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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Loved your ff !! Such clever ideas, That are still realistic I live the way you portrayed virman and the two couples love


PM me when you update please !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
wow it was such an amazing os
i loved it
you are such an amazing writer ❤️
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Hey guyz thnx for your amazing response. I know I took more time than usual to update this part and I seriously apologize for that … SORRY. Now for part 11.

PART 11

In the morning

Virat knew that he needed patience today to wake Manvi. He dint want to be hard with her as he knew that the bullet wound was yet paining . He went in her room. He saw her beautiful face .She looked angelic while sleeping .

Virat : Manvi … it's morning wake up . He knew that she wouldn't wake up in one patient call but to his surprise she opened her eyes as soon as he called .

Manvi : Tum aaj bhi aa gaye .

Virat : Haan toh…ab baatein chodo aur freshen up ho jao … breakfast ka time ho raha hain .

Manvi : Ok…

Everyone had breakfast and then went to their own work places. Kiya was talking with Rohan , Virat was roaming simply and Manvi had gone to her room .

IN THE ROOM…

Manvi was sitting on the bed with a first aid box besides her. The doctor had told her to change the bandage in the morning but it was not possible for her to do it herself . She removed the bandage and tried to put a new one but it was not possible . She kept trying .

On the other hand Virat had decided to go to his room but stopped when he saw what Manvi was doing in her room . He quickly walked in her room .

Virat : Manvi tum yeh kya kar rahi ho?

Manvi was surprised to see him in her room . : Woh main bandage laga rahi thi .

Virat : Duffer tum yeh kaam akele nahi kar sakti…it will pain . Kisi ko bula nahi sakti thi .

Manvi : Woh Virat kya hain na , Kiya yeh wound dekhti toh yehi pe behosh ho jaati , she is weak aur agar di aati toh bandage toh kar deti par phir poor ek mahine chinta karti kii mujhe zyaada dard toh nahi ho raha aur main nahi chahti ki di aur chinta kare.

Virat : Arre toh mujhe bula leti…

Manvi : Huh…

Virat : Matlab…ek partner doosre partner kii help nahi kar sakta kya ? Lao ab yeh main kar deta hoon .

Manvi gives a slight smile. Virat starts bandaging her wound ery carefully . Manvi looked at him , it was weird how he always was there to save her in any situation…weather it was fainting or being targeted for a bullet , he had always saved her . But more weird than that was that how she always felt safe , protected and amazing when he was near her . She was sp immersed in thinking that she dint know when Virat even finished the bandaging .

Virat : Ho gaya …. And broke Manvi from her thoughts .

Manvi : Huh…um thank you .

Virat : Main kal phir aaoonga…ek week mein bandage nikal jaayega .

Manvi : Nahi Virat tumhe koi zaroorat nahi hain aane kii , main karloongi.

Virat : Shh… and then he changes the topic .

Virat : Waise Manvi aaj Beeji aur baaki sab aa rahe hain na ?

Manvi: Haan…

Virat : Main unhe lene station jaa raha hoon…so will you come too…

Manvi : Sure!!!

Virat : Cool then , ek ghante baad living room mein milte hain aur jaate hain .

Manvi : Theek hain…

Beeji , Chachi and Daboo were to come to Chandigarh to celebrate Jeevika and Viren marriage anniversary . Dadaji had invited all of them but Chachu were to come the next day as he had some work to complete .

After one hour…

Manvi was waiting for Virat in the living room , he was already 10 minutes late , … and then he came down the stairs after more two minutes .

Manvi : Virat kitni der lagi tumhe…kar kya rahe the…pataa hain na beeji ko lene jaana hain…

Virat : Kitna bolti hon…galti ho gayi meri maa…ab chale.

Manvi : Haan .

They went and sat in Virat's car… Virat was put his seatbelt and Manvi was having trouble to put hers as she had to be careful about her hand…and then Virat removes his belt and goes near Manvi to help her put her belt…Manvi felt very awkward , everytime he came so close to her , her heart would start beating faster. He put her belt and then started driving the car . There was complete silence in the car and they both hated it. Someone had to break the silence but who? Virat without any notice opened the window of Manvi's seat and let the fresh air come in the car .

Manvi : Virat…Window kyun kholi tumhe toh AC pasand hain na?

Virat : Haan par tumhe yeh hawa pasand hain…matlab mujhe bhi bahar kii hawa khani thi toh isseliye window open kii .

