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PART-16

                  Geet ran into her cabin & bolted the door & sat in the couch.She remembered the events which went down in the basement.Her eyes welled up & tears started to pour from her almond eyes.


Geet slapped herself & said immediately,"Kya zaroorat thi uske paas jaaane ki."Then she saw upwards,"Aapko tho maza aatha haina babaji aise situation creat karthe huye."Then she slapped herself once again & said,"Kya zaroorat thi unhe kiss karne ki...aur woh bhi moo peh...hayi babaji woh kya soch rahe honge..."




Then her almond eyes widened with shock,"Ab agar woh phirse mujh pe shak kardiya toh,phirse kehdiya toh ki unke paison ki peeche pada hoon mein..."Then she said thoughtfully,"Lekin Geet unhone bhi toh respond kiya tere kiss ko...par kyun????Kya woh bhi mujhse pyaar karne lage hain???"



Geet said remembereing their quarell 5 yrs back,"Geet tu bhi kisse umeed rakh rahi hain.Yeh MSK hai,yeh sirf woh aadha kapde pehnewali Sam ki tarah ladkiyaan hoti haina uski taraf dekh sakthe hain.Yeh patiala suit pahnewaali Geet nahi..."



She felt like her heart has been squeezed by someone & she choked & started crying.She kept her head on her knee which was folded against her chest.She started crying hoarsely.On that time someone said,"Tu kyun ro rahi hai...tu toh khush hona chahiye ki Maan ne tumhe respond to ki..."Geet lifted her head & saw around her that who said that.No one was there & she said innocently,"Kaun bola..."




No one answered but someone said from inside,"Abe gadhi moo khol."She opened her mouth & a tiny Geet walked outside from her mouth & leaned to the table & smirked at her.Geet asked innocnetly,"Kaun ho tum aur tum meri tarah kyun dikh rahi ho?"




That Geet answered,"Mein tumhara conscious hoon aur woh bhi achcha."Geet said puzzled,"Conscious!!!!"Her good conscious said,"Tum ro kyun rahi hai..."Another Geet came from inside good conscious & said,"Usne galathi ki hai isiliye ro rahi hai..."Geet said innocently,"Tum kaun ho."



That Geet said,"Mein tumhara guilt conscious hoon..."Geet saw them both innocently.Her good conscious asked to guilt conscious,"Woh kya galathi ki hain?"Guilt conscious answered carelessly,"Usne Darji ke ussoollon thoda hai.Darji ke yakeen ko tukde tukde kar dala hai."Good conscious saintly,"No,Geet ne sirf apni dil ki suni hai..."



Guilt conscious said,"Tum to wakay mein kamzor hote hain aur insaan ko kamzor bana dethi hain."Good conscious said calmly,"Nahi humari kamzori hi insaan ki takath hain.Jab rishte jud the hain tab yeh kamzori hi insaan ke sabse bada takat hoti hai.Hum kamzor nahi tum ho jo ander hi ander insaan ko khokla bana detha hai.Geet iski baat mat suno,yeh sirf tumhe kamzor kar raha hai.Tumne kuch galath kiya nahin hai.Tum sirf apna pyaar dikhayi hai Maan par jo tumne iske wajahse chupa diya tha 5 saal se."




Guilty conscious said sarcastically,"Haa...pyaar...isne toh dosti ke ussoolon ko bhi tod diya hai.Jis pyaar ke baare mein tum baat kar rahi ho kya tumhare woh Maan samjhega kya???Are woh 5 saal se nahi samjha aur us Sam ke peeche bhagtha raha,woh ab kya samjhega..Woh kya tumhe kadar karega,Tum uske peeche bavadi hote jaa rahi ho.woh sirf apna attitude dikhayega aur kahega kal jab tum usse milogi tab Geet kal jo hamare beech huva woh bhool javo.Hum dono aise kabhi nahi bansakthe,hum sirf dost hai aur aise hi rahenge."Good conscious said,"Kabhi nahi kyunki meine uske aankhon mein mere liye pyaar dekha hai."


