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HEY GUYZ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LIKING THE FF TILL NOW...I'M TRYING TO MAKE IT AS INTERESTING AS POSSIBLE...SO DO READ , LIKE AND COMMENT...AND NOW FOR PART 8.

PART 8

Rohan : Virat hum yahan kya kar rahe hain...challo hum bhi Prem ke pass chalte hain after all hum Ladke wale hain.

Virat : Haan challo.

In the room the girls were dressin Pia and talking all about marriage and love when a small girl burst into the room shouting.

Girl : Baarat aa gayi...Pia di kii baarat aa gayi. And off she went.

Now hearing baraat Kiya and Manvi too got excited .

Manvi : Pia ab tum akele yahan wait karo hun chale baarat dekhne ...

And off went Manvi and Kiya...They saw the baarat . Manvi was imagining her di's baraat with Viren on the horse and everyone dancing around him...she hadn't seen her di's baraat and so she always imagined it . And then she saw Virat dancing with Rohan and the others...he looked nice.

All the other rituals took place and Prem came and sat in the mandap.

After 15 minutes the pandit ordered to bring Pia down...

And then Manvi , Kiya , and Pia's mom bought Pia down...

Virat saw Manvi and remembered the day of Jeevi and Viren's roka when Manvi came down the stairs the same way...

Manvi saw Virat downstairs and she too remembered Jeevi and Viren's roka where Virat was having the same look on his face which he had now.

As a fact today one whole year was over for Jeevika and Viren's roka.

Pia sat down at the Mandap along side Prem...Virat stood behind Manvi whereas Rohan stood behind Kiya.

The pheras started...everyone started to throw flowers ... Manvi felt flowers falling on her again and again...she turned and saw that Virat was purposely throwing the flowers on her . She punched him .

The marriage was over and then came the time for bidaai. Everyone had tears in their eyes. Pia was bid farewell and everyone was crying...Manvi missed her di a lot now...she knew she couldn't cry in front of everyone and so she went in the kitchen ... she could hide her tears from everyone at that moment except Virat who noticed her go .

IN THE KITCHEN ...

Manvi is crying and looking up'she was talking to her parents but in her mind.

Manvi ( in mind ) : Mama Papa aisa kyun hota hain kii hum jinhe sabse zyaada pyaar karte hain who hi humse door chale jaate hain. Mama Papa mujhe aapkki aur Di kii bahut yaad aa rahi hain'aap mujhse itne door kyun ho?

 

Virat comes from nowhere and interrupts Manvi's conversation .

Virat : Kamal karti ho Chaudharain '.

Manvi : Virat tum ?

Virat : Shhh' pehele tumne aunty uncle ko jo tension di hain who main kam karta hoon.

 

Virat looks up : Namaste Aunty Namaste Uncle. Aap mujhe jaante hoge'main Virat aapki badi beti Jeevika ka chota devar'infact one and only devar. Aunty Uncle aap chinta mat kijiye'aap toh jaante hain kii Manvi ka screw humesha dheela hii rehta hain . Aap chinta kar rahe hoge na kii bhabhi aur Manvi yahan khush hain ya nahi ' don't worry , bhabhi Chandigarh completely fine hain'wahan sab log unka khyal rakhte hain , unke pass wahan sab hain mom , chachi , aur sabse important Bhai bhi hain unke saath , so don't worry . Aur rahi baat Manvi kii , toh Rishikesh mein sab log isska perfect khayal rakh rahe hain , Chandigarh mein bhi sab log Manvi ko behadd pyaar karte hain aur Manali kii baat hain toh Aunty Uncle main aapko vaada karta hoon kii mere presence mein , main Manvi ko kucch nahi hone dunga . Jab tak main uske pass hoon she wont get hurt at all , promise . After all partners hain hum ' ab ek partner doosre partner ko kaise kucch hone de sakta hain , ( turns to Manvi ) Hain na?

All this while Manvi was just staring at him with tears in her eyes , he knew her so well , she was very happy .

Manvi : Virat '

Virat : Shhh. ( looks up ) 'Aunty Uncle ,aap dono se baat karke mujhe sacchi mein bahut accha laga par ab hum dono ko chalna chahiye , nahi toh logon ko misunderstanding hogi kii hum dono akele kitchen mein kya kar rahe hain . So abhi ke liye good bye , par main aapse phirse baat zaroor karunga . Aap dono humesha aapka aashirwaad hum sab pe aise hii banaye rakhna . So bye and good night . ( turns to Manvi ) Bandariyaa apne mom dad ko good night nahi kahongi?

Manvi looks up : Um goodnight mama papa..

Manvi turns to Virat : Virat tumhe kaise pata kii main mama papa se baat kar rahi thi?

Virat : Mujhe paka pata tha kii Pia kii bidaai dekh kar tumhe bhabhi kii bidaai yaad aayegi aur tumhe rona aayega , and you wont ever cry in front of everyone so tum kahin aur jaogi rone ke liye , toh maine bus tumhara peecha kiya yahan tak aur dekha kii tum upar dekh kar ro rahi thi , aur jab bhi tum ya bhabhi upar dekh kar rote hon toh tum apne mom dad se baat kar rahe hote hon ye main aur bhai acche se jaante hain.

Manvi looks down and realizes that she is super sad . He somehow had to make her happy .

Manvi : Virat kaash aisa hota kii main aur di humesha saath reh sakte ... forever and ever.

Virat dint know why but he couldnt see her so sad , he wanted her to smile . And then he got the idea.

Virat : Waise ek tareekha jise tum humesha bhabhi ke saath reh sakti hon.

