Okay, I have had bloody enough of this!
You!*Points a finger accusingly!* Have turned this girl *points at myself*into a freakin stalker!😆
Why oh why! You know, I found this FF a few weeks ago! Relax, Im a good silent reader, have been liking every single update of yours respectively!
I could only dream about someone writing an FF like this! Arnav as a gangster with a bloody past!?
And Khushi the care-free, bubbly girl who has lost her parents and lives with her Buaji!?
I really, like really respect and admire your writing style, your talent! It's just marvelous for the eyes to read every time!
I love the prologue and how they met the first time! She took out a bullet from his wounded shoulder!? It grossed me out, you described it so well!
And then the whole Lavanya being Khushi's rich bff with an rich dad and Arnav who has to kill off that man!?? And Khushi saved him (Lavanya's dad) without knowing it!??
The whole fiasco of the Shimla trip, I thought for a second that Arnav wll kidnap lavanya along with khushi! 😆
But no, smart boy he was observing lavanya and now has something going on with her!
Khushi is Akash's assistent! And she met Arnav in the clinic! btw, he was looking hawt in his white hoodie and beige trousers which clung low on his hips 😉
He is attracted to her and so is she! prove, the moment they shared in Shimla when they got close and his hand sneaked into her kameez! 😳 And more too, as him coming back to the clinic at six pm and giving her a ride to home, but wondering why he came to see her!??
Car chase, him getting shoot at the club, shyam's strange behavior! on the other side, the dude (shyam!) is strange and weird like always! someone wants to end Arnav's life!
I love how you portrayed Arnav and Aman's strong friendship!
Arnav's past os getting revealed slowly, but surely! Who were those men that killed his mother!??
He btw, killed lavanya's ex! he could be so cruel and then so tender at another moment!
Love how you show every single emotion, you bring it alive in front of our eyes! I really love your writing skills! I gasped in excitement when I just saw you updated! You have no idea how badly I have been stalking your FF for updates! I turned into a stalker! Im ashamed of myself😆
I really love this FF!!!
btw, me is off to read chapter 15! Im so happy you updated! *squeals in delight*
p.s: Hope you don't find me rude for accusing you for turning me into a stalker!😆
xxx haffie
Edited by DarkDove - 12 years ago
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