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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samantha1987200

Hey...I love this story... This is the your best ff for me... plz continue soon...cant wait!!!!😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

plzzz update soon dying 2 read more... 😊
it's just mind blowin... increadible...👏👏 ... 👍🏼...😍


tnx a lot for reading...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja

Thanks for pm
Sorry for late reply
Happy Deca to u!! hope lss have many more!!
now comments

Part 10
so vicky tried his mind reading skill on sia n swastika too!!
don't dare to read swastika's mind (na jane kya kya aur plan chal rahe honge ek toh abhi complete kiy dono ne) and why he couldn't read sia's mind?
Both gals quietly sits on their respective place. Shaleen immediately find it next to impossible, I mean gals simply came n sat quietly. That suits them but this disturbs shaleen n Vicky a lot.
yes me too agree with this girls can't kept quite specially unke best buddy saath ho toh exceptional case zagda hua ho toh but fir bhi woh zagda toh karenge hi chup nahi baith sakti
The bus starts and reaches its destinations-takshila, with any drama and accident. Yes, it was possible because shaleen felt sleepy soon and swastika was busy with her cell phone. Otherwise, this bus was sure to face another misfortune!
very true pata nahi dono aur kya kya tod de!!

dining scene described very well to make understand all!!

so all four couldn't sleep!! hmm kuch ajib sa hai takshila ke hawaon mein!1 haa dono ko unke mates jo mil gaye hai!!
at last shaleen asked vicky abt his drum beats!!
''mere yaar! Swastika is your mate!'' he tapped shaleen's shoulder, as if he has done the most brilliant thing he could he in his existence. He just could not believe how his useless scrape on world, supernatural world friend could have this great n marvelous destiny- such a beautiful vampire!.
and vicky knew tht swasty is shaleen's mate!! yes she is the most beautiful vampire!! for useless crape on world-his frnd hehehehehe!! kya jajba hai apne frnd k liye!!
but y this dumbo shaleen is not believing him he din't find 0.0000001% (sorry zero's cum pad gaye ho toh) possibility of it!!
hope he will soon believe it n his drum beats turns into heart beats!!
hehehe n swasty read words as 'BECUASH'sab jagah shaleen occupy hua hai n vice versa both can't sleep
Vicky kicked him to wake him up, as being nice to him dosen't work when it comes in this task of waking him up. So just at once, kick him and wake him, is vicky's I-S-H-T-Y-L-E.
kya ISHTYLE hai apne best buddy ko uthane ka!! kitane pyar se uthaya hai vicky ne'

''CHALO RAJKUMAR, aa joa vapas asli duniya main, yahan par bhi ek swastika h tumhare liye!'' he started his morning with teasing. Good start.

hehehehe poor fate of both boyz!! had to know abt their tore clothes n had to wear others n get late for class of strict professor shilpa
he really didn't believe his so charming and happening sister can be so serious, she was shockingly unacceptable.
and height to know tht sia n swasty r the reason n they r teasing n mocking of poor boyz
ohh yeh jhanvi kya shaleen k taraf dekh rahi hai but 1 thing happened good tht it caught by swasty too!!
ohh god four shilpa that too strict poor mehul have to improve handwriting now!!
''dude I doubt, yeh meri hi bahan h na! kahin asli wali bahen ka kidnap tho nhi ho gaya?'' shaleen ws worried.
me too believing shaleen now!! how all student will bear 4 shilpa