Manvi : Ok…

And then they again go into their silent mode .They continued like that until the station came . Manvi removed her belt carefully much to Virat's convenience and then they both got out of the car and went inside the station .

AT THE STATION…

Manvi was walking to and fro from the past ten minutes and all Virat was doing was trying that Manvi doesn't get hurt by any baggage . The Chaudhary famil's train had yet not arrived and Manvi was getting very impatient .

Manvi to Virat : Virat beeji kii train abhi tak kyun nahi aayi … plz call karke dekho na…

Virat : Manvi train aa jayegi … tum itna tension mat lo.

Manvi : Arre kaise tension na loo…unki train ek baje aane wali thi par ab toh one fifteen ho gaya aur abhi bhi unki train nahi aayi .

Virat : Chill yaar , and then he saw that a man , who was standing near them , was going to drop his bag at anytime and thatit would hit Manvi's hand , just where she had got hurt and Virat could certainly not ley that happen and so he quickly dodged and saved Manvi from getting hit by that bag . His quick movment surprised Manvi

Virat to the passenger : Bhai saab dekh kar nahi chal sakte kyan … abhi aapki bag inhe lag jaati . Be careful.

Passenger : Sorry ji , galti ho gayi .

Virat : Theek hain.

The passenger was there with his wife .

Wife to Manvi : Sunye ji…aap bahut lucky hain kii apko inke jaisa pyaar karne wala saathi mila…apko ek bag bhi nahi lagne dii…kismet se hii aise saathi milte hain aaj kal .

Manvi just stares at the lady and then at Virat and then again at the lady . Manvi gives her a slight smile , and then the lady goes . Manvi looks at Virat .

Manvi : Thank You…

Virat just keeps looking at her making her look at him continuously . They were so engrossed in each other that they dint notice the Chaudhary family's train come . It was Daboo's voice that made both of then come back to world .

Daboo : Maanviii diii!!!!!! …. Manvi looks at the train and her face brightens up as soon as she sees Daboo and Chachi…She goes running to then and Virat goes walking super fast …

Manvi hugs everyone and Virat takes Beeji's blessings . They all get ready to leave the station…Manvi in her excitement forgot about her hurt hand and went to carry a heavy luggage bag by that hand . But even though she was careless there was someone who cared for her and never let her get hurt and that was Virat .He saw what Manvi was going to do and quickly caught the bag handle … indirectly griping Manvi's hand too .

Virat : Manvi yeh kya kar rahi hon ? Tumhare haath ko chot lagi hain aur raise haalat mein tumhe koi bhi bhaari saaman nahi uthana chahiye .

Manvi looked at him and then quickly removed her hand from Virat's grip .She dint know what to say but Beeji knew.

Beeji : Manvi tujhe yeh chot kaise lagi…

Manvi dint want Beeji to know that she was hit by a bullet as Beeji would be super worried .and so lied to her .

Manvi : Beeji woh main bathroom mein gir gayi…

Virat understood that Manvi dint want Beeji to know about Manvi getting hurt by a bullet and so he kept quite .

Beeji : Dhyaan rakhna chahiye na beta .

Virat : Dekhiye na Beeeji…kitni careless ladki hain …. Kaise jhelti hin aap isse ?

Beeji smiles and Manvi makes faces. They go into the car . Manvi was talking non-stop in the car and somehow ,Virat , instead of feeling irritated felt nice to hear her talk so freely . They all reached the Vadhera House and were welcomed whole-heartedly. Jeevika was very happy to see Beeji , Chachi and Daboo after such a long time .

Jeevika: Beeji aap sab bahut thak gaye hoge , aap kamre mein jaake aaram kijiye aur phir chai ke liye neeche aa jayiiye .

Beeji , Chachi and Daboo go to the room and Jeevika and the rest of the people go to their own places , leaving Manvi and Virat alone in the hall .

Virat : Manvi mujhe tumse kucch baat karni hain .

Manvi : Bolo ..

Virat : Um , room mein jaa ke kare … who kya hain na … yeh baat ek secret hain , toh isseliye….

Manvi : Bade secrets rakhne lage ho aaj kal…challo room mein jaake baat karte hain .

They both go to Virat's room .

Manvi : Boliye Mr. Chep , mujhe yahan kyun bulya?

Virat : Actually Manvi , who kya hai na , kal party mein mujhe ek insaan mila.

