dunno
                          who she is
                                                      N:no aunty..i told him that
                          i'm nimmo;Anand's & nita's daughter from USA
                                                      K:so this is the girl mom told
                          about?
                                                      S:u r talking as if u dunno
                          anything.she is the 1 who
                                                      is staying here
                                                      K:ok
                                                      S:i'll tell his dad.he'll giv
                          him nice punishment
                                                      K:oh mom...
                                                      N:no need aunty.its ok.
                                                      Nimmo winks at kunal b4
                          going.K was embarassed.suddenly
                                                      he thinks:this is the girl
                          whom i saw yesterday evening
                                                      K smiles:mayb she is the dream
                          girl of mine.lets see
                                                      K smiles.


                                                      Kunal tells his friends:u ppl
                          teased me that the girl I
                                                      saw is only an imagination.she
                          is nimmo.My dad's
                                                      best friend's only
                          daughter.she stays in my house now
                                                      Friends:what?really?
                                                      K:ya.2day morning she holded
                          my arms & told that she'll
                                                      wait 4 me
                                                      They:really?u r so lucky


                                                      Kunal looks 4 the liqour bottles &
                          cigerrettes in his
                                                      cupboard.He did'nt find
                          anything.
                                                      Nimmo cums :what r u looking 4
                          kunal?
                                                      K was speechless
                                                      N:I no .i destroyed everything

                                                      K was shocked:how dare u get
                          into my room in my
                                                      absense?I'll complain
                                                      N:o! really?if u tell,I'll
                          tell ur parents that u smoke
                                                      & drink.ur dad will kick u out
                          of the house
                                                      K was tensed:plz nimmo,don't
                          tell them
                                                      N:ok,but on 1 demand.u've 2
                          get up early & cum with me 4
                                                      jogging
                                                      K was very lazy.but since
                          there was noother option
                                                      he:ok..
                                                      N:good boy