Manvi turns to him : Kya ?

Virat : Tum mujhe se shaadi karlo...isses tum Vadheras ki chhoti bahu ban jaogi aur bhabhi ki devrani .

Manvi looked at him with the " how could you think of that " expression. And then she realized he was kidding and joined him .

Manvi : Waise idea itni bhi buri nahi hain ... di ke saath rehne ke liye tumhe bhi jhel loongi .

Virat joining in : Toh phir challo , pandit ji abhi bhi gaaye nahi hain , aur mandap bhi ready hain , you sure na kii tum mujhse shaadi karogi ?

Manvi : Pakka sure , challo .

And then Virat held Manvi's wrist and started to walk with her ... they were near the kitchen door when Kiya came in . She saw them and asked

Kiya : Tum dono kahan jaa rahe hon ?

Manvi : Shaadi karne . Main aur Virat shaadi kar rahe hain .

Kiya : Kyaaa!!!!!

Virat : Haan .

Kiya : Are you guyz serious ?

Manvi Virat knew that they had given Kiya shock of her life...but then what Kiya did next gave them their life shock .

Kiya : Oh My God ! You guyz are marrying , that's sooo coool . And hugged Manvi making her and Virat super shocked .

Kiya released the hug and started laughing after seein their both's faces .

Kiya : Shocked na?

Manvi and Virat nod .

Kiya : Mujhe bhi aisa hii shock laga tha jab tum dono ne kahan kii tum shaadi kar rahe ho . I know you guyz were joking . " And she started laughing again .

Manvi and Viratlooked at each other and started laughing like maniacs .

Manvi (laughing) : Seriously Virat hum dono kii shaadi iss duniya kii sabsi weirdest shaadi hoti .

Virat : seriously yaar ... just imagine our families faces jab hum yeh baat unse kehetain.

Manvi : Sab log bhi kitne confused or shocked hote...humari shaadi insaanon waali nahi balki jaanvar aur alien kii hoti.

They all three were laughing so freely , all the worries were forgotten , Virat saw the big broad smile on Manvi's face and felt nice from inside . He dint know why but it made him upset on seeing her sad. After laughing some more time they went out of the kitchen.

IN THE WEDDING HALL

Everyone was clearing the hall. Manvi was holding some plates when Virat came to her .

Virat : Manvi , actually aaj raat main aur Rohan , Prem ke yahan rehne wale hain ...woh aunty ( prem's mom) ne kahan kii hum unki reception kii tayariyon mein madat kar sakte hain .

Manvi : Matlab kal subah tum yahan nahi rahonge ?

Virat : Um , no aur main tumhe uthane bhi nahi aa sakoonga ... and I dont want that , Manali mein tumhara akhri din bura jaaye .

Manvi looks at him , they both now completely belived that seeing his face in the morning was lucky for her. She smiles , she liked it how he worried about her day going bad .

Manvi : Dont worry , kal ka mera din accha jayega ...

Virat : Kaise ?

Manvi : Woh secret hain , but I promise you kii kal main tumhara face sabse pehele dekhoongi .

Virat : But how.

Manvi : Secret.

Virat : OK Bandariyaa keep secrets , but just say that you will try your best to not get into any trouble when Im not there'after tumhare mom dad se promise kiya hain maine.

Manvi : "Fine" ' then smiles and goes .

Virat too smiles and goes with Rohan.

Manvi stayed awake till 2:30 in the morning , she somehow dint feel good about Virat not coming to wake her up in the morning . She knew that tomorrow wouldn't go bad for her as she would wake up by seeing his face . She had hidden the fact from him but she yet had his photo with her , the same one that he had given her during her last day at Chandigarh and she had planned to see that photo .

On the other hand Virat too dint fall asleep till 2:30 . He was worried about Manvi , what if she fell into some trouble , what if she again lost her balance and fell from somewhere . God he really worried for her . There was something between them ' the way they couldn't see each other sad' the way they understood each other without saying a word'what was it .

NEXT DAY

Manvi woke up by seeing his photo . Everyone got ready ' today was the reception'the girl's side didn't have to do anything , so they started packing their stuff as everyone would go to their own places the next day. Manvi somehow didn't feel good without Virat 'she was packing her stuff . Kiya too was packing her stuff and blabbering about her and Rohan's friendship 'there was something between them too.

It was 5:00 in the evening when Virat and Rohan came to the girl's place . Manvi saw Virat and her face broke into a big broad smile . Virat too was saw her smiling and felt himself smiling . He came to her .

Virat : Hello ji , kaise ho aap ?

Manvi : Ji hum bilkul theek hain ' aap kaise ho?

Virat : So kal humare bina aapki raat kaisi beeti ?

Manvi just looked at him with narrowed eyes : Humesaha chep hii rahoge na ? You will never improve . Chep kahike. Waise tum itne jaldi aa gaye'tum toh shaam ko aane wale the na?

Virat : Haan who aunty bol rahi thi kii hum dono yahan jaaye taaki tum sab kii madadat ho jaaye

Manvi : Help karne aaye ho toh help karo na , kutub minar kii tarah khade kyun ho?

And off she went smiling . Virat too felt nice to see her .

IN THE EVENING

Manvi had dressen up for the reception ' she was wearing a amazingly beautiful saree.She was almost ready except for the jewellery . She opened her jewellery box to find a matching pair of earrings , and after a long serch she found a pair of turqouise studs which were somewhat suiting the saree. She was about to wear them when she noticed Virat come in the room . He was looking handsome as ever in his black sherwani . Manvi turns to him .