Guilty conscious asked sarcastically,"Tumhare liye ya Geet ke liye."Good conscious asked irritatedly,"Mujhe ka matlab hum dono ko kyunki hum dono Geet ke ander se aaye hain,aur tu kya aasman se tapke hai kya???"Guilty conscious said insulting Geet,"Mein toh aasman nahin tapka hoon lekin teri tarah mein aasman ko choone ka advice nahi de saktha.Woh sirf dard detha hain Geet keliye."




Geet was silently listening their conversation & couldn't resist & said,"Bas karo aap dono aur chale jao yahan se..."Guilty conscious said angrily,"Hum toh chale jayenge lekin phir hume blame mat karna ki humne agah nahi kiya..."



And She vanished but Good conscious was abt say something but guilty conscious dragged her immediately & both vanished into thin air.Then Geet saw that she was still kept her head on her knee sleeping & thought that it's only a dream.But Geet decided that she'll distance herself from Maan.


                               Here Maan was standing in basement half naked & remembered the whole events which went on here.Maan remembered how Geet had muted his guilty blabbering by kissing him.And how the kiss had soothed his pain,the time she kissed his body,soul & heart had become Geet's...only Geet's.



On that time someone said,"Kya baat hai Maan bahut khush horahe ho?Yeh khushi kiske liye???"Maan saw around him but no one was seen & asked innocently,"Kaun bola,who's it???"Then he turned & was scared to see himself there.That was his good conscious & said,"Mein tumhare liye bahut khush hoon Maan.Dekha kaise tere chehre pe muskarahat ladhi Geet ne.Mujhe Geet hi tumhare liye achchi jeevan sangini hai.Aur koi nahi...Tum usse shaadi karlo Maan."




Guilty conscious who came from Good conscious,"Oye tu karna bhi mat,agar uske pas tu jaakar apni dil ki baat batayega tab woh tumhe joote se maaregi.Bhool gaya us din jab usne Sam ki sachayi tumhe batane ke liye aayi thi tab tumne dant kar bhaga diya tha.Are yaar samjha karo,agar tu uske saamne apni dil ki baat batayega to woh apne martial arts ke skill se teri haddiya tod ke rakh degi aur tumhara tai-chi skills uske martial arts skills ke saamne tai tai fish ho jayega."




Good conscious said saintly,"Nahi woh Maan se pyaar karthi hai,aur woh aisa kuch bhi nahi karegi...kabhi nahi."Guilty conscious said carelessly,"Woh hello sapne mein jeena band kardo.Tumhe kyaa lagtha hai ki woh is khadoos pyaar karegi jo har waqt apni badi badi aankhen dikatha rehta hai apne saamne wale ko,kabhi nahi..."




Good conscious asked saintly,"Toh phir usne kiss kyun kiya Maan ko???"Guilty conscious said carelessly,"Usne toh Geet ke haath ko bahut zor se pakda tha toh woh kya karthi,usne isse chup karvane ke liye apna moo use kiya aur kuch nahi.Iski badi badi aankhen toh chup nahi hoti dekhne se toh usne moo band karvadiya."




Good conscious said saintly,"Toh phir maine kyun mehsoos kiys uske pyaar ko jab usne mujhe kiss kiya tab..."On that time guilty conscious was abt to retort back but Maan said,"Tum dono ab vanish hojavo nahi toh mein tum dono ko tai-chi se bhagana hoga."



Both good & guilty conscious vanished immediately.Maan turned his opposite side but said confidently,"Geet,jitne bhi door mujhse chali jaane ki koshish karo lekin mein tumhe paa kar rahoonga aur tumnhari moo se mein yeh kehlakar rahoonga ki tum mujhse pyar karthi ho."He wore his dresses & went to his cabin.

