@jyothi , Thanks so much sweetie . Will put up the next part this weekend
@Rucha , Thank you so much sweetie . Good to see your comment finally and love your profile pic .
@Nehu , Yes , you have told me before too . You are very kind and nice . And so glad you liked my poems . Oh I am so relieved . I haven't written a poem since a long time because of lack of inspiration . I remember Honey used to put these lovely poems in all her FFs and I think even Khush did it once . So , I took that as an idea and decided to write small verses to go alongwith the parts . Good to know that you liked them π
@Jibreen (I hope I remember your name right ) , thanks so much . We are glad you like this FF .
@hemvb , thank you .Haa haa Mitzi ,Originally posted by: mitzification
I can't hold myself any longer ... I have to comment on this heheheh
I just loved that You gave Nikki such a nice flashback .. instead of that stupid diary wala flashback that didnt make any sense ... and now it has just struck me ... if she had seen the pink suit ... the one she wore in AR roka .. tab kya hota haye...I never hated Suman ... that much hehehe so I find Abhi and SUman dialogue v v believable ...I always felt the scene where suman asks nikki for help and where Nikki was draged into the car by Suman and even the scene where lab ka darwaza band ho jaata hai .. these scenes had potential which was not exploited ...So Abhi hits back at Nikki in the car ...ooohBut why does he forget her house and speeds away ?He dsnt wait for her to get inside ...π₯Ί
Hmm , interesting POVs you two have .
And I couldn't stop myself from quoting this one and tell you my point of view.@bold I never said I did. But then I never liked her for some obvious reasons like being a die hard AN fan I hated her spoil some best of the intense AN moments. Arghh I so wanted to rip her apart back then.π@red I totally agree. In that car wala scene,I so wanted that specks wali ajeeb ladki should have been dropped at her place first and then I wanted to see only AN in the car. Kya hota tab?And abt the the scene where they get locked in the lab,I already told you my point o view on that.
Hmm , interesting POVs you two have .
@bold part , Yes absolutely . I agree I too felt like ripping her apart .@underline , Hmmm , if that did happen , I'd think they would just sit in the car and sulk , Nikki feeling awkward and him acting like he doesn't give a damn . And if they did end up having some conversation , it wouldn't go anywhere .He'd only try to insult her further , blaming her and calling her all that he liked to call her without giving her a chance to speak.But I think , he would still drop Nikki home first , unless her house is mch after Suman's π because at that point of time , she is the one he doesn't want to be alone with compared to Suman.And Nehu , on a different note , I have developed a faintest liking and interest for Virat Kohli (I stopped following cricket a long time ago) after seeing him as your display picture for all these days and considering how much you seem to like him π .
Yes , yes darling , he is all yours , officially and unofficially too π.
@red I agree I agree. There would be another showdown of sarcastic remarks because Abhi was still in no mood to hear her explanation at that point of time and Nikki had decided to give him back, So, that's only that could have happened.π
@Italics Ahem everyone is allowed to like but he's officially mineπ And I have become a total besharam piece over here.π³
@green Did I ever tell you that I like him?π€ You guessed that from my dp,right? But then you really don't know how much I like him,no no love him.βΊοΈ OMG I'm a complete nutcase. But then I don't care.π€£
You know after AN fight ... viewers wanted these subtle hints of their liking each other because obviusly no bold declaration of love could occur but we never got them
He remembered where she lived and inadvertently he got on the road to her house . But , when she stops him suddenly and tells him that they have already reached her house , he is suprised with himself that he remembers her house so well and it does annoy him a little that the journey has ended so quickly . But the feeling lasts for a very brief time . Once , she gets out of the car , he feels, he does not have any more duties towards her . She is just an intern , he tries to convince himself and before his resolve would weaken , he decides to get away from her . This is what I was thinking of π
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