Arhi FF |Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #1 - Page 89

Posted: 11 years ago
d last para was amazingg...wid d entire update wid lotzz of blushinnggg...😳
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!...it was amazing😃...i just LOVED IT!!❤️
Posted: 11 years ago
That was so brilliant!...Khushi being mad at Arnav and Arnav finding it cute...it is so sweet!...
 
The ending scene was so awesome!! I could imagine it so perfectly! I cannot wait to see what else the rain will bring.
 
Continue soon. Keep up the great work.
Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear
ur amazing u know that!?
u just write so beautifully...its all so mesmerising
and the best part is that each chapter is so lengthy
i really loved n enjoyed this part, esp the end...was wonderful
take care n continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
HOLY!!!! That was awesome!! I don't even have words to describe this master piece! I was literally falling asleep when I got your PM but I couldn't resist reading this and I'm glad I did. That whole Arnav teasing Khushi and that whole rain scene...I mean what girl doesn't want that???? *sigh* You've made me dream and wish today..Thank you! 
Posted: 11 years ago
ooh la la la... thank you for the lovely long post.. i can re-read it until you update on fri-sat :)

i love this rain... it's bringing back the spark and the electricity between the two... i just love this... sigh!!
Posted: 11 years ago

awsome update...

car scene was the best..loved it..

continue soon

Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!! That was probably my most favourite update so far!!!! AHHH!!! The ending was BEAUTIFULLL!! Dhak Dhak!! Hayeee, main mar jawan!!!!

Arnav's naughtiness is sooo adorable!! Khushi gets flustered so easily, its superrr adorable too!!

Can't wait for your next update!!! 
Posted: 11 years ago
aawww i am in love with this ff! like i dont care if it takes you years to get shyam kicked out! i mean, WOW!:!?!
pm me with an update asap :P

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