Precap-Geet's guilty trip


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago

i just love it

awesome

great part love the way you show their inner feelings awesome

awesome ...

just loved the update

i hope u dont mind posting the snippets here from the previous threads of urs...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2828602

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Hi friends,since am new to this forum but i've started a story called JEEVAN SANGINI.Read it & tell your opinion.I want your support further guys.
JEEVAN SANGINI
CHARACTER SKETCH
SUKHDEV LAL HANDA-He's the head of Handa family.He's called as darji in the whole village.He's residing in Hoshirapur in Punjab.He's the chairman of the Panchayat of Hoshiarpur.He's kind,humble & down-to-earth person who loves his family very much.The whole village respects him because of his attitude.He's B.Sc graduate in Agriculture subject & is a farmer in profession.The very rich family in the whole district & has so many enemies because of his principles.He's the man who gives inportance for his priniciples.
BALWANT HANDA-Elder son of the Handa family & is an excellent player of Sitar & gave so many stage performance in the whole country.He's greedy slightly but if it comes to the case of his family then he won't step backwards by spending his money.He's an History graduate.
Daljit Handa-She's the first daughter-in-law of Sukhdevlal Handa & wife of Balwant.She's hot tempered woman & often loses temper with her husband but is very kind in heart.She's Economics graduate & an excellent Kathak dancer thought her dance is confined to the home only but is an excellent teacher to Geet & Rajji who're learning the dance from her.Balwant didn't wanted her wife to dance in front of public that why he stopped her & made her dance confined to the home only.She looks after the financial affairs of the house.She's like her mother-in-law & is very supportive to her husband.She loves her & her sister-in-law's children very much.
MOHINDER HANDA-He's the Second son of darji & is a very patience man.Never becomes angry on anyone & is a very good man.He's kind humble & down-to-earth person & is PA of the commissioner of the Hoshiarpur
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nice one...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2828936

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CHARACTER SKETCH
SUKHDEVLAL HANDA-He's very humble,kind & down-to-earth persons.He's agriculture graduate & farmer in profession & is very protective to his family.He gives his importance for his principles.Chairman of Panchayat of Hoshiarpur & has a very strict man in giving justice to the suffered people.

BALWANT HANDA-Father of Brij Handa & Rajji Handa & is also post-graduate in History.He's the lecturer of PU college in History in Hoshiarpur town.Very good father to his children Brij,Geet,Rajji.Tito.He's man of actions & never sits silent for any gossips.People is feared of him in the town as he's hot tempered man.

MOHINDER HANDA-Father of Geet Handa & Tito handa & is also graduate in Sociology.Soft spoken & highly patience man.He's the PA of commissioner of the Hoshiarpur.

DALJIT HANDA-She's the wife of Balwant & mother of Brij & Rajji & is an Economics graduate but is house wife.She looks after the financial affairs of the house & very supportive to her husband.

RANO HANDA-She's the wife of Mohinder & mother of Geet & Tito & is very obedient to her husband & her family.She likes Daljit very much as she looks after her like her daughter.She's Home Science graduate & an excellent chef in the house.

BRIJ HANDA-He's an hot tempered guy like his father but is an M.Sc graduate in Agriculture & is a farmer in profession.He's the next successor of the chairman seat as he's very kind,humble,down-to-earth person.He's only rough from outside but very soft from inside.He loves his family & wife Dolly.

DOLLY HANDA-She's also co-operative to her husband & is a Physics graduate & is a government high school teacher.She's so friendly with her sister-in-laws,Geet & Rajji & Brother-in-law Tito.

GEET HANDA-She's 21yrs old girl who has completed,B.E.Architecture in IIT Delhi.She knows Martial arts as it has become very need now in this world but is avery cute,bubbly & innocent.

RAJJI HANDA-She's 18yrs old doing MBBS second year in the medical college in Delhi.She's like her elder sister Geet & is idealising her in everything.She also know martial arts as she has learnt it from her sister.

LALA AMARNATH KHURANA-Grandfather of Maan Singh Khurana,Dev,Vicky,Anwesha.

SAVITHRI KHURANA-Grandmother of Maan,Dev,Vicky,Anwesha & is the head of the family.

RAJEEV & YASHODA KHURANA-They are no more & died in an accident.

MAAN SINGH KHURANA-He's 24yrs old hot tempered guy.He's arrogant,egoist,attitude person.


note-guys,i've started the story of this character sketch at another post.Please read that post.
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CS

interesting...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/2828758

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PROLOGUE
The cool breeze started  fan her face & her hairs blew opposite to the air.The girl stood at the premises of the IIT Delhi hostel seeing the full moon which glared at her as if she had done a big mistake.That girl had hazel brown eyes,long nose,baby pink lips & she was perfect in body structure & stood seeing the moon intently.This was Geet Handa.Those hazel brown eyes had pain & disappointment.She remembered the previous events which went in Khurana Mansion in Maan Singh Khurana's room.