Manvi : Virat , kal ki party mein sab insaan hi maujood the…monster ya phir bhediya nahi .

Virat had to smile . Manvi always lightened everyone's mood soo easily .

Virat : Ok Manvi ji , kal party mein mujhe ek aadmi mila , a man .

Manvi : Toh

Virat : Woh mujhse baat kar raha tha aur ussne mujhe ek offer di…

Manvi : Offer aur tumhe…aisi kaisi offer thi woh .

Virat : Manvi , woh aadmi ek music director tha aur ussne mujhe aapni next album mein gaana gane ka offer diya . Aur woh album ek bahut badi movie mein aane wala hain.

Manvi was surprised . Virat had actually got a singing offer… She was so happy for him .

Manvi : Kyaaa!!!!...Tumhe album mein gana gane ka mauka mila hain…that's so cool .

But then she saw Virat expression less face .

Manvi : Virat tumhe gana, gana hain na?

Virat : Pata nahi yaar…yeh sacch hain ki main phirse gana gane laga hoon , par officialy ek singer bana aur woh bhi itni jaldi …

Manvi : Virat , I understand , par tumhe bhi toh ab koi na koi responsibility leni chayiye na . Ab dekho kal ko tumhari bhi shaadi hogi , phir tumpe tumhari patni ki responsibility bhi aa jayegi.

Virat stares at her : Manvi main tumse advice maang raha hoon aur tum ho kii mujhe tension de rahi ho , kahan shaadi ki baat shuru kar di …

Manvi laughs : Accha sorry baba , theek hain serious baat karte hain. Dekho tum jaante ho kii tum ek bahut hii acche singer ho , aur agar tum singer nahi bane toh tumhe lawyer bana padega aur woh tum manage nahi kar paoge . Virat humari zindagi bahut chhoti hoti hain aur issmein hume sirf humare bare mein nahi par humare parivaar ke bare mein bhi socchna chahiye .Virat tum koi bhi decision lo , tumhare family members humesha tumhare saath rahenge par yeh tumhari responsiblty hain kii tumhare decision se woh khush ho … isseliye ek baar soccho ki tumhare ek singer bane se woh khush honge ya nahi . Honge toh bahut accha hain aur agar nahi hoge…toh . Don't worry woh sad nahi hoge tumhare singer banne se . Par Virat pehele apna decision lo aur phir yeh soccho kii family members khush hoge ya nahi kyunkii akhir mein tumhare khush rehne se hii woh khush rahenge .

This whole time Virat was just staring at Manvi . He hardly could get his eyes off her , that philosophical look that was there on her face was beautiful , or lets say being on Manvi's face that look looked beautiful .

Virat : Wow yaar tumhe toh philosopher bana chahiye…bahut paise kamaugi

Manvi : Buddhu tumhe pata nahi , acche philosophers paise nahi lete .

Virat : Matlab yeh muft ka gyan tha .

Manvi : Haan toh , rakhna hain toh rakho nahi toh jaane do . Par ab main jaa rahi hoon , Beeji aur baaki sab ko gifts dene hain . So bye .

She goes leaving Virat thinking . How did she do that , what was troubling him for such a time she cleared that problem in just some minutes . She did carry some magic with her….

AT THE NIGHT…

Everyone was sitting in the backyard of the Vadhera house enjoying hot tea in the cold night . Everyone shared their view on different events taking place in different parts of the world . No one had noticed that some things were taking place right there in front of their eyes and that were the increasing closeness between Rohan and Kiya . Everyone was enjoying when Virat just got up from his place and stood in the center of the area .

Dadaji : Virat kya hua ?

Virat : Dadaji mujhe aap sab ke saamne ek announcement karni hain .

Viren : Bhai Virat aisi kaisi announcement karni hain…

Virat : Bhai kal party mein mujhe ek music composer mile . Woh ek album bana rahe hain jo jaldi ek movie mein include kiya jaayega .

Everyone except Manvi was confused .

Viren : Haan toh…

Virat : Bhai unhone mujhe ek offer diya…unki album mein gane ka .

Now this was news to everyone . Virat got a chance to become an official singer…Everyone was delighted to hear that but were waiting for Virat's answer to the offer.

Viren : Wow … Virat that's amazing , par mujhe ek baat bata tune kya soccha hain .