thnx di for liking,

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shruja


Part 11
Finally the bell rings, everyone comes out of the class as released prisoners, celebrating it, and many still in shock- how did they manage to bear 4 SHILPA'S.
really all must be filling like released prisoners!! celebrating it!!
so both shaleen n vicky got new frnd uday whose shirt shaleen wore.
wow!! girls too meet new frnds!!
akhir jhanvi aur swasty ka amna samna ho hi gaya!!
-5 size figure hehehe sia is proving best buddy of swasty!! and wht terrific name invented by swasty "jingola"!!!! too funny!!!
wow!! swasty n shaleen met again in canteen!1 ab toh milna hota hi rahega!! but jaha jate hai dono ek dusare ko pehele dekh lete hai!!
both saw each other n found same table!1 n again started!!
n their fight was most enjoyable!! loved it! war between cold n hot!!
Shaleen loved her new chromatic blue eyes, they now proved perfect ocean- depth, enormous, colour, everything just perfect. He was lost in them
oye hoye shaleen toh gaya kaam se "yeh neeli neeli aankhe! yeh gore gore gal!! dekha hai jab tumhe hua hai bura haal!!
but she turned his hot coffee in ice!! woh bhi cum nahi!! he bolied it again!! wow fight between sn powers of both!!
and again their dress spoiled!! hehehehe yeh toh dekne lyk nazara hai!! and all flying food competition!! enloyed it!!
but yeh kya poor both!! sab ne saath chhod diya!! really how all sudden they acted like heirs of harishchandra!!
and bechare shaleen n swaty caught by prof. ragini!!and she cut both marks !! so sad but ek good thing noticed n tht was best
shaleen hesitated so much, that swastika could not tolerate.
i loved it so much this fact tht she tried for it!! yeh bhi main shaleen se sikha hai -tive mein bhi +tive dhundhna !1 yaad hai na in last 9th epi he too swastika's -tive view "she can't ignore him' in +tive way!!
Congratulation for crossing 50 pages!!! hope lss cross many more!!


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haan, har jagah positive cheez dhondhna jarorri h...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz care to unres buddy.
i m still waiting for ur comment ma friend.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

so, guyzz i hav updated but...still wid heavy heart i hav written.
as we all rtmc fans are under going a harsh time.

update 12-


Swastika and shaleen stare eachother, just not in a mood to continue further, they move in different directions, all fuming and raged red.

ROOM no. 53-

Shaleen knocks the door, actually thuds the door, bash it with his palm, and at last kicks the door, too. Finally it opens and shaleen enters.

''wo wow wow! Dude..yeh kya haal kr rakha h aapna!...?'' Vicky tried to recognize, what kinda a new game has his buddy played. It appeared a bit childish, but may be he has played coffee-coffee.

''dekho mera bikul mood nhi h kisi se koi bat karne ka!'' shaleen ignores him, and moves towards his own cupboard to change his uniform' his uniforms had come till now, he knew coz even Vicky wore his new shirt, which was fitting him more better than that a bit more open shirt.

Very soon Vicky gets up with the matter..''amazing, just mindblasting, just impossible, I mean just mindboggling' how the scariest hell this is possible. I mean, limit man limit''' Vicky expressed his shock, leaving shaleen all confused, why the hell fact his buddy is behaving a'like a'.like a friend is to be, all bullshits.

''you HEAD'... will you behave?'' roared shaleen.

''kya kismat payi h mere yaar ne, lemme tell u, you and swastika have a purpose here in this supernatural world, you both are born to prove this statement- ''opposite attracts!'''just so perfect you both yaar!..uski power bhi ek dum opposite h teri wali ki..'' Vicky was jumping, skipping throughout this statement, celebrating it behind shaleen who was busy with his uniform, at last too Vicky just stopped becoz shaleen had smashed the washroom door on his face. Or else he had still much part left of his craziness.

Wizardry class-

The first year batch has already occupied their benches. Swastika and sia, were mow even accompanied by jaya n manyata, even shaleen n Vicky were with mehul n uday. The chorus of class was on full swing. They all were discussing about what they expect to be, what did they explore new about takshila and even commented now the different style of class room they had. The class room doorway, on the right inner corner. Students could not see much as its corridor was curved.

''good afternoon class!'' a lovely femine voice filled the air around. A lady with a cute smile and robed in long skirt and shirt, with a vibrant coloured stole enterted the class room, slowly slowly emerging from the curved corridor.

''good afternoon professor!'' acknowledged all student by standing up.

''so guys? How is takshila? Enjoying it??'' she tried to formal and friendly. She was certainly much better than professor shilpa.

''loving it''

''its fine!''

''still left out with some!''

Well the answer was in chorus, but still the wizardry professor could manage to understand after two or three moments. Thanks to this noise, which didn't made prof. PIYALI kandapal to gets much conscious about swastika's and shaleen's compliment, actually taunts-

''disgraceful''

''hell pathetic!''

They both, said this staring each other for a fleeting moment.