Maan,mein yahan tumhare aur Sameera ke baare mein baat karne ayin hu,"said geet politely.Maan frowned but said sternly,"Geet, mein is baare mein baat karna nahin chahta.Mein Sam se bahut pyaar kartha hoon & you also know this that I won't tolerate any words against her."
Geet said politely,"Paar maan ek baar meri baat to suno,Sam tumhare liye sahin nahin hai.Woh tumse nahin thumhare paison se pyaar karthi hai."Maan was now irritated & shouted at her,"Enough,tum meri khushi nahi dekh sakthi isiliye aise keh rahi ho.Ab mujhe pata chala ki tum itni possessive kyun ho.Kyunki tum meri paison ke peeche padi ho."Geet was shocked & said,"Maan..."Maan said angrily,"Agar itni shock hai amir baneka toh mein tumhe doonga paise bolo kitne chahiye tumhe?"Geet said angrily,"Enough Maan,mein tumhari best friend hoon iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mere baare mein avainyi samjho.Lekin meri ek baat aakhri baar sunlo Sameera achchi Jeevan Sangini tere liye nahin ban sakthi aur jis din tumhe samjh aajayega us din bahut der hojayegi.And she left the mansion immediately.

A tear rolled down from those hazel eyes & said to herself,"No,you've insulted me then that doesn't mean that I won't save you.I'll save you from Sam."Geet went to Adi's home.Adi was amazed seeing Geet there & asked,"Geet,tu yahan kya kar rahi hein itni raat ko,ander aavon."Geet entered his house & said,"Veerji,I wanted to give you this CD.Woh kal aap seniors ki farewell party hein na.Isiliye yeh CD dene aayi thi,isme music meine download kiya hai after Maan proposes Sam,you please play this,veerji."Adi said confused,"Lekin choti tu hi lagathi to kya hota & Maan wants you beside him while he proposes Sam."Geet said hiding her tears,"Haan Veerji lekin mein kal Hoshiarpur jaa rahin hoon,kuch zaroori kaam aagaya hai.Mujhe jaana hein & best of luck for your future."And she was about to go then Adi held her hand & said,"Choti,mein drop kar detha hoon.Itni raat gaye mein tumhe akele hostel jaane nahi doonga.Aur tu permission nahin lekar aayi hein na.Mein tumhaare saat chaltha hoon."Geet nodded hiding her tears not giving any doubt to Adi that she's crying but Adi was her brother & best friend.He would understand her perfectly.


CHARACTERS-Handa family
SUKHDEVLAL HANDA
BALWANT HANDA
DALJIT HANDA
MOHINDER HANDA
RANO HANDA
BRIJ HANDA
DOLLY HANDA
GEET HANDA
RAJJI HANDA
TITO HANDA

Khurana family-
LALA AMARNATH KHURANA
SAVITHRI DEVI KHURANA
MAAN SINGH KHURANA
DEV SINGH KHURANA
NAINTARA KHURANA
VICKY SINGH KHURANA
ANWESHA KHURANA

Other characters-
PRASHANTH KHANDELWAL
ADITHYA KHANDELWAL
SASHA
TASHA
PINKY MANCHANDA
Mr.MANCHANDA
SHISHUPAL
VIKRAM MALIK

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Part-2-page-2
Part-3-page-3
Part-4A-page-3
Part-4B-page-3
Part-5-page-4
Part-6-page-5

