Beautifully written 👏👏
There were two things I really liked. First...I like your writing style. You draw a picture with words and you do it so well that we can imagine ourselves right there in the scene with Arnav and Khushi. This sentence caught my attention and my imagination..."Khushi let those words settle, like passengers in a train, side by side. Grasping their tickets, seated in order."...beautiful!!
Second...I loved the part where Arnav wiped himself with Khushi's pallu. That paragraph brought back the memories of the Haldi episode when everything was going sooo well between the two of them 😒
Please keep writing and thank you for the PM.
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