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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
like button not working urgh but amazing update loved it n ty for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

OMG !!! u reallly rocked ...alll  the three updates were really gud yaar !!!damn gud!!!πŸ‘

kriya is such a swthrt !!! i mean she's helpin to unite swaron...awwwee...this FF reallly is outstanding...
all the characters are really supporting...so well executed...do continue soon harshita !right ?
in mind*wat d hell uski kripa ki himmat kaise hui mera swayam ka picche baithne ki huh*😑 ) to herself "mera swayam control sharon wat r u sayin"

awwwee...this line especially is really gud !!! i mean jealous sharon is really cute...also happy to see our swayam in the famous majnu mode !!!πŸ˜‰
so keep up wid the gud work!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
do update the next part as sooon as possible nd do not frget to PM me !!!πŸ˜ƒ
already have sent u buddy req!!!

OMG!!! such a grt response i m soo happie.. thanxs for itna lamba comment thank u.. wil surely pm u u wil update soon thanxs a lot😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
thnkx 4d pm its was realy amazing ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
hey... i read both the updates now...sorry for the late reply
 its awesum...nd thxx for the pm
updt soon  can't wait 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
 OKH GUYS UPDATIN THE NXT PART FRM THIS PART U GUYS R GNG 2 LUV IT...

EPISODE -4

Nxt day in college Sharon decided 2 meet hr dad as he was out of town fr many days.
Sharon: DAD!!πŸ˜ƒ
Mr.Gautam rai prakash was checkin out the forms of the students those who hav join this year n he cme's across one form!!! he was shocked😲 wen Sharon entered that form slipped frm hs hand..
Sharon: Dad! is she my sister. Dad my mom is in the this city n  i dnt knw( Mr.Gautam also use to tel hm abt hr mom n hr sister since childhood b'coz of curfew n high alert in kashmir in those days their got seperated)
Mr.Gautam: yes !! princess yes!
Sharon: i need 2 met hr ritenw since ages i havnt met hr😭 she was cryin nw!!
Sharon ran 2 the empty class were she found Kria
(harshita: guys nw u knw wat i m tlkin)
Sharon:(stil sobin) Kria tumhara ghar kaha hai.
Kria: mena kuch nae kiya ab!!
Sharon : pls tel me were is ur hme..???
Kria: cme i wil tak u!!πŸ˜•
At Kria 's hme. Smriti had an holiday 2day frm d bank so she was at hme. Wen Kria cme wid Sharon.
Smriti: Kria tum itna jaldi aagaye??? aur yeh tumhari dost hai??
Still sobin Sharon immediately hugged Smriti n said
Sharon: mom do u remember me??😭
Smriti: fully shocked😲 n said"PRINCESS"
Bth mother n daughter hugged each other the met each other aft a very long time. This btw Mr.Gautam cme n Kria was shocked n confusedπŸ˜²πŸ˜•
Kria: yeh sab kya ho raha hai maa..???
Mr.Gautam: mai btata hu Kria !
N Kria was nw told everythin she too cried.Mr.gautam n Smriti hugged each other. And the 2 sisters gave each other a sistery hug..
NW they were a happy family aft lot of struggle.
bt their was still a problem fr Kria n Sharon dey need 2 hide this frm their frnds...πŸ˜†
After few days passed. One day bth sisters decided 2 go n roam college at nite fr smetim n get their privacy.. TO their shock they saw...😲 
Rey: Swayam yaar yeh ladkiyo ka chaakar mai hum ladka nae mil pata!!
Vicky: hai yaar Sharon ki vajase v cnt met u guys..
Swayam gve hm angry look..
Vicky: hai thik hai nae bolta teri Sharon ka baare mai kuch!!
To wich Sharon blushed n Kria teased hr.😳😊
Bharat: sahi hai yaar Kria bhi eshi hai yaar..
Amar: sme 2 sme.. dono behna lagti hai(Amar is nt tootla in my ff)
Kria n Sharon : giggled 2 disπŸ˜†
Rey: jisi bhi hai bahut aachi hai Kria!!😊
Bharat: abe aa!! tujh bada malum hai Kria ka baara mai
Kria was nw blushin n Sharon smiled 2 it
Rey: ha toh !! wo meri AGS hai isliye!!
Nil : AGS !!! ya kuch aur hai!!!πŸ˜‰ teasin rey