Manvi : Virat tum yahan?

Virat : Um Manvi woh actually main tumhe kucch dene aaya hoon.

Manvi : Mujhe , Kya?

Virat : Yeh. " And gives her a medium size jewel box .

Manvi takes it : Yeh kya hain?

Virat : Open and see .

She looks at him and then opens tha box . Unbelivable ... something which she dint expect in the box at all . Inside the box were the same pair of earrings which she had seen in the mall when she was shopping for Jeevika's gift. Manvi couldn't belive that he had bought them for her .

Manvi : Virat yeh earrings...

Virat : You liked them so I thought of buying them for you ... um like a gift .

Manvi : Gift ... kisliye?

Virat : Um tumne hum sab ke liye kitna kucch kiya , chachu ko ek succesful lawyer banaya , mujhe phirse gana gane kii himat dii ... um so for that .

Manvi : Virat tum pagal ho gaye ho , itna mehenga gift . No Virat I cant except this yeh bahut expensive hain .

Virat : Manvi yeh uss feeling se expensive nahi hain joh Chachu , Chachi aur Vadhera khandan ke sab logon ko mili thi chachu ke jeet ke baad. Yeh uss feeling se expensive nahi hain jo mujhe mili hain wapas gana ga ke . Aur Manvi yeh feeling hume sirf tumhari wajah se mili hain ... so un sab ke liye yeh chotta sa gift.

Manvi : Virat par main yeh except nahi kar sakti ..

Virat : Manvi please ... and then he got the perfect idea on how to make Manvi except the gift.

Virat : Manvi agar tumne yeh gift nahi liya toh main bhabhi ko tumhari faint hone ki khabar bata doonga .

Manvi : Virat tum yeh nahi kar sakte...please yaar I cant take it.

Virat : Manvi mere liye nahi toh Bhabhi ke liye yeh gift le lo ...please " He said the please so sweetly that Manvi had to except it.

She gave him that " i give up smile ' and took the earrings .

Virat : Tum ready ho jao main neeche ja raha hoon . And he went to the door when Manvi called him .

Manvi : Viraat.

Virat turns .

Manvi : Thank You .

Virat gives the wecome smile and goes.

Manvi comes down after 10 minutes . She was lookin gorgeous and those earrings were stunning . She came down and went near Kiya .

Kiya : Manvi your looking amazing aur tumhare yeh earrings ...they are sooo beautiful. Kahan se liye.

Manvi looks at Virat and then at Kiya : Um...friend ne diya ... as a gift .

Kiya : Kaash yeh gift mujhe diya hota .

They talked for some more time and then all the people came .

Virat : Ab jab sab aa gaye hain toh , reception chale.

Pia's mom : Haan beta challo .

They all sat in their cars ... In fifteen minutes they reached the venue.

Manvi came out of the car and stood near the gate with Virat behind her .

Virat : How is it ? " He was asking her about the decorations .

Manvi : Chep yeh toh bahut accha hain...

Virat : Afterall help kisne kii.

Manvi turns and makes faces at him.

Everyone came to the gate and Prem's mom came to welcome everyone .

They all went inside...Kiya and Manvi saw Pia and went quickly to her.They hugged each other .

Kiya : Tujhe pata hain humne tumhe kitna miss kiya.

Manvi : Haan aur tu nahi thi isseliye poori raat bak bak karke mera sar pakaya.

Pia laughs . All the six pose for some photos and then Kiya ,Manvi ,Virat and Rohan go off the stage to allow other people to come.

AFTER HALF HOUR

Everyone was talking with everyone ... Pia and Prem too were talking with Virat and friends .

The reception was to have some couple games ... and the anchor for the games was now ready to start them .

Anchor talks over the mike drawing everyone's attention : Hello guyz ...ready to play some couple games .

A small amount of hooting came ...

Anchor : Cool ... so our first game will see how much our couples know about each other... we will ask you some questions about your partner and we will see how many answers are right . So all of you have ten minutes to give in your names for the game . Pia and Prem your name is already given...afterall its your marriage party .

 

They both just smiled...many couples came to give their names . Rohan whispered something in Kiya's ears which made her face brighten up and then they both just excused themselves . They came after 3 minutes .

Prem : Where did you guyz go?

Rohan : Secret...kucch hii der mein pata chal jayega.

The anchor came on the stage again : Hey Im back and now to start the game...so our first couple is Mr. and Mrs Sharma.

All the couples were called one by one . They all got good marks . Prem and Pia too earned a 9 on 10.

Anchor : And now for the last couple of the evening. And the last couple of the evening are...Virat and Manvi .

Now that caught their whole groups attention...Rohan and Kiya smiled . Manvi and Virat super confused...

Virat : Hum ...

Rohan ; Dude go na...it's just a game .

Kiya ( To Manvi ) : Manvi jaa na yaar..mere dostii ke khatir .

Rohan : Ya guyz for our friendship .

Now this made both of them go on the stage .

Anchor comments on them as they gome on the stage : Oooh...young and cute couple. They both complement each other so well .

Virat was furious , he could kill either that anchor or Rohan ... but he controlled his anger.

Anchor : Hello guyz.

Virat smiles and so does Manvi .

Anchor : So u ready for the questioning .

Manvi Virat : Um ... yes.

Anchor : Cool so Virat you fill this form ... write in your likes for the questions and Manvi you fil this form with your likes.

He gives out the forms ... In five minutes he gets them back with the answers .

Anchor : Cool so who to start with first .

Virat : I'll start .