''okay guyz! So, lemme not try to avoid it for so long, stick to the fact that I m a professor. So lets start with our first class!...'' piyali succinctly introduced them to their subject. She asked every student to line up and enter the same curved corridor. It was a kind of norrow path. That's why crowd had to move in queue, okay almost queue. Forming a line appears so childish in these years'

Very soon they stood in big hall, which had aroung hundred cupboards, each row having 10 cupborads. Well they all were really curious wat next.

''don't be so surprised, come on guys!...bina wands ke tum wizardry kaise karoge!...'' prof. raised her sweet eyes towards new students.. and continued ''okay guys!... aap log yahn sabse pehle ek vase dekh sakte ho!'' she pointed towards a red, shining red vase, but was not wid an enlongated neck as emerald vase, but instead ws broad and and its mouth ws wide open, short in height but damn bigger in size with diameter of 45cm around.

''this is RUBY VASE. you all need to dip your hands in this vase, the vase will grant you a chit, upon which a number wud b written in black bolds. Search for the number in these cupboards. Sadly, wands here are randomly kept. Sorry for ur inconvenience. You need to explore this all by ur self. It may take few seconds, or few minutes, or even few hours or full night!'' she happily informed, ''so aj ke liye , aap log aapni wand hi dondh le who kaafi h!'' she said while moving towards the the table upon which the vase was kept.

She called the students one by one' they came, started to do the task of today'

''sia, bachpan main Dora-the explorer mera favorite cartoon tha' but iska matlab yeh nhi ki mujhe explore karna pasand h!'' she informed her friend, sia who was busy busy with her mathematical brain, estimating, actually how much wand are der in the hall. She finally spoke

-''1,20,000'' she said so helplessly, all ready to cry.

''kya 1,20,000?'' brilliantly swastika still din had any idea abt what she was speaking.

''idoit! Yahan 1,20,000 wands h!'' she shouted on her, coz sawtika was irritating her.

''ooo'''.'' She took it carelessly, soon she focused on figures, she came up wid-''one lac twenty thousand!'' stretched and clear.now she gaped at sia.

''yes!...'' sia shrugged off her shoulders,and still affix her eyes on swastika, to make her realize such a amazing personality she is-'

She ignored her immediately started her brain storming, she knew she alone just could not search for her wand.

''okay I have a deal for you!'' she erupted in front of sia, sia shivered.

''what?'' sia all confused.

''hum toss karte h! jo harega voh humdono ki wand dhondhega!...what say?''

''nhi!'' sia wid not a moment delay'

''oh please!'' swastika ws so sure that she will win, actually, wenever she is with sia, she thought that nothing bad can happen to her.

''no no no !'' sia ws damn frank, straight and clear.

''please yaar!'' swastika pleaded.

Sia, gave a thought to her deal. Well it had fivety fivety percent chances.-''okay fine!... but coin mera hoga!''

Last part was warning signal to swastika, but she could not decline her.'' Thiik h!'' she pretended,

''mera heads!'' sia informed while taking out a coin from her skirt pocket. Sia tossed. The bounced and swirled to perform simultaneously flips. It finally lands on sia's palm. Sia overlaps it wid other palm. Both sia and swastika had a deep breath. Sia opens her palm, and it was HEADS- SIA WINS.

Swastika bites her lips, oops! She lost' now what, well she cant do what they bet, all alone. She slowly and slowly turns her iris towards sia, who was jumping with victory.

''main tho aisehi bakwas karti raheti ho!... yeh toss karne ka idea hi galat tha' tum tho janti ho na, main bhi na, kya kya bolti rahegti ho!... sia, ignore this toss, hum dono apni aapni wand khud dhondhelenge!'' swastika tried her level best to escape, with the longest stretched smile on her face.

''hey, this is not done yaar swazy!'' sia pointed out.

''plz plz plz sia!'' she pleaded like so much innocent child. Sia knew, if swazy will b given this task search, she can even cross the time limit given by PROF. PIYALI i.e. full night. Swazy can proceed till days.

''okay!'' with those heavy words she moved forward to have her chit.

Sia got 23905

Swazy got 67824

Vicky got 12344

And shaleen got 43298

The whole class moved towards the cupboards. Shaleen followed Vicky.

