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Part-13…..Inside the room,Vikrant tells nimmo:what did u
                                                      decide about our wedding?when
                          shud it b there?
                                                      Kunal opens the door quickly
                                                      V becomes angry:how dare
                          u?don't u hav any manners?
                                                      K:I'm sorry
                                                      V:get lost
                                                      K goes
                                                      Nimmo becomes upset
                                                      V:kunal spoiled the mood
                                                      M:even I lost my mood.so let
                          me go now
                                                      V:but nimmo…
                                                      N:plz vikrant…we'll meet later
                                                      V:ok

                                                      N goes near Kunal:sorry
                                                      K:no need.i'm the 1 who did
                          mistake.but nimmo,whats ur
                                                      actual relation with yug?
                                                      N:our parents want we both 2
                          get married
                                                      K was shocked:what did u tell?

                                                      N:I did'nt say no
                                                      K becomes upset
                                                      N:I did'nt say yes also
                                                      K was relieved
                                                      He smiles


                                                      N's parents cum.they were
                          given a warm welcome by
                                                      Mayank-shaRADA.

                                                      They all chat.
                                                      M:why don't we conduct Kunal's
                          & nimmo's wedding?
                                                      sharada,mayank,kunal smile.
                                                      Anand:what nonsense?how
                          can I giv my daughter 2 a
                                                      low qualified guy?
                                                      They were shocked
                                                      A:now degree is nothing.i'm
                          going 2 conduct my wedding
                                                      with a high qualified chap of
                          Usa ,vikrant.
                                                      S,M,K r shocked
                                                      M:but my son has wealth
                                                      A:so u were looking after my
                          daughter 4 ur son?I never
                                                      expected u 2 b that cheap.i'll
                          never 4giv
                                                      u.nita,nimmo…cum,we'll go
                          from here in this nite
                                                      itself
                                                      M:anand…
                                                      A:shut up
                                                      Nimmo's eyes rose:dad,plz…
                                                      A:cum
                                                      He takes Nimmo & Nita out .N was very
                          sad.K controlled his
                                                      tears
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
please continue................i dont like Kunal crying n upset, 😭............
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
dun make kunnal to cry .. 😭



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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
hey its cool do continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Part-14....Anand,neeta,nimmo take room in a
                          hotel.

                                                      Neeta:we've a grown up daughter &
                          the safest place was
                                                      Mayank's & sharada's house.but
                          here in this hotel...
                                                      A:shut up.did'nt u hear what
                          dileep told?
                                                      Nee:he dd'nt tell that much
                          irritating 2 go away
                                                      A:what?how can a father like
                          me marry nimmo 2 him?
                                                      Nee:but kunal is a nice guy
                                                      A:nice image is not enuff in
                          this world

                                                      Nimmo's eyes were full of
                          tears.Vikrant phones:i came 2
                                                      no everything.i want 2 meet u
                                                      N:not now vikrant.i'm not in a
                          mood.
                                                      V becomes mood out
                                                      N's tears r flowing.suddenly
                          she thinks about the gift
                                                      she got from kunal.she opens
                          it.she was shocked 2 see the
                                                      teddy bear with a heart
                          written i luv u in it as well as
                                                      the valentine's day card:i luv
                          u nimmo….Kunal

                                                      N:oh God!
                                                      N remembers K asking her about
                          his gift that day.
                                                      She turns back.there she was
                          shocked 2 see Vikrant.
                                                      V takes those gifts & see.
                                                      V:so kunal loves u.but now its
                          too late nimmo.that day u
                                                      shud've opened it & see it
                                                      N cries
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
poor Nimmo and Kunal 😭
but since ur the writer and kekta and her creative [ahem] script writers r not i m thinking positive 😉
anyways nice plzz continue soon and plzz unite the love birds soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
luv u kunu 😳 😳 😳 .
gr8 doing plzzzz post soon.& thanks 4 posting so many parts 2gether.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
luv your story plzzzz post soon I want 2 know what happens next cant wait 😊
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#39
Part-15....Nimmo cries:vikrant...
                                                      vikrant's eyes r filled up with
                          tears

                                                      Kunal is sad.his friends r
                          near him.
                                                      1 guy:if u really luv nimmo u
                          hav 2 confess ur luv.
                                                      K:but i'm not sure whether
                          nimmo luvs me
                                                      They:but we feel that she luvs
                          u


                                                      Vikrant meets kunal:Do u luv
                          nimmo?
                                                      K:yes,i luv her
                                                      V:how cud u b so sure about
                          it?
                                                      K:i dunno how 2 explain this
                                                      V:u met nimmo only
                          recently.then how can u say that u
                                                      luv her?i no her since
                          childhood
                                                      K:luv does'nt need time.i luv
                          Nimmo.i want her
                                                      V:see,nimmo is brought up at
                          Usa.so she might behave
                                                      very close 2 u.don't take it
                          as luv
                                                      K becomes dull

                                                      Anand sees kunal's
                          gifts.he becomes angry & he throws
                                                      it away.N cries:plz don't do
                          that dad
                                                      A:shut up

                                                      Anand meets K:plz kunal,plz don't
                          destroy my dreams.as i'm
                                                      nimmo's dad,i've certain
                          dreams about her.plz understand
                                                      my feelings & don't create
                          problems
                                                      K becomes upset

                                                      K was sitting simply near a
                          tree.he was surprised 2 see
                                                      nimmo there
                                                      N:kunal...do u luv me
                                                      WHAT"LL B KUNAL"S answer?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
nic story 👏 but dun make kunnu cry too much .. 😛