Omg!!! What a concept!!! Am bowled over! Man u had me glued from the first few lines!! Plz plz pm me when u update! Am soo looking forward to the next part! Well done!
Oh wow! This is maha- intruiging yaar! Me loves it! Is arnav part of some gang? A good gang or a bad gang! And I loved the bullet removing scene! Very intense! So its Arnav and Aman.. very nice! I liked the way he sent her away before she would get involved in anything.. and the way she reminded him of his mother.. Great first chapter! Youve definately captured my attention and I love the tiny tweeking youve done to the characters .. awesomeee!
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