(harshita: nt guess the place of the convo " BASKET BALL COURT"πŸ˜†)
Nil,Vicky,Amar,Bharat: challo lets go!!!
Swayam: i wil stay fr a while!!
Rey: me too!!
All : Okh !! BYE!!
Rey: Swayam yaar tu nahi hota toh mera kya hota u r my bst frnd!!!
Kria n Sharon: "BEST FRND" little louder
Rey n Swayam saw the side the voice cme bt none of ne culd find smebdy.
Swayam : sme here!! yaar mai Sharon ka liye kuch spl karna chahtaπŸ˜•
Rey: wah!!! Swayam!! 
Sharon was nw blushin hard !!!😳 n Kria was luvin the  site!!
Rey: okh i wil help !! chal abi ka liye lets go!!!
Rey n Swayam goes n then Kria n Sharon too leaves .
Nxt day in college Sharon n Kria cme early in sme car.Aft sme time..
Neha: u wearin the sme bracelet sharon worin once Kria!!!😲
N w this time it was time 2 get in action.. Bth were sis so ovio they cn share things bt bth hate 2 fite wid each other..!!!
Vish: ya dude!! wat is it u borrowed it frm Sharon???😲 
Simmi: ya Sharon.. this is ur fav bracelet rite??
Kria: in full horror glarin at Sharon😲
Sharon gve hr a calm luk n said: C'mon Simmi ise Ms.wannabe ka paas mera bracelet kaise ho skta hai.. yeh toh koi low markrt sai liye hui lagta hai.
Kria was feelin lik laughin loud bt controlled hrself..πŸ˜†
At nite bth sister were gng 2 be alne as their mom was gng wid hs dad frm sme outin..
Mom: princess! pls apna dhyan rakhna okh!! aur
Kria: khana tim se kha liye na!!
Sharon : jyada der phne pa mat rehna!!
Kria: no lte night parties!!
Sharon: no lte nite movies!! Mom aur kuch!!
Mom: meri dono princess bahut badi hogaye hai.. okh nw bye n pls takcre..
K &S: bye!!
Finaally alne bth sisters decided 2 order pizzas..
BELL RANG 
Sharon: itna jaldi pizza aagaye let me see! she see frm eye witness n to hr horror it ws Rey!!!😲
Sharon: Kria hide REY!!
Kria : wat???😲
kria : okh u go n i wil manage!!
Sharon clm hrself n mves!!
Sharon: hi Rey!!
Rey: kitna tim Sharon!! wat wer u dng anyways!!
Sharon: kaise aana hua REY!!
Rey was gng 2 sit on the bed bt Sharon stopped hm as Kria was hiddin der..
Sharon: REY!!! πŸ˜² 
Rey: kya hua Sharon??
Sharon: Rey kitchen mai cocroach hai pls REY help na pls..!!
Rey: wat?? i mean ok lets go..
Kria hides behind the wall n giggles as Sharon was makin REY run in the kitchen n was instructin hm standin on d sofa!!
Sharon: finally gaya !! Rey u tak rest i wil get u water!!
Rey : huh???😲okh
Rey: to himself aaj Sharon ko  bolna aaya hu ka kal uska best day hai kyuki swayam is gng 2 tak hr fr date.!!😊 par wen wil i ask my baat-cutter😍
This was heard by Sharon n Kria bth they bth were blushin hard😳 n bth happy fr each other..
Rey: 2mrrow is ur spl day Sharon!!😊okh nw i hav 2 leave bye takcreπŸ˜‰
Sharon: okh!!
Bth sister hugged each other n had their pizzas ... n slept
PRECAP- Wat wil happen nxt wil Swayam make it upto Sharon a GOOD DATE
                   Wil Rey knw Kria's feelins?
                    Wil nimmi n barkha be offical stay tunned... 


harshita29396 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
HPEFULLY EVERY NE IS GETTIN PMS IF NT PLS INFORM ME...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Wow...lovely...krisha r so gud sisters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome...awww luved their sister bond...eagerly waiting for the next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
awwwee...this is simply awe !!!!πŸ‘
the way how sharon took control of the situation when kriya took the bracelet frm sharon...both as sissy are damn cute !!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
so adorable...especially when sharon said to rey abt the cockroach !!!
pretty amazin !!!πŸ˜ƒ
so continue sooon nd do PM me !!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
it was awesome part...loved it very much
krisha bonding is improved and they accepted each other aweee thats soo sweet ...awesome 
and sharon making rey fool hahahh it was funny
and the precap was awesome 
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part