PART-1
                        Two girls wearing patiala with full arm entered the Delhi IIT campus.The girl who had dark brown hazel eyes,long white nose,baby pink lips wore a white colour patiala & looked like n angel.Another girl was having light brown round eyes,long white nose & slightly red-tinged rosy lips & wore a sky blue colour patiala with full arm.The girls entered the premises of Delhi IIT nervously but didn't show that on the face.The two girls saw around them,the girls & boys were immersed in their own world.The girls wore modern dresses like jeans long or short dresses which would cover only the knees.After seeing them,the two girls walked silently towards administration office.Both the girls took the time table from the office & walked out of the office.The girl who wore blue dress walked ahaead leaving behind the white coloured dress girl.The white colour dressed girl was about to go outside the administration office but she bumped to someone & about to hit the floor & she closed her eyes immediately but was saved by strong arms.A handsome looking man held her from the waist & saved her from hitting the floor.That girl saw him & was amazed.He had chocolate brown eyes,long nose & exact 'M' shaped pink lips & clean shaven.He wore a tight jeans pant & shirt & his first two buttons of the shirt were opened which exposed the hard chest & his torso was seen as he wore the tight shirt.He glared at her immediately but that girl lowered her eyes & muffled,"Sorry,"and ran without giving the glance backwards.She was scared when she was in the arms of a stranger & first time she felt comfortable.He felt that she was scared giving one penetrating gaze to her eyes which were the window of her soul.He also felt hesitation & fear in those hazel eyes & shrugged & he also went from their taking his books which were scattered on the ground.The girl who wore white color patiala was Geet Handa & the girl who wore sky blue color patiala was Pinky Manchanda her best friend.The man who saved Geet from falling was Maan Singh Khurana.Geet walked towards Pinky who was seeing the notice board intently & said about the scholarship to Geet.On that time someone said from behind a cool girl's voice which has turned into sarcasm in her tone,"I didn't know that this college gives admission to charity cases like you both.Pinky was taken aback by her comment & saw her nervously.The girl wore a very short deep blue denim jeans & white color top.She wore a diamond belly chain which was seen as her top was tied tightly exposing her front waist.She wore high heeled golden sandals & the jeams short would barely cover her thighs.The girl had seen Geet bumping Maan Singh Khurana near administrative office & was furious that she had bumped her boy friend & came to Geet to confront her.This was Sameera Shroff who saw Geet & Pinky top to bottom & gave a disgusted look.She had applied so much make up to her face which was resumed of the make up to a spirit.Two girls stood besides Sameera like body guards to her & saw Geet & Pinky like they're seeing some aliens.
                            Pinky came closer to Geet & whispered something on her ear & both giggled immediately.Sameera or Sam saw them giggling & asked sternly,"What is so funny?"On that time Maan & his gang of friends came there & saw the situation to be tensed.Other girls & boys also not resist Sam as she was girl friend of Maan Singh Khurana.The two girls remained silent which made Sam shout,"Speak up."On that time Pinky was scared & shivered at her sudden action which made Geet livid.Because if anyone messed with her friends then she would never tolerate that.Geet said carelessly,"Usne kaha ki tum bhoot jaisa dikhiti ho seeing your over applied make up."Hearing this everyone squealed with laughter those who stood around them.Sam glared at them & the crowd became silent immediately seeing her deadly glare.Maan saw Geet angrily as she was insulting his girl friend.But Adi saw Geet & was impressed seeing her guts of resisting Sam.Because Sam was the daughter of notable politician Mr.R.S.Shroff who's the M.P.for Delhi constituency.Sam was spoilt,pamapered girl in her house that had lot of attitude.Sam saw Geet & fumed at her,"Just behave yourself am your senior,so give some respect to me."Geet saw her sternly & went from there dragging Pinky but stood halfway & turned towards Sam & said sternly,"Before I give you the respect to you think that do you have the ability to take respect from me?"Sam saw Geet like daggers are pointed towards her.Geet saw her anger & gave a sarcastic smile to her & went from there immediately for her orientation class.
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prologue
interesting...
so Maan and Geet are best friends...
Maan loves Sam...

part 1
nice start...
wow such a comeback to Sameera...