This question increased everyone's heartbeat ,what had Virat decided….Manvi too was waiting for Virat's answer . She didn't know what she wanted as the answer, all she knew was that she wanted Virat and the whole Vadhera family to be happy on whatever his decision would be . Virat just stood there…he looked into everyone's eyes…into his brother's , his mom's and his Dadaji's eyes and then he looked into Manvi's eyes . Everyone's eyes held the same twinkle and the same wish . And then looking into Manvi's eyes , Virat remembered what she had told him some time back – he had to make not only himself happy but even his family happy and now he knew how his family would be happy and proud of him .

Virat : Bhai maine decide kiya hain kii main woh offer … reject…nahi karoonga . I will sing .

This was it everyone's face had that beautiful smile which Virat wanted to see . He knew now that everyone was super happy on his decision , even Dadaji . Viren stood up and went to hug Virat .

Viren : Virat I'm so happy for you . Tum singer bane jaa rahe ho .

Dadaji : Haan Virat , hum khush hain kii ab tum bhi apne zindagi mein kucch karoge .

Virat was proud , happy , delighted and what not when he heard everyone telling that they were so happy for him . And then he saw Manvi , the person who ,again , had bought him on the right track of his life . He saw that big smile on her face , that smile which made him even more happy and proud .

Virat : Par aap sab ko kisi aur ko bhi praise karna hoga . Woh jisne mujhe yeh decision lene mein sabse badi madat kii . Ussne kahan kii mujhe apne saath saath apne ghar walon ko bhi khush aur proud karna hoga .

Chachi : Haini hain Virat , aisa kaun woh , jissne tumhe intni acchi lesson di .

Virat was about to take Manvi's name when Viren interrupted

Viren : Chachi yeh aapko main batata hoon . And smiles to Virat and goes to Manvi .

Viren : Kyun Virat , iss baar bhi meri saali sahiba ne hii tumhari madat kii hain na ?

Now this was a surprise to Virat and Manvi . How did Viren know that.

Virat : Bhai aapko kaise pata chala .

Viren : Kyunkii bhai main tera bhai hoon .

Vanshikha : Manvi bte aaj phirse eh baar tumne Virat kii madat kii hain . Thank You so much bte.

Manvi didn't know what to say , she just smiled . Viren knew that if he talked anything more about Manvi helping Virat…they both would flush with embarrassment so he just smiled . If not any one, then at least Viren had noticed the increasing friendship of Manvi Virat and he was very happy with that .

Virat : Kal mujhe studio mein bulaya hain first recording den eke liye .

Viren : That;s great Virat par kal hii humari ek bahut hi important case kii hearing hain isseliye humara tumhare saath aana mushkil hain .

Virat understood hi bro's situation .

Rohan : Aur kal mujhe bhi apne office ke kaam ke liye bahar jaana hain . Woh kaam sirf kal ho sakta hain .

Virat didn't mind that too . He understood now that it was important to give work some priority . But then who would go with him . Well he didn't need to worry about that as Viren solved that problem in that minute itself .

Virat : Virat , kyun na tum Manvi ko saath le jao …. Afterall ussne hii tumhe samjhaya aur ussiki wajh se aaj tum gana gaa rahe ho , so take her with you .

Virat and Manvi look at each other . Well Virat didn't mind having Manvi with him and neither did she . But family….

Dadaji : Haan Virat , Viren theek keh raha hain . Tum Manvi ko apne saath le jao . ( To beeji) Behenji agar aapko koi problem na ho toh .

Beeji : Nahin Vadhera saab mujhe koi problem nahi hain . Manvi Virat ke saath jaa sakti hain .

This was it again . Both the head offices had given them permission to go to the studio together . Virat and Manvi both were super happy from inside but didn't let it show on their face . But why were they happy when they got a chance to go together to the studio . What was it between them .

Was it more that the Devar – Saali relationship ?

That was for part 11 guyz , hope you enjoyed it . PLZZZ leave your comments . THANK YOU !

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Very seer and great job please PM me when you update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Wow... Philosopher manvi... Caring and responsible virat and matchmaker viren... Loved it... Gud going... Update nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
woww yaar
mai to aapki fan bangayi
kitni acchi likte hain aap. you should be a writer of romantic stories dude. loved it like hell. loved it when virat cared for manvi
please continue
❤️ 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Wow jst amazing dear.luvd it.i was fantabulus.gr8 wrk.cntinue soon nd thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
loved all the parts ,awesome .

pls continue further and do pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
nice part plz... do pm me 4 ur next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!!!!
Plz continue &
Pm me when u do

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