Manvi hoped that he got only two or three corrects as it would help in clearing the misunderstanding of them being a couple . Virat looked at Manvi .

Anchor : So Virat , first question , what is Manvi's fav. colour.

Virat : Manvi ka fav colour hain white...he remembered that once Manvi had told him that her fav colour was white.

Anchor : Absolutely correct .

CLAPS...

Manvi little surprised thought : Don't worry ek answer toh correct banta hain...baaki ke galat aayenge .

Anchor : Doosra sawal , Manvi ka fav food...

Virat smiles , he knew this better than anyone present there : Manvi ko Indian food sabse zyaada pasand hain khaas kar kii dhabe ka khana .

Anchor : Correct...amazing start .

Manvi just smiles .

Anchor : Third question , Manvi's fav song.

Now that caught Virat...he dint know that. He recollected the day Manvi talked about music to him ... for her anyone's fav song should be the song that match their ideologies...and their was only one song which came to his mind which suited Manvi's ideas of living...he hesitated on weather he should tell that as her fav song , but then it was just a mere game . He decided to say the song .

Virat : Um..Jazba ..Manvi's fav song .

Anchor : That's absolutely correct.

It sent a somewhat relief through Virat...he was happy that he knew that much about Manvi. On the other hand Manvi was shocked ... he knew that too . She wanted to be angry , upset but somehow she was happy. She was happy that he knew that much about her .

Anchor : Ab fourth question , You have to tell the name of a person who irritates Manvi the most but yet he or she knows her so well that he or she can calm and control her in the wildest situation . In short someone who's her enemy and yet her close friend .

Virat and Manvi look at each other . Manvi was smiling and Virat too .

Virat : Honestly , it's me .

Manvi laughed and Virat smiled...people laughed and hooted.

Anchor : Ooohhh...now for the last question . If Manvi was to choose from being invisible or reading people's mind what would she choose and why .

Virat looks at Manvi and says : Manvi would read people's mind...and that is because she can't see anyone sad around her , so if any one is sad she would know why and try her whole best to make them happy . Aur waise bhi koi bhi Manvi par vishwaas nahi rakhta toh agar usse sab ke minds padne kii shakti mil jaaye toh usska kaam aasan ho jayega.

Virat was looking at Manvi all the while ... she was very happy now , he knew her so well...

Anchor : Amazing ... that's absolutely correct . You have a got a complete five ... wow .

Everyone was clapping for Virat even Manvi . She wanted him to answer all wrong but he answered all right and instead of being angry she felt nice.

Anchor : Ab Manvi aapki baari hain...you ready.

Manvi somewhat felt that she had to get all the answers right...if Virat knew her so well she should also know him that well.

Anchor : Manvi your first question , Virat's fav colour.

Manvi : Red...he loves red .

Anchor : Coool ,correct...now second question...Virat's fav food.

Manvi : Italian...jab dekho pizza ya pasta khata rehta hain.

Anchor : Bilkul sahi...teesra sawal , Virat fav song.

Manvi remembered that day of karvachauth when he told her that Voh dekhnay mein ( the song he sang for her ) had become his fav.song . Well there was the answer.

Manvi : His fav song is Voh dekhnay mein ...

Anchor : Correct...now fourth question. That one person who is Virat's favourite enemy and yet his super close friend .

Now Manvi looked at Him and smiled .

Manvi : Main . It's me.

Anchor : Correct ... wow , now the last question which will decide the perfect couple of the evening . , If he was to choose from being invisible or reading people's mind what would he choose and why .

Manvi : He would be invisible...kyunkii aise bahut saare log hain jinse isse badla lena hain.

Everyone was waiting for the anchor to say the result ...

Anchor : This answer was ( in a very sad tone ) ... absolutely ... correct . ( And smiles )

Manvi laughs and Virat smiles...his trademark smile.

Anchor : Guyzz we have our perfect couple over here Virat and Manvi .

People clap and hoot ( happily) . Kiya , Rohan ,Pia and Prem clap the loudest..they were happy ... it all had been Rohan's idea as he had seen some spark between them .

Anchor requested Prem's mom and dad to come and award Virat Manvi .

They got their trophy and went down ...all people came to them congradulating them both . Many said that they were the cutest or the most lovely couple . Well they dint know the truth .

Virat and Manvi came to Rohan and friends . Now they four too decided to pull Manvi Virat's leg . When they came Kiya gave Manvi a tight hug .

Kiya : I knew it ..you guyz are sooo made for each other.

Rohan : Ya u guyz are amazing.

Prem : Tum dono ne humare group ka sar garv se uccha kar diya .

Pia : You guyz are such a perfect couple.

Virat and Manvi in unison:Hum couple nahi hain!!!!

Manvi : Ab agar tum mein se kisi ne bhi iss topic pe baat kii toh main wapas ghar chali jaoongi.

Kiya laughing : OK sorry .

They continued talking on other topics . During eating dinner Prem and Pia decided to talk to other guests as it was their responsiblity.

Kiya , Rohan , Manvi and Virat were eating when Virat got a brizzare idea but decided to ask Viren's permission before .

Virat to Manvi : Manvi hold my plate main abhi aata hoon " And makes Manvi hold his plate...she had her plate in one hand and his in another .

He talked to Viren and got his and dadaji's permission for his plan. He came back in 10 minutes.

Manvi : Where did you go ? Mere haath dard karne lage hain...

Virat takes his plate : Sorry...par badi multitasking karne lagi hon tum , plates bhi balance karti hon aur baatein bhi karti hon .

Manvi makes faces .

