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Posted: 13 years ago
ROARRR! OK... now! all your sher shariyee has brought me out to carry out a prowl!
waise have to say.. you guys really take the mick! oyeee poetry aache lekhte ho tum sab... brilliant... aur ek baat hai me thinks.. ummhh i love you...
emily...and afazl,naku... look going to anno..shortly.. so watch his space...
and am working on UD... ..BORROWED lappie pe lekha hai...nooo aaj nehi .bas! .. kal
challo jaane du mujhe have to anno... to all poets...on this thread... here's to creativity...xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks emil unders my dukh dard😒
and thanks for sher
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Posted: 13 years ago
sher from my side😛
peer baba arz kartay hain
dil hai sacha aur dimagh hai kacha
wah wha
dil ha sacha aur dimagh hai kacha
tere msgs nai aa rahey
kya baat hai bacha
wah wah wah😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wah wah . kya baat hai afzal keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: krishaa

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fabulous work hammie,
still reading😊
kriss what a fabulous surprise to hear from you..kaise hai re tu... did pm you too.. thanks for continuing to read PR ..baat sun you have to come back to Laagi forum.. you are needed now more than ever before ..so laut ah.. me calling you... all my love xx hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

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warrrie what a fantastic representation in silhouette .. its just how i described the dress iniform! i could have used it in my UD.. humm..
hammie thank you for yet another beautifully penned update. .it was so well described. .and the hardwork you ve put to describe the occaision is incredible*applauses*. .as a reader i can easily picture the whole event. .be it there uniforms . .the decorations. .can even visualize khan as mamnisha riding that white horse holding a sword😊
thank u thanku...you are a lardki after me own heart.. ummh khan/manisha ke ju fan hai tu, meri theran
Its a big day for the OUTs and their families. . And a proud moment for dutta too. .he has defo excelled as a tutor. .and heres the outcome his students now standing in front of him as one grade higher. .
The whole function was so well organised flawless. .thats what was demanded by the standards set by army
yes.. but one has to be there to feel the ethos of the event, I mean, the music, the order, the presence of rank and authority.

ohh naku's substitute the chunni again back in business. .good use i must say. .and im sure it will travel in that laptop case to accompany him i uk as well. .lucky thing*wink* . . .the wake up calls by naku are always emjoyable too. . .i loved it when dutta said that one could not get everything always so the blessing should be enjoyed when you are bestowed with it. .very well written lines hammie. . 👏
thanks warrie.. but there is a levy as well.. that it mustn't stop one form acheiving or striving for the out of reach...
Hmm once again major geting ready in front of mirror. .this part always makes me smile. .i tell you being a girl i dont have the patience to spend so much time in front of mirror. .aur yeh major*salutes*. 😆
you dont spend before the mirror hain?? you can't be real.. oye kuch time liye ker
in front of the seesha.. kyon are you not a stunner??😆
so the big day arrived and all went well as well. .great to knw that both khan and bhatnager outdid in the whole batch specially for khan for this was the confidence which dutta have in her and im glad she did nt let him down. .apart from the obstacles she faced and her inclination towards her tutor still not diverted her from her target. .well done girl. .
😆 me too like TV serials trying to promote girl power.hummmh but it looks like girls ka power tu Major Dutta hai haaa.

Very motivating speech given by both Parekh and dutta. .just like parekh me too wished both the ladies were here. .but can imagine both sheding khushi ke ansoo and a glaring dutta. .lol
I had to think about the speeches.. had to generalize them.. words that could apply to all defence forces universally.. rather than specific territorial references... so pleased that the speeches made sense ,as words witin the army are used to motivate performance and deliver desired results that can be catastrophic in terms of human lives.

oh thats a great news dutta taking a break for some time. .we can enjoy seeing him in his den. .and in pathanis. .woh *cough* hammie naku ko bhi leave dilwa dou na plz. .han i know she just now got prooted. .par bas aik holiday. .oki stop glaring. .👏
woh kis liye ?so she can bring bloody cups of tea to his den. NO! AND YES YOU ARE right narrow eyed glare...
The precap hainn yeh AS ko kia hua. .kahin shadi karwane tu nahi laagi. .haiii a big hug for her in advance. .hehe😆
haaa big hug for AS... kyon tera laagan ho raha hai dutta ke saath ?.. baaz ah! ummhh.
thanks a lot for this amazing update and pm too. .me already waiting for newt one:-)
thanks warrie .. for using your phone to write this comment... oooh and also baaby thank you for putting up with me in making Daya's birthday thread... couldn't have come about without yours + plus daya's help... you two are my.. right and left hands! all my love to you xxhammie
stay blessed . .lots of love🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee
naku... look thanks for your caring pms... your shers to keep the thread running... love you for your effort and your persistence...ummhh patience..
was waiting for ud since when koi baat nahin ud itna achaaa tha ke loved it 😊
dutta finally completed the job given to him .he did it splendidly .duttas workout & preparation for his parade & u decribed it too tee . how can u have so much of information abt army it makes me feel like reading a officers account😊hats off for research .the parade went fine & OUTS had their moment captured 😊
thank you for warming to parade and all attached to it... as you now my focus in this FF , is the army.. for that is his profession so it will be covered when ever and where ever required..
best part was the last para .dutta ko chooti 😆he deserve a break & to be with his fly & naku .dutta will be in hammiee uk by july .aye saheb aur dutta ka precap .mere dimagg mein already khichi pak rahe hai😆
leave always is, especially if it means he will be back to his original surroundings
hammiee ur country is on my list at the moment watch wimbeldon .fan of tennis 😊
hamieee have a great weekend .ur amazinnng hammiee .ud soon & hopefully dutta suprise naku with undeclared arrival tc 😊
ohhh so watching wimbledon😃.. hummmh.. me too when i have the time.big suppoter of the sisters though..