''tum mera picha kyun kr rahe ho?'' Vicky enquired.

''picha kahan kr raha ho! Tumhari help kr raha ho!'' shaleen informed.

Vicky tapped his head, in his big helplessness. How could he forget, his shaleen the explorer of the century, was not able to find their room out of 30, finding his wand out of lacs, is just not his cup of tea.he knew very well that he hv two wands to search for.

Finally evry one finds their wand, sia n Vicky found it in the cupboard extreme end of the hall, though at different times. did they knew that their wands were kept together?? And shaleen n swazy found it somewer in middle of the room, again at different stroke of time, even their wands were kept together, but they dinn knew.

Every body departs the wizardry room, luckily they all got their wands in few hours.

The school soon assembled for dinner meal, the blood seekers n blood holders were again sected by the opaque curtain. Evry one had their meal, enjoyed it and soon departed from here too. Today's topic of discussion ws actually first day of school for first year, and rest two years had the same topic to discuss- do teachers hav heart?

Shaleen and Vicky bids bye from uday n mehul. They entered their room and shaleen fell on his bed. He saw few acedemic books, took them and simply ruffled its pages, seeing caricatures and pictures. He is aged but he still enjoys this childish thing.

Vicky asked-''far cry OR call of duty?'' , well these are names of vedio games.

''far cry!'' shaleen opted and moved towards his bed. They had long hours playing this rubbish, if we say in a sense of girl.

Vicky soon sleeps, hectic day ws enough for him to make him fall for sleep easily today. Shaleen could not. Reasons were many. The prince was really not so comfortable with his bed cushion, it ws too early for him to sleep, and the biggest reason ws vicky's words-''I mean how you both can b so opposite to each other!''

Finally the prince thought to have a night walk. He made his way towards the corridor of third floor. He saw few vampires mopping the floor using that mop stick, which looked decent. Vampires were enjoying it, coz every task is happy when done with friends, be it duty, or homework sometimes and punishment evry time. they were giggling, sharing jokes and PJs, commenting, playing etc etc. He completed his walk on that floor, but could not find the vampire; his eyes were searching for, unknowingly. He thought of sneaking in teacher's floor- 2nd floor.

He saw her there. She was happy. Yes she was smiling, all alone. Shaleen felt awful-''pagal ho gayi h kya?''he talked to himself.he silently moved towards her. She ws not aware of him. She was really enjoying her mopping session. For a princess like her this was seriously a new and super cool experience. And mean it or not, she wa doing it really good, damn good. The floor which she mopped was really shining like mirror. She could literally see her face in the white marble. She really celebrated this by jumping finally when she had completed. she even thought of bringing sia here, to make her see, let it crack her sleep. Shaleen saw her throughout her task, and even celebration. Even such a silly reason made her smile. She was jumpng and once got misbalanced due to wet marble, but she immediately controlled. Shaleen could not help but responded-

''be careful!'' he shouted, while moving few steps forward.

Swastika swirled to see shaleen standing, with a worry on face. she din cared fr that, but what the hell was he doing here in this hour of night'wait, kahin phirr se tho yeh mujhse panga lene thon hi aaya'

''dor hato!'' she pushed him back, lightly.

Shaleen gaped at her. He is trying to be good to her, be it by mistake, but atleast being good to her, and she is shoving him back.

Well dis was obvious.though swastika lightly pushed him, but he took it rude. he pierced his eyes on her.

''kya, aise kya ghoor rahe ho!..bhot achi tarah se jaanti ho, ki tum yahan sab kuch ganda karne aaye ho!'' she said while pointing towards her crystal clear floor.

''main yahn issliye nhi aaya tha'samjhi!'' he reflected.

''accha tho kyun aaye the?'' she ws interested'

Well, could he say the exact reason, no' actually he himself din noe the exact reason.

''haan ! sahi kaha tumne' yeh sab bigadne aaya ho!'' he stood in front of her with his chest puffed and height increased. Swastika stood like a kid of short stature n innocent face. but very soon, shaleen's wild cat returned.

''acha! Himmat h tho karke dikhao!'' she challenged..

''dekho himmat ki baat mat karo' main sachi main kar donga!' shaleen took dis on his ego.