Virat eats and asks to Rohan : Rohan yaar tu ab iss shaadi ke baad kya kar raha hain?

Rohan : Um next week main Chandigarh ke ek small town mein jaa raha hoon ... kaam ke silsiley mein .

Virat : Oh aur Kiya tum?

Kiya : Well nothing , main free hoon ... thinking of joing some cooking class or something like that .

Virat : Cool , then why dont you both join me and Manvi in Chandigarh .

All three of them surprised at that idea.

Rohan : Par Virat your family...

Virat : Maine bhai aur dadaji se permission le lee hain...they have no problem . Aur Manvi ko bhi Kiya ki company mil jaayegi .

Manvi : Haan yaar'waise bhi kabhi bhi Vadheras kii party itni boring ho jaati hain ki main khadi khadi hii wahan par so (sleep) jaati hoon . Virat kabhi kabhi mujhe company deta hain par ab main iss chep kii company se bore ho gayi hoon .

Virat : Manvi that's so mean ' but ya guys you should come , sab ko accha lagega .

Manvi : Haan Kiya waise bhi tujhe free mein wahan di , chachi aur Vanshikha aunty se khana banana seekhne ko milega aur Rohan tum bhi Chandigarh aane hii wale ho , toh humare saath reh kar tumhara kaam bhi ho jaayega aur Virat aur baki sab ke saath waqt bitane ko milega.

Kiya and Rohan thought about it for a moment'it wasn't that bad idea.

Kiya : Mujhe koi problem nahi hain'main mom ko phone karke poonchti hoon.

And she went to call her mom .

Rohan : Main bhi phone karke poonchta hoon. And he went too.

Manvi was smiling broadly and hoping that both their parents agree.

Manvi (to Virat ) : Kya baat hain chep kabhi kabhi tumhara dimag bhi chal jaata hain .

Virat : Thank You ji'waise pata hain maine humesha inn dono mein ( Rohan and Kiya ) kucch spark dekha hain .

Manvi looks at him : Sacchi mein , mujhe laga kii sirf main hii ek pagal hoon joy eh sochti thi kii inn dono mein kucch ho sakta hain ,par tum bhi doosre pagal nikle.

Virat smiles . Rohan and Kiya come having their faces lightened up with big smiles.

Rohan : Mujhe permission mil gayi.

Kiya : Mujhe bhi.

Manvi and Virat were super happy . Manvi gives Kiya a small hug.

Manvi : Yes ab hum aur do hafte saath rahenge.

Kiya : Par Manvi ek problem hain.

Manvi : Kya

Kiya : Who kya hain na ' main zyaada daily use ke kapde nahi laaye hain.

Manvi smiles : Uss mein kya badi baat hain ' tum mere kapde pehen lena aur waise bhi do teen dino mein Beeji bhi aayegi toh , main unhe kehen doongi kii mere tohde aur suits le aaye.

Kiya : Then cool . No problem .

Virat : So cool kal hum sab ja rahe hain Chandigarh .

 

Well now Chandigarh had to be ready as this time not two but four bandars were coming . But who knows they might be something more than bandars for each other.

 

So guyz that was part 8 hoped you liked it and one small request (which is completely optional ) . While reading , which actor do you think suit the best for Rohan and Kiya ' I'm asking this for my general curiosity and it is completely your wish if want to tell the names or no .

 

Hope you guyz liked part 8 and please comment as they give a moral boost to me.

Edited by love_angle - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9 was awesome!!!! Thanks for the pm and please pm me when you update..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome...i loved it...continue soon...
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amazing
plez pm me ur next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing i lived it especially the whole perfect couple game... For rohan and kriya i think the best actor and actress would be varun (dishank arora) and roshni (simran kaur) from love ne mila di jodi
Please pm me when u update
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omds just read the whole thing that was way to cute, sweet, romantic just everything plz plz pm i am dying to read on
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PART 9

Rohan , Kiya , Virat and Manvi left for Chandigarh . It was a 6hour journey and they were to stop for lunch ... but where?

Manvi : Mujhe bahut zor kii bhook lagi hain , aur lunch time bhu ho gaya hain .

Virat : Manvi tumhe yahan koi restaurant dikhai de raha hain .

Kiya : Guyz I'm hungry too ... serch some restaurant plz.

And then Manvi shouts ...

Manvi : Stoooppp!!!

Rohan stops the car with a jerk .

Virat super worried : Manvi kya hua?

Manvi : Virat woh dhabha...and points to dhabha near by .

Virat closes his eyes to control his anger...

Virat : Manvi tum pagal ho gayi ho itna zor se kyun scream kiya.

Manvi : Sorry.

Kiya : Guys abhi yahan sirf dhaba hain and we all are super hungry .

Virat : Fine challo .

They all went to the dhaba.

Virat : O paji jaldi se char thali aur lassi lao.

Rohan : Kya baat hain dhabe par bilkul punjabi style se order dii.

Virat : Manvi ji ke saath reh kar yeh bhi seekh liya...do teen baar madam ji mujhe dhabe par le ke aayi hain.

Manvi smiles .

They all eat and have fun .

I'll wash my hands and come.

She went to wash her hand and saw her mehendi .

Manvi : Mehendi ka rang toh bahut accha aaya hain ... and then she saw what no one noticed . The V.

Manvi looks close to it...

Manvi : Yeh kya hain?

And then she recollected the time when she was applying mehendi .

Manvi : Uss waqt toh V ke saath sirf ek hii insaan tha...Virat . , Nahi yeh usska V toh nahi ho sakta .