listen thank you for your on going support for me and also for your contibutions to he laagi forum..have to chk out your ganapat post...have been tring to put UD together... xx all my love hammie..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet

nIce UD ...dutta fulfilled his duty exceptionally...wow! dutta got a break ...precap is amazing...can't wait to read it 😊

hi sonaaa thanks for reading and commenting.. also thanks for remembering me, waiting for the next UD..SORRY for the delay ..awaiting new battery for lappie.. now at his pont using a borrowd one... ..al my love.. xx hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

ranjuuu. you are so kind to have read the back dates..
awesome updates
thank you my mate!
so tasha out for date 😳 awesome
if dutta is your date than you can be sure it'll be summin' odd and out of the ordinary...
baaji like always 😃 settle things for tasha and always trap dutta emotonally😆
baji ke baghar dutta /naku ke zinda gi in complete.. he is the "make "factor between the two
dutta speech lovely but nakku not there
thanks , but had to think about it..carefully.. didn't want it to be war mongering!
so dutta gonna have break before leaving superb enjoy major but without nakku only with her chunni😉
well with he course now finished.. and before heading for UK .. why not a break.. seems reasonable.

AS ka faisla seems like she wanna tasha to marry soon interesting to check out her decision

hummh ranju.. you will have to check in the next UD... thanks for your comment mate .. all my love xx hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Hi hammie,

hi brvv/bart.. ummh don't quite know if you will be able to read this, due to present hectic commitments. I am sorry I couldn't acknowledge your .LOL lovely comment earlier.. thujhe pata tha na ke my lappie was on the blink .. and that it was not a drama /nautanki i was performing before you...
Hammie, Major under shower or just simply in his morning run, whatever/wherever ... your obsession with him isn't just skin deep, goes beyond, full anatomy ki jankari military gyan ke saat muft, muft ... lol.LOL.LOL well tum chorries ko bhi tu vicarious chaska dena parte hai.. along side.. but no one everrr complains , at least not yet..
So the Outs have their results N the clever khan has her reward. Bhatnagar too? ok, I gues anyone fancying major is rewarded handsomely, is it? D'oh LOLLOL oyeee nothing beats you in palang tor funny remarks too good.. my bum dented already!
Again hammie veers off the track, instead of going ahead with major,s message we have another round of Major,s post run anatomy description.Big smile LOL can't help it he is the real usp... of my FF..
Major teasing naku with his usual authoritarian yet romantic banter, about his bedtime companion the chunni, only to be stopped by an embarrassed naku. naku too not holding back by complaing for not bein invited to the parade or any such occasion.. what a stickler of protocol he is. yesh she can complain.. but he knows ke haad mein rethe hai.. you see he knows her well.. although woh bolte hai she knows him more than he knows himself ..hummhh
Ah! The narcissist finally had to move away from the mirrorWink, cause the day was too imp to himself n his students, proud moments awaiting...
Parekh,s words acknowledging his Officer,s efforts as well as the hardwork of the cadets was noteworthy. major too, brilliant with his speech n the ceremony after that could easily visualize the happy faces, the joyous n proud mood of all involved.. not to forget Parekh,s reminder to major of the absence of the two imp ladies. Beautifully written! Clap thank you brvv... it was not easy to write... had to think hard about he speeches... but i think I got as much of a message across , ummh what I wanted too...contentious subject... defence speeches...
Huh! Atlast, major is ordered a well deserved break from work n looks like its back to PN for sometime for some masti n some imp personal decisions for major. yesss baaby ... heaven alone knows what he fauji is going to do...?? you willl please please.. have to find the time to read the UD ... kal will be posted bart...
Hammie felt you have shortened this UD to almost 3/4th of the usual length, preoccupied with other things?? nevertheless thanx for a quick UD, thought u had made up ur mind to skip this week.
LOLLOL gosh there's no escaping your scrutinizing nazrien... was chuckling.. love the pictures.. have highlighted my UD... thank you brvv for putting Them up for the readers of the FF.. DO KEEP IN TOUCH IN PMS.. JAB TIME HO TERA PAS... waise miss tahera a lot... pata nehi kab wapis aye ge... by the way ... composing and sharing poetry seems to be the new raveof this thread... oooh haan you too are part of it .. should have known! all my love... xx hammie
SC orders army to take back retd women officers
PS (no cryptic messages, no innuendos, any similarity to any real life character is purely coincidental n unintended)Wink

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