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part-2
             The orientation class started & the seniors & lecturers of Architecture dept welcomed the juniors.In this programme,seniors & juniors were left alone to interrogate each other & the lecturers left them alone.The seniors were Sameera,Maan,Aditya,Hemanth,Vikas,Meera,Niharika,Preethi & Priya & the juniors were Geet,Pinky,Rishi,Jagan,Ritwik,Panchi,Prachi & Srikanth.Adi,Geet & Pinky became friends very easily but Maan was feeling angry when Adi became friends with Geet & Pinky.During the orientation class Maan was assigned to Geet to interrogate which made both awkward.Sam saw them both & was feeling jealous & unfortunately Pinky was assigned to Sam.Sam couldn't see the closeness between Geet & Maan & spoke harsh words to Pinky angrily.Pinky didn't like that & she also spoke harsh words to Sam which made slap Pinky by Sam.Geet saw the slap & was livid & she went & slapped Sam angrily which made Maan livid.Maan said to Geet furiously,"How dare you?"Geet said furiously,"Shut up."Maan was shocked seeing a girl shouting at him on top of the voice.Everyone saw Geet & Maan with shock who stood there giving deadly glare to each other.Maan showed the indez finger to Geet & said angrily,"Listen..."Geet saw his finger & folded it & lowered it immediately which made him livid.Geet said furiously,"Mr Romeo,we're not assembled here to listen the harsh words of your Juliet.If she can't shut her mouth then she can leave.Speaking hrash words to us what she's going to prove that she's superior & we're her slaves.She can say anything to us & we'll listen to her like slaves then she's wrong.Make your Juliet to shut her mouth further or else she have to be ashamed of herself in front of everyone."Maan said angrily,"Tum bhool rahe ho ki tum Maan Singh Khurana se baat kar rahi ho."Geet said furiously,"Tum jo bhi ho insan ho bhagwan to nahi.Sam se kaho ki woh mere doston se door rahe.Mein apni insult bardaasht kar sakthi hoon lekin mere doston ki kabhi nahi.Aur jo woh gande politics khelthi hai yahan sabke saath use band karne ke liye kaho nahin to yeh Geet Handa zaroor band karvadegi."Maan stood there with shock & everyone enjoyed the shock on his face.Adi was impressed seeing Geet's guts & decided that she's the girl who bring Maan from Sam's charms.Because no one had guts to talk against Sam as she's the daughter of politician.If someone tried to misbehave with her or shout on her then that man would be found next day in the gutter murdered.But Maan was surprised at Geet because all the girls of the college drool over him because of his good looks & body but Geet didn't gave another glance to him,just mumbled sorry to him when she bumped to him.Maan was furious hearing her words it was hitting his ego.Adi was impressed by his decision of befriend Geet which had the power to make Maan come out of Sam's charms.Because Adi knew that Sam is after Maan's richness not of his love.And Adi tried to convince Maan about Sam but Maan didn't listened to anyone & always insulted his friends in front of Sam.Adi like Geet as his sister seeing her soft spoken nature to everyone.Geet would be good to her enemies but she was very possessive to her friends.If someone tried to harm her friends then her attitude would change entirely.She would forgive the person if he tried to murder her but if that person tried to harm her friends then she would kill that person without thinking.
                                        
                                     Adi liked this attitude of Geet & was always protective to her.Adi liked Pinky very much & soon their love started to bloom in speed.Maan was having restless whenever he saw Geet but didn't understood this restlessness but tried to mingle with them because of Adi.Sam hated the appearance of Geet & started to become an obstacle in her pathway during classes but didn't work as Geet would have overpower her immediately.Sam would stop Geet & Pinky halfway & tried to insult them.Geet would be silent but Pinky would livid seeing Geet's insult by Sam & would oppose Sam.Sam would have tried to harm Pinky seeing her attittude & would ended up screaming with pain because Geet would twist her hand immediately.Sam was such a b**** that she would try to use her father's party workers to threaten Geet & Pinky.But Geet overcame that problem & fought with them because he had tried to threaten Pinky instead of Geet.

                                Classes started as usual & Geet & Pinky were in the close of watching of Adi after that Sam's party workers fiasco which Maan didn't know.But Maan had seen that whenever Sam's father's party workers heard Geet's name then they would wet their inners immediately.Because no one had seen such a good martial arts skilled woman like Geet & was afraid of talking about her in front of anyone.Maan was feeling a magnetic pull from Geet which was unknown to Geet.Maan was slightly convinced that Geet isn't wrong in her behaviour but hasn't forgiven her the insult of Sam.Then he also decided to befriend Geet as he saw that she's not a bad person because she's only possessive about her friends that's all.
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part 2
wow so nice...
Sameera is really such a spoilt brat...
wonder what Maan saw in her...
and like Geet's courage...