''haan tho karo na!'' she raged more.

''okay fine!'' he banged her shoulder, and walked on the mopped marble by his comparatively muddy slippers. Well it din make any serious marks, but be it any thing, how dare he walk on the floor mopped by swastika. The fact ws, the floor no more appeared mirror, that crystalline effect ws lost. Now what?

Swastika reached zenith of her rage, her eyes were red and she ws fuming with solar temperature. She fisted her palm, all ready to punch shaleen for his misdeed, but'oops!... her fate'always cheats her'

Her ankle twisted again, it pained her for dat moment,the pain really penetrated her nerves. This was okay, but what about smashing her face to that solid floor.

Thnk god, shaleen is der. He immediately gripped her, clasp her with his arms curled around her waist. But, even he lost the balance. Finally they both landed, all sealed in each others arms, on rude floor.

Shaleen's back ws literally smashed, and his spine really cracked. Swastika's arm which also curled around his back, were hell sandwiched b/w his back and the floor. Her knuckles really crushed. But they knew that they can't shout. After all, this floor belongs to teachers. Shouting here in hour of night would surely be a reason for another punishment. Shaleen gripped his lips in b/w his teeth and sealed them. Swastika tugged her teeth on his shoulder, in an attempt to not shout. Her teeth went deeper as her knuckles pained more. Shaleen jolted his head first to get rid of her teeth, but very soon analysed her action- she was in pain. He immediately lurched, and freed her palm. She moved her fingers and her teeth press on his shoulder decreased. She exhaled and gulped. Shaleen gripped her palm in his fingers, as if trying to give her the warmth of his body, so dat it heals sooner. Shaleen faced her, with pain in his eyes' they both had a eye communication, to which swastika verbally answered..

''main thiik ho' ab dard nhi h!'' swastika undid his grip by twisting her wirst, and even finally breaking the eye connect.

Very soon shaleen felt her ice cold body, moving away from him, the pressure slowly decreased and his ambience became warmer. He closed his eyes to compose himself, to silent the havoc he experiences evry time swastika touches him. Swastika stands and shaleen very soon do it too. All credit goes to their supernaturalism that their injuries n hurt healed so fast, dat evn swastika could stand properly with no ankle injury.(sry guyz, yahan swastika ankle dhwani jaisi nhi h, jo bar bar humme daqsh dhwani scene de :P)

Now, they stood facing each other, and very soon digged their eyes in ground with embaressment, which ws for their stupid act, wenevr they are close to each other.

''kr liya na jo tumhe karna tha!... pad gyi shanti!'' swastika finally break it, she wishpered with high amplitude. This wishper ws surely more than audible.

''tumne hi kaha than a! himmat h tho karke dikhao!...dekh liya?'' why shud shaleen be back then.

''dekho tum aapni had main rho' limits main samjhe!''

''mujhe English aati h, had matlab limits hota h!... sikhana h tho kudh tho thodi tameez sikha lena!''

''acha!... tumhe tho badi tameez h'''

Well dey both started with a pitched whisper but now they were shouting. And this quarrel ws surely successful in cracking sleep of others, specially dat sleep less hitler ragini.

''kya ho raha h yeh sab?'' ragini entered the scene in her black nite robe, same attitude, same voice, and unfortunately same students.

''u both seriously need to be punished!'' she informed in a harsh attitude'''and this time I m serious' ek tho aap logo ko ek din bhi nhi hoa h, and u both' abhi se hi royal khoon ka asar dekha rhe ho!''

Other teachers to joined and shilpa seriously wanted to bang her head, why the hell he is her bro' why he is always behind her reputation.

''kal ki poori gardening tum dono karoge!... cutting, shaping, sowing, watering, everthing '' ragini decided.

''mam!'' shilpa interrupted.'' Mujhe lagta h... h'I mean''' she gulped..''agar yeh dono gardening karenge tho kya pta' shyad takshila k paas koi garden hi na bache!''

Well , surely shilpa's words carried weight.

Swastika n shaleen gaped at those worthy teachers who agreed with swastika, happily, principal ws not der'shaleen n swastika were now on heights of embarrassment.

Their teachers don't trust dem even for this silly punishment..i mean so so so cheap.

