Aashiq banaya apne-fanfiction - Page 3

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waiting to see nimmo's reaction abt tht gift ❤️ or  💔 😉Edited by t.r.a.yremix - 18 years ago

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Part-10.....Nimmo thinks:oh!i 4got 2 open kunal's
                                                      gift.how can i tell that?
                                                      N lies:ya....i saw ur gift
                                                      Kunal smiles:how is it?did u
                          like it?
                                                      N was cool in lying:ofcourse,i
                          liked it.very sweet
                                                      K becomes happy
                                                      K thinks:but nimmo is not
                          talking about that...mayb she
                                                      did'nt understand what i meant
                          by that.afterall she's
                                                      from USA
                                                      N was busy fishing.K moves 2 a
                          side.N's mobile kept on
                                                      the rock rings.N does'nt hear
                          it.K takes it
                                                      "hi nimmo,this is vikrant"
                                                      K:sorry wrong no
                                                      V:oh sorry

                                                      Again when it rings N hears &
                          takes it:hi vikrant
                                                      V tells sumthing.N :is it?he
                          wil do any mischievous
                                                      activities...ok...i'l call u
                          later...bye
                                                      N:kunal,so u lied that this is
                          wrong no?
                                                      K was embarassed
                                                      N laughs:u look gud when u get
                          embarassed.
                                                      K smiles

                                                      Kunal's friends tell:U've 2
                          test whther nimmoluvs u
                                                      K:but how?
                                                      They:u pretend 2 b close 2
                          other girls.if she's
                                                      jealous,then that means she
                          lovs u

                                                      Kunal-nimmo go 2 a temple
                                                      N prays & when she cums
                          back,she sees K standing close 2
                                                      2girls.he's laughing &
                          talking .K looks at N 2 no her
                                                      reaction

                                                      What'l b Nimmo's reaction?

👏 nice plzz continue, i think jelousy

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post soon.

Hey awsome parts...let Nimmo play it cool 😆 😆 😆

Part-11....Nimmo:b fast kunal.its getting late
                                                      K smiles:plz wait nimmo
                                                      K is getting more close 2 them

                                                      N gets irritated.N goes near
                          him & grabs his
                                                      hand:cum,we'll go
                                                      They both sit in the car
                                                      N:what was ur romantic
                          expression.i felt that its too
                                                      vulgar
                                                      K smiles
                                                      N:among those 2 who's ur real
                          gf?
                                                      K gets confused what 2
                          say:both
                                                      N was shocked:both?what a gr8
                          flirt u r
                                                      K was embarassed
                                                      K thinks:i did this 2 test
                          nimmo's luv.but now she feels
                                                      that i'm a flirt.oh!
                                                      N:but i dunno why..i did'nt
                          digest ur intimacy with them

                                                      K smiles


                                                      Kunal-nimmo go 2 a textile
                          shop.K puts on the new shirt &
                                                      jeans.
                                                      N was impressed:wow!u look
                          amazing in this
                                                      K smiles:really?
                                                      N:ya.now u look like a rock
                          star
                                                      K smiles:u r the 1st person 2
                          tell that
                                                      N's mobile rings
                                                      Vikrant:hi nimmo,vikrant here
                                                      N:hi,where r u now?
                                                      V:i reached bombay
                                                      N:what?r u joking?
                                                      V:no yaar
                                                      N:really?what a gr8 surprise!
                                                      V:i'll reach u fast
                                                      N:ok
                                                      K:who is vikrant?
                                                      N:oh,i did'nt tell u that.vikrant
                          is my childhood
                                                      friend.we r neighbours.he was
                          my senior in school &
                                                      college
                                                      K was relieved

                                                      Vikrant & kunal dream of
                          nimmo.Song:aapki kashish{aashiq
                                                      banaya...}

                                                      When Kunal-nimmo was sitting
                          on the meadow,surprisingly
                                                      Vikrant cums:hi
                                                      N:vikrant,u...here?
                                                      V smiles
                                                      V:this is kunal?
                                                      N:ya
                                                      V:kunal,can i take ur friend
                          out 4 sumtime?
                                                      K becomes dull

wow new twist in a twisty story 👏 😆 👏 .
keep it up.

part-12.....Kunal:ok
                                                      Vikrant:thanku kunal
                                                      Nimmo:bye kunal
                                                      K:bye nimmo
                                                      N goes with V.
                                                      K becomes sad

                                                      V-N in the car
                                                      V:i feel so happy when u r
                          with me.u no nimmo when i was
                                                      in usa & u were here,i really
                          missed u.now i'm happy
                                                      N smiles

                                                      Vikrant & kunal r mad about nimmo
                          & sings:dilnashi{aashiq
                                                      banaya apne}

                                                      Vikrant phones N:nimmo,why don't
                          we go 4 disco?
                                                      N:ok,leyts call kunal too.
                                                      V was not interested:do u want
                          that?
                                                      N:ya vikrant
                                                      V:ok

                                                      N goes 2 K:kunal,cum get
                          ready.we'll go 4 disco
                                                      K was very happy:ok...
                                                      K gets ready
                                                      K-N go 4 disco.there V was
                          waiting 4 N.
                                                      V:hi nimmo
                                                      He hugs her
                                                      K's face becomes dull
                                                      V:hi kunal
                                                      K:hi
                                                      V:cum nimmo,why don't we
                          dance?
                                                      N:why don't we 3 dance
                          2gether?
                                                      V was'nt interested.but he:ok
                                                      K:no,u both dance
                                                      N:no,u've 2 dance with us
                                                      N pushes him 2 the dance floor

                                                      They 3 dance 2 its the time 4
                          disco...{KHNH}
                                                      Then they dance 2
                          dillagi...{aashiq...}
                                                      N:very nice no.i really
                          enjoyed
                                                      V:nimmo,i want 2 talk 2 u.cum
                          with me 2 the room.kunal,u
                                                      stand out

                                                      V & N go 2 the room
                                                      K becomes uncomfortable
                                                      K:why r they taking this much
                          time 2 cum out?what r they
                                                      doing inside?

Omg Naina tht heartbreaker..how cud he leave Kunu!!😛
This Kunu is unexpected..i thgt he would have the same attitude like he has in the show but he's become a regular devdas..drinking away his sorrows 😭
Well at least this Nimmo was able to change him.