DIL DOSTI ZINDAGI... updated pg 58 episode 21 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
thanks a lot loved the chapter n thanks for the pm and loved it 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
loved it...
and y did u stop it there and when will u update ur next part... 
it was really sooo... cuteπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hey nice update...
love it and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
i just read the ff and so far i think its awesome please pm me when you continue :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

GUYS I M BACK WITH A UPDATE... SRRY AGAIN WITH THE PMS AS I M NT AT ALL GUD WITH THAT PART OF MY JOB BT WILL ONLY METION THE PAGE NO. SOO SORRY. I HPE U GUYS UNDERSTAND😊

Episode - 3

Swayam was movin with the first - aid box in the locker room. Sharon followed hm.
(harshita- guys boys locker room mai koi nae that.. heheπŸ˜›)
Swayam: Sharon wat r u dng here??
Sharon: i thought 2 see u b'coz u got injured b'coz of me.😭 (feelin bad)
Swayam: its okh ur thought of seein me is mre than enough. Nw i wil be fine soon😊 
Sharon- Swayam luk-luk hawa hawa n bg*phela nasha*
Sharon: let me first aid u!( n takes d box n bandages his hand)
Swayam:(in hs majnu mood)(in hs mind) ooh god she is so cute n innocent n i luv hr lik hell..😊
Sharon: its dne nw pls u takcre..😊(yes sharon gave a smile 2 swayam)n thanxs
Swayam: i will.. n thanxs fr wat??
Sharon: mujh bacchana ka liye!!
Swayam: its my duty.. mai tumhe kabhi kuch nae hona duga!😊
Swayam:"chala"!
Sharon:hmm..😊 
(scene shifted 2 reharsal hall  were all louisans were 2gether)
RDX: i m so happy that finally u guys r louisan.!!😊 
ALL: thank u sir!!😊
(harshita: i knw its unwanted bt RDX ki bina no louisans na)
Vicky: guys lets celebrate!!πŸ˜ƒ
Nil: ya lets go out all together!!
Sharon: perfect lets have party tonite..!!
Simmi-Rinni- "SHARON"????
Sharon: i knw guys bt nw we r louisans so jst lets hav fun!!😊
ALL:yeah...
They all move n decided 2 met at spice n flavour restarunt(i cnt think of better place)
Kria n Swayam cme 2gether asusal.Rey n Sharon cme 2gether.Vicky n Neha cme. N then the rest of the gang cme with Nil.
Nil: Vicky tera paas mer liye tim hi nae hota. Jab dekho apni DEEWANI ka saath chipka hua hota hai.. saala chipko..😑
Vicky: mera bhai mera nil aisa kyu bolta hai i was wid u whole afternun...😲
Neha: wat ???? babu u liein 2 neha that u in sme wrk.. huh!!!😑
Kria: Neha nt fair usa apna best frnd saath rehna toh do?? Tumhara paas bhi toh mera liye time nae hai.πŸ˜• 
Neha: nt it is lik. Neha ka paas always time fr Kria.😊
(Masala time guysπŸ˜†)
Sme random cheap rich guys were continously grancin/watchin Sharon n Kria this made both girls really uncomfortable. Sharon had 2 get sme cookies fr herself wich were behind one counter far away.So she left n Kria had 2 cl hr mom so she went outside.
Kria was wearin d sme dress she had worn on rose day n sharon was wearin the sme dress that she worn wen she was gng 2 met hr scret admirer. Bth girls in white.
Guy 1- i wil go 2 the counter u go out okh!!
Guy 2 - okh!!
(scene shift 2 counter)
Sharon: excuse me cn i get one low fat chocolate cookies!
Counterman: sure mam! wait a sec!!
Guy 1- hey u girl u luk smashin beauty! wanna join me for coffee!
Sharon: no!!😑  
Guy 1 : hey c'mon jst a coffee babe! 
Sharon: i dare u cl me a babe!!😑  
Guy was cmin closer n tryin to touch hr hand bt all of a sudden😊
Swayam: stay away! sunae nae deta yeha samajh nae aaya!!
Guy 1 : who r u?? n wat d hell u think of urself!😈 
Swayam: i m hr boyfrnd n cn show u wat i think of myself!!😑
Guy 1: ooh!! i m srry!!
Swayam: better be!! bhabhi hai teri samjha
Btw al this Sharon was shocked!! bt happy😊
Swayam: ur cookies n srry fr tellin hm that u r my girlfrnd!!
Sharon : haa yea!! yea its okh!stil shocked n moves😲😊 
Kria : maa !! i m fin okh nw my frnds r calin hav 2 go! bye😊
Guy 2 : hey sweety!! wuld u mind havin a cup of coffee!!
Kria: hw dare u cl me sweety.. u idiot!!
Guy 2 : so shuld i cl u a babe!😈
Kria was abt 2 mve wen that guy hlds her hand.. n enters
Rey: dude leave hr!! πŸ˜‘
Guy 2 : kyu ? who is she 2 u?? ur girlfrnd!??
Rey : no she is my wife!!
Kria : huh!!😲
Guy 2 : srry.. srry bhabhi mujh pata nae tha
Rey: thik ha!! jaan chala..😊 
Kria: huh!! haa!😲
okh guys this for nw...😊 
PRECAP: THERE IS A TRUTH REGARDIN KRIA N SHARON!
WAT IS IT? 
WAT WIL HAPPEN NXT?😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
OMG !!! u reallly rocked ...alll  the three updates were really gud yaar !!!damn gud!!!πŸ‘
kriya is such a swthrt !!! i mean she's helpin to unite swaron...awwwee...this FF reallly is outstanding...
all the characters are really supporting...so well executed...do continue soon harshita !right ?
in mind*wat d hell uski kripa ki himmat kaise hui mera swayam ka picche baithne ki huh*😑 ) to herself "mera swayam control sharon wat r u sayin"

awwwee...this line especially is really gud !!! i mean jealous sharon is really cute...also happy to see our swayam in the famous majnu mode !!!πŸ˜‰
so keep up wid the gud work!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
do update the next part as sooon as possible nd do not frget to PM me !!!πŸ˜ƒ
already have sent u buddy req!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome ff...just read it...plzz pm me next tym u update i sent u a buddy request ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thanks for he pm and I really liked th update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
amazing update.thanks for the pm and update next part soon
the way rey told kria as his wife  was superb.
want to know the tryth now. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
it was awesome part...loved it very much
swayam called sharon girl friend and rey called kria wife waooo thats amazing
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part