''thiik h!...it dosent mean ki tum dono bachh gaye'bilkul nhi!..but just for now'minus 10 again for both of u!'' this ws her last sentence, not giving them a chance to explain, she leaves, other teachers follows.

Shaleen taps his foot on ground, showing his disgrace and leaves.

Swastika don't try to stop him as she knew, it will b initiating another problem for them.

She close her eyes just to see him again, his face, his wry for her'she opened her yes just to find a logical reason, why the hell she is not able to confront any reality wen she is wid him. why she is herself not real when she is with him.

precape- shaswa sword fight.



Oh, so you finally updated my fav😊... this part was superb😛... really awesome... love the chemistry bw Shaleen and Swastika😆

Love
Tc😛😊


My FF:

Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan (RTMC ff):

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27

Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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awesome update rashu
lovely...just loved it
vicky is so cool na..,loved the convo between shaleen n vicky
vicky ne uska mind read bhi kar liya,...nice yr
class scene was mindblowing...swastika is confident girl bt oops toss me haar gyi...
Ye shaleen ko raat mein bhi neend veend nhi aati kya or wo bhi itne hectic schedule ke baad
mujhe to ek bar neend ane ke baad subah hi ankhen khulti h wn bi bina kaam kiye hue..or din mein bi 1 hr soti hun pakka...im lazy a girl..hehehehe

my fav scene when they fight each other in night at teacher floor
bhot hi brave bache h yr jo teacher ke floor par jake lad rhe h...hehehehe
swastika smile to saw her in marble...so sweet n innocent girl she is...i love her...soon shaleen also love her...oho they both fell on swastikas crystal marbel...hehehehe
lovely scene

yr himmat ki baat kar di swastika ne to how could he back off,...gud boy...
Oops again 10 marks deduct
shittt
agar aisa hi chalta rha to dono bina exams diye hi fail ho jayenge
accha h shilpa ne bacha liya wrna takshila ka garden kya wahan roots bhi nhi milegi kya pta 2no ladte ladte takshla ki shape hi change kar de ...hehehe

awesome update thi yr
pls update soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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god actually dey r here in dis supernatural world to prove "OPPOSITE ATTRACTS"...😆
our handsome shaleen 😳kya kre sch bhi to nhi bta skta apni swastika ko... n btayega bhi to kya... sch bolne pe to humare prince😍 ki izzt kum ho jayegi...😆😆
n prof. ragini god hilter ki maa hai yaar... kyun hmesha beech mein tpk pdti hai... chain se so bhi nhi skti...
prof. shilpa... feeling damn sorry 4 her but actually bhai aise hi hote hain jo aapki rep ka kchra krne ka ek mauka nhi chod skte... but den also v luv dem...😊
luved der coffe scene... bechari coffee...
overall great...👏👏 plzzz update soon... thnx 4 d pm...

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Very Nice part Rashmi
Loved It thoroughly
very well written as always
and Thanx for giving this party in form of Update on your B'day

She close her eyes just to see him again, his face, his wry for her'she opened her yes just to find a logical reason, why the hell she is not able to confront any reality wen she is wid him. why she is herself not real when she is with him. oooh Swastika ... It' means ... It means You loved Him Dear 😳 Accept it 😉

N what thir supernatural power always reminds them that they are opposite ( Cold n Warm )😡
Again Ragini... saw you ...plzz Shaleen n Swazy ...plzz do not repeat infront of her
unke piche jo bhi karna h karo .. I m with u 😉
unki fights just awesome , mindblowing
Hey Swastika khud hi muskura rahi h ( just like me ... same pinch )
we don't hv any reason shallen to smile ..vo to choti choti chiso se bhi aa jati h
loved her her act of jumping in happinesss
Both of them fall on each other ☺️
wowww !!! I cud imagine RTMC her .. so sweet
liked swazy n sia 's toss game
Bichari swastika haar gayi 😕
thank god sia ne playfully liya nahi to 1,20,000 wand me se dhudna ppadata
tab to swastika ...tumhe ek saal lag jata na 😆
Swastika n shalen's sward fight ...
want to see
update soon dear
waiting
lov u
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nice update!!!!
waiting for the sword fight!!!!😛😛

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Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

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