She was so lost in her thoughts that she dint notice Kiya come .

Kiya : Manvi tu haath wash kar rahi hain ya poora washroom.

Manvi : Huh...um nothing challo.

They came out .

Virat : Bandariyaa itna waqt kyun laga.

Manvi : Nothing challo.

Manvi was hiding her right hand from everyone...she was scared that someone would notice that V.

It was now Virat turn to drive . He and Manvi sat in the front making Rohan and Kiya sit behind ... together .

Manvi had put her right hand under her duppata . She dint want Virat out of all the persons to notice that V.

It was 6:30 in the evening . They reached Chandigarh and were half and hour away from the Vadhers house.

In the Vadhera house Jeevika had come to the door from 6:40 itself . It was 1 month since she had seen her Mannu . The doorbell rang three times but it was either the postman or salesman . Jeevika was getting impatient .

Int he car Manvi too was getting butterflies in her stomach . She was shifting from here to there in her seat . Virat smiled seeing this and drove faster . They reached the Vadhera house at last . Manvi quickly got down the car. Virat , Rohan and Kiya followed her.

Manvi went to the door and rang the bell...Jeevika went walking fast to the door and opened it . There stood her sister...her Manvi .

Manvi too couldn't belive that Jeevika was standing in front of her . They touched each other's face and held each other's hands and then broke into their sister hug ... both having tears in their eyes . Kiya knew their relationship but dint expect it to be so strong over years , Rohan just stood staring and confused ... Virat just smiled as he completely expected this.

Jeevika realesing the hug : Kaisi hain tu ?

Manvi : Theek hoon...aap kaise ho ?

Jeevika nods .

Manvi : Di yeh Kiya .. aap ko yaad hain.

Jeevika : Haan toh...tum ghar aayi thi na ... aur tumne aur Mannu ne woh chai banai thi jis mein shakar nahi par namak tha .

Kiya smiles : Ji di ... and gets a small hug from Jeevika.

Jeevika then notices Virat.

Jeevika : Virat , Kaise ho tum?

Virat : Theek hoon bhabhi , bhabhi yeh mera dost Rohan.

Rohan : Namaste .

Jeevika : Namaste.

And then they hear someone from behind and turn to see Viren coming downstairs.

Viren : Kya baat hain humari saali saahiba aa gayi aur hume pata bhi nahi chala.

Manvi sees her jiju and goes to him .

Manvi : Jiiijuuu...And they both go for their jiju - saali hug.

Viren : Kaisi ho tum .

Manvi : Main bilkul theek hun...completely fine.

Virat comes to Viren

Virat : Not fair bhai ... aapko apni saali mil gayi toh mujhe bhul gaye.

Viren smiles and gives Virat the big brother hug.

Chachi and Vanshikha come too .

Manvi goes and hugs both of them and then introduces Kiya to them . And then come the Hitler and Mogambo of the Vadheras - Swamini and Dadaji.

Manvi sees then come and whispers to Kiya : Kiya dekho yeh dadaji aur Swamini Bua hain , inke saamne todha saa chup rehna .

Virat hears this .

Virat : Bandariyaa yeh tum bol rahi ho ' who jo inn dono ke saamne sabse zyaada mooh kholti hain .

Manvi makes faces at him .

Dadaji : Welcome Manvi .

Swamini just gives her a smile.

Manvi : Namaste dadaji'dadaji yeh meri dost Kiya hain .

Kiya : Namaste .

Dadaji : Welcome Kiya '

All introductions were done .

Dadaji : Vanshikha bte , main aur Swamini bahar ek important kaam ke liye jaa rahe hain'dinner time taka a jayenge.

Vanshikha : Ji Bauji.

After they go , everyone sits on the sofa . Jeevika notices Manvi's mehendi.

Jeevika : Arre Mannu tumhari mehendi toh dikhana.

Manvi scared that Jeevika might see the V ' hesitates to show the mehendi .

Jeevika : Dikhaa naa.

Manvi : Nahi di , acchi nahi aayi hain.

Jeevika : Mannu tujh pe har cheez acchi lagti hain . Chal , zyaada bhav mat kha aur dikha mehendi .

Manvi shows her left hand which dint have the V

Jeevika : Mannu yeh mehendi toh bahut hii acchi hain .

Manvi smiles .

Jeevika : Ab doosra haath dikhne ka kya legi .

Manvi very hesitates and shows her right hand .

Jeevika : Itni acchi mehendi hain " and puts Manvi's hand down .

Manvi relived but Jeevika again takes her hand ' Manvi is super scared .

Jeevika : Manvi tere mehendi mein yeh V...

Manvi : Di pata nahi ... maine toh mehendi wali se kucch nahi kahan tha...par pata nahi ussne yeh V bana diya...but jaane do na

Chachi : Nahi Manvi...jaha tak main janti hoon , agar kisi ladki ke haaton mein kisi aur ke naam ki mehendi lage toh uska matlab hota hain kii jald hii woh dono kisi rishte mein band jayenge .

Manvi : Kyaaa!!! And gives a small glance at Virat which he noticed quickly.

Manvi : Kya chachi yeh sab filmy baatein hain , real life aisa kucch nahi hota.

Jeevika : Mannu aisa ho bhi sakta hain .

Manvi : Di choda na voh sab...mere liye bhagwaan ne jise banayaa hoga voh mujhe kabhi na kabhi mil jaayega...iss mehendi -vehendi se kucch nahi hota aur vaise bhi agli baar jab main mehendi lagaoogi toh kisi ka bhi naam nahi likaoongi .

