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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am a creature with no memory cells so hardly remember what was said or shown after I have seen an episode -- or what was written after I have read a book. I remember beautiful scenes in the form of still images.

And, I have already forgotten what was said or what happened in today's episode, but I remember a young couple sitting side by side on the floor. It was a Perfect Postcard Shot for me, visually appealing and hundreds of stories can be written based on it.

I have been itching to write something, so here it's:

From here, she looks a little dishevelled, like

a woman in shock and her trust violated.

The young man's countenance wears the look of

compassion. He is there for her, probably

always there for her.

The man's eyes are observing her face, intently

waiting for her to break the silence,

while the woman sits oblivious,

burdened by her own thoughts.

To the ignorant,

the beautiful post card is screaming

It's the image of

Culmination and a New Dawn!

*****

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome writing Daaku... ⭐️ ... could never really read ur works in den (if u did)... 😛... Keep writing gal... 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely verse, An. ⭐️ It creates such a lovely visual, especially since I am few hours away from watching it.

He has began his long journey,
Holding on tightly to the hanky.
He knows he has no way out
He has to follow his heart, no doubt.

She has no clue to the sun that shines
She is yet to break out of her confines
But a day will come when the *musibeet*
Will be the one, who will trigger her *heartbeat*

-- Mru

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Posted: 13 years ago
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An and Mru- Fantastic ...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An - I love how you said, you remember nothing but that image of a them two sitting side by side on the floor, and picture perfect capture they form! What a beautiful thought 👏

Mru - You still haven't seen the episode? Lovely words btw! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An and Mru...simply beautiful👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: without-fathom

An - I love how you said, you remember nothing but that image of a them two sitting side by side on the floor, and picture perfect capture they form! What a beautiful thought 👏


Mru - You still haven't seen the episode? Lovely words btw! 😳



I will watch it in the evening after office, JZee.

-- Mru
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: an12345678


From here, she looks a little dishevelled, like

a woman in shock and her trust violated.

The young man's countenance wears the look of

compassion. He is there for her, probably

always there for her.

The man's eyes are observing her face, intently

waiting for her to break the silence,

while the woman sits oblivious,

burdened by her own thoughts.

To the ignorant,

the beautiful post card is screaming

It's the image of

Culmination and a New Dawn!

*****

The moment of capturing The Picture Perfect and made brilliant Postcard.👏





Originally posted by: Mru_bee



He has began his long journey,
Holding on tightly to the hanky.
He knows he has no way out
He has to follow his heart, no doubt.

She has no clue to the sun that shines
She is yet to break out of her confines
But a day will come when the *musibeet*
Will be the one, who will trigger her *heartbeat*

-- Mru

The famous hanky become the inspiration to form the chain of beautiful wards. Bravo👏





Aahat darwaje pe hui..paya use khada...
Najre jab woh mili...
Dil se sukoon ki aah nikli...
Ankhone jub thama dil ka haat...
Sanso mai aai gehri aas
Bani phir ankhe dil ka saaz...
Num thi ankhe sunkar dil ka haal...
Na kuch bol agaye...mujko hai ehsaas... kiya hai tera haal.
Badaah kar agay apna haat...diya phir apna mujeh saath.
Na bole tum, na maine kuch kaha...phir bhi suni ek doosre ki awaaj.


Edited by Newdime - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Lovely Poetry An, Mru (loved the hanky reference in your poem too) and Newdime!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written dear ...poetry is superbbb 👏

@Mru & newdime :- u guys too written beautiful lines 👏 👏
Edited by --khushi-- - 13 years ago

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