Jeevika : Manvi main dua karti hoon kii tere haath mein agli mehendi tere shaadi kii lage.

Manvi : Kya diii...

Jeevika laughs : Accha baba ... ab tum sab jake aaram karlo mujhe raat ka khaana banana hain.

Manvi : Theek hain di ... par aaj poori raat aap , main aur Kiya baatein karenge . (Turns to Viren) Jiju sorry par agar aapne di ko book kiya hain toh aapko apni bookings cancel karni padegi ... kyunkii di ko maine already reserve kiya hua hain.

Viren smiles : Nahi Saali saahiba aaj humne aapki behen ke saath koi booking nahi kii hain. Humne aaj raat ke liye humare bhai ko book kiya hua hain .

Manvi : Bas aaj ke liye...poore zindagi ke liye kijiye kisi ko koi problem nahi hain.

Virat makes faces at her . Manvi replies by sticking her tounge out. All other laugh.

They all four go to rest .

 

IN MANVI'S ROOM'     

 

Kiya : Manvi sacchi mein yeh ghar toh amazing hain.

Manvi : Kahan tha na'par sun iss ghar mein bahut saare rules hain'breakfast ke liye ek particular time , dinner ke liye doosra time aur agar time pe nahi aaye toh no food .

Kiya : Kyaa'mera kya hoga'mujhe kaun uthayega? Who the hell is going to wake me up?

Manvi : Tension kyun le rahi hain , main hoon na.

Kiya : Tu ' aur tujhe kaun uthayega?

Manvi hesitates as she knew that Virat always woke her up but would he wake her up now'

Manvi (in her thoughts): Nahi Manvi , who kyun tujhe uthayega ' tu alarm laga dena .

Kiya : Oh hello kahan khoi hui ho?

Manvi : Uh'nahi 'main kal ke liye alarm laga doongi .

Kiya : Fine ' main face wash karke aati hoon .

Manvi : Jaldi aa.

 

AFTER SOMETIME'

There is a knock on Manvi's room door. Manvi opens the door to find Virat and Rohan there.

Manvi : Tum yahan. Virat : Who kya hain na Manvi , yeh mera ghar hain aur mere poore rights bante hain kisi bhi room mein kisi bhi time aa sakta hoon.

Manvi : Toh kya hum dono hii milethe time pass karne ke liye.

Virat : Tumhare saath time pass'pagal ho kya ?

Manvi : Toh Viratji aap mujhe baatayenge kii aap yahan kyun aaye hain.

Virat : Ghadi dekhi hain'8:30 bajne mein sirf paanch minute baaki hain'dinner ke liye bulane aaya tha.

Manvi looks at the clock : Haw'mujhe baaton baaton mein pata bhi nahi chala'nahi toh wapas bhooka rehna padta.

Virat : Toh ab chale'dinner table par.

Manvi : Haan " And calls Kiya .

 

AFTER SOMETIME'

Everyone ate their dinner happily. Swamini and Dadaji were quite pleased with Manvi as she appeared at proper time for dinner.

AFTER DINNER '

Manvi : Di challo aapke room mein jaate hain .

Virat : Kyun'tum kyun bhai bhabhi ke room mein  jaougi'who room humne book kiya hain.

Manvi : Ji nahi who room humara hain .

Virat : Humara hain '

Viren realized that this was the beginning of another fight.

Viren : Arre baba tum dono phir se shuru ho gaye'hum kaam karte hain kii hum sab , all 6 of us ek hii room mein jaate hain aur dher saari baatein karte hain ' waise bhi teen se bhale che(6)

Manvi : Haan jiju yeh idea bhi accha hain .

Jeevika : Haan sab ke saath bhetkar baatein karenge '

Viren : Cool then hum sab abhi mere aur Jeevika ke room mein chalte hain .

They all went in Viren - Jeevika's room.

 

IN THE ROOM

They talked everything about the marriage and now the talk had come to karvachauth .

Kiya : Di pata hain humara karvachauth bahut accha tha'aur iss bar Manvi ne'

Virat cutting her off : Manvi ne vrath nahi rakha tha'hain na Manvi'

Manvi looks at Virat : Haan di ' maine vrath nahi rakha tha'aapko toh pata hain na main 2 ghante se zyaada bhooki nahi reh sakti .

Jeevika smiles. Rohan and Kiya understood that Jeevika was not to know about Manvi's fainting . Manvi was thankful to Virat as he kept his promise .

When they were talking of the mehendi , Virat made a mental note to ask Manvi about the V in her hand .

 They all talked for a long time and then suddenly Viren's phone rang . He went to pick it up .

Viren seeing the caller id : Badi Maa ka phone hain .

Viren picks it : Ji badi maa'aap itni raat ko '.

He listens to what Swamini says and keeps the phone .

Jeevika super tensed : Viren ji kya hua'

Viren : Pata nahi badi maa ne hum sab ko abhi ke abhi neeche drawing room mein bulaya hain .

They all go , super tensed . They see Swamini waiting in the hall and even chacha and chachi were there with them .

Viren: Badi Maa kya hua , aapne hum sab ko kyun bulaya.

Swamini : Viren , relax hume kucch nahi hua hain.

Jeevika : Toh phir buaji kya hua hain?

Swamini : All of you first sit down .

Everyone sits '

Swamini : Tum sab jaante ho kii parso Vanshikha ka janmdin hain .

Viren : Haan badi maa .

Swamini : Isseliye hum aur bauji chahte hain kii hum Vanshikha ke liye ek Birthday party rakhe .

Viren : That's amazing idea .

Swamini : Aur yeh party sirf Vanshikha ke liye nahi balki Inder ke liye bhi rahegi .

Inder : Didi mere liye kyun?

Swamini : Kyunkii tumne kal apna 5th case jeetha hain.

Manvi : Kya baat hain chachu aap toh most wanted lawyer bangaye'

Chachu: Sab tunhari wajh se hua hain Manvi '

 Manvi : Chachu this is not fair , aap humesha mujhe saara credit dete hain'aap yahan tak sirf mere wajh se nahi aaye ho.

Chachu : Toh aur kaun hain jisse humne thank you nahi bola.

Manvi : Woh jisne pehele din se mera saath diya tha , aapko ek amazing lawyer banana ke liye'.mera partner ,Virat .

Chachu : Haan bhai yeh baat toh hain ' main yahan tak sirf tum dono ke wajh se pahuncha hoon '.Thank You so much .

Swamini : Manvi aur Virat tum dono ne jo kucch bhi kiya hain uske liye hum tumhara jitna bhi shukriya kare utna kam hain aur hum nahi chahte kii hum sab tumhe thank you kehte rahe aur subha ho jaye aur Vanshikha yahan par aajaye. So can we start the meeting .

Manvi : Haan buaji '. Aapka party ka plan superb hain.

Swamini : Thank You Manvi aur hum chahte hain kii iss party kii saare decorations kii responsibility tum lo.

Manvi : Main ?

Swamini : Haan Manvi tum ' jis tarah se tumne Viren Jeevika kii shaadi ki tayaariyan ki thi usse dekh kar main kafi impress hogyi thi . Shaadi ke decos bahut acche the isseliye iss pary ke decorations kii zimedaari tumhari aur Kiya ki hain. OK

Manvi : Ok buaji'ab aap dekhiye kii party ke decos kitne amazing honge.

Swamini : I'm glad '

Virat : Bua aap kahe toh main aur Rohan bhi inn dono kii help kar denge .

Swamini : Par Virat hum chahte the kii tum Viren kii madat karte guest kist banana ke liye .

Virat : No problem bua who bhi ho jaayega '

Swamini : Ok ' agar tumhe koi problem nahi hain toh mujhe bhi koi problem nahi hain. Jeevika hum tumhe khana banane kii responsibility de rahe hain .

Jeevika : Ji bua .

Kadambari : Oh ji main na Jeevika ki help kar doongi aur yeh bhi dekhoongi kii didi ko iss party ke bare mein kucch bhi na pata chale.

Swamini : Good then ' ab tum sab jao aur so jao'kal bahut kaam karna hain.

Everyone gets up and goes.

Jeevika : Manvi ab tu aur Kiya bhi jao aur so jao kal bahut kaam karne hain .

Manvi : Ok di'and give Jeevika the good night hug .

 

IN MANVI'S ROOM

Kiya : Manvi tum alarm laga rahi ho na?

Manvi : Haan yaar and takes the alarm in her hand.

 

Meanwhile Virat and Rohan were passing the girls room when Virat saw Manvi putting the alarm . He stared at her ' No ways was she putting that alarm on and waking the whole Chandigarh by alarm's noise 'NO.

And he goes to stop her'he takes the alarm from her hand .

Manvi staring at him : Virat tum kya kar rahe ho ?

Virat : Tum kya kar rahi ho ? Why are you putting the alarm .

Manvi : Kyunkii iss mein se ek pyaari awaz nikalti hain jo mujhe neeind (sleep) mein dal deti hain'

Virat : Manvi mazak mat karo .

Manvi : Kaise sawal poonchthe ho'of course kal mein time se ooth saku isseliye yeh alarm laga rahi hoon.

Virat : Manvi tumhe who din yaad nahi , jab tumne yeh chaar baje ka alarm laga kar poore Chandigarh ko jaga diya'

Manvi : Par who pehele tha , ab main aisa nahi karoongi time pe oothongi.

Virat : Manvi tum jaanti ho kii main tum par bharosa nahi karta hoon .

Manvi : Par Virat ' main kal time pe kaise oothongi?

Virat : Kyun , tum jab last time Chandigarh aayi thi toh , main hi tumhe oothata than a , toh iss bar bhi main hii aayoonga tumhe jagane ke liye .

Manvi : Nahi Virat usski koi zarrorat nahi hain .

Virat : Shut up Manvi ' main kal aayoonga.

Manvi : Paka'bhool gaye toh?

Virat : Nahi bhoolonga , kal 6:00 main aayoonga .

Manvi : Why 6 , tum toh humesha 6:30 ko aate the na?

Virat : Haan par iss bar tumhare saath Kiya bhi hain aur tum dono ko milkar 8:30 ko neeche aana hain ' so isseliye tumhe six ko oothna padege ' Fine.

Manvi : Theek hain.

The boys went .
Kiya : Manvi kya sacchi mein Virat aata tha tujhe jagane ke liye .
Manvi : Haan , she dint see anything wierd in that .
Kiya : That's so cute ...
Manvi : What's so cute?
Kiya : Kucch nahi ... chal sote hain .
 
So guyz that was part 9...i know it was short ... sorry for that . Plzzz like it and plzzz comment .
And guyz one small request if you want me to pm you then just leave the pm me message in your comment . It's easier for me ... Thank You .
 
 

 

Edited by love_angle - 12 years ago
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It was awesome ,
Plz pm me when u continue
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that was a super update plz plz pm me wen u update!!!
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Wow... Nyc part waiting 4 mehndi part... Pm me whn u update