SwaRon(D3)FanFic: The Little Things Give You Away - Page 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Swayam and Sharon,both are lonely souls...where as both r opposite to each oder..It's getting interesting.❤️ thanx for da PM.continue soon!😃

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nish22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Oh My GOD!! Generally reading stuff never leaves me Speechless but ur writing does and thats huge! Its just so unexpected... And on the whole it was a very cute part... Every time after an update i wonder what will happen next but in vain to figure it out!!

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Again a refreshing update. Swayam has been completely changed which is quite a pleasant surprise for me. ( BTW i also don't like Skype 😆 ).
Waiting to see what course the story takes in this.

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purvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

u rite soo beautifully...!i just luv reading ur FF..!

both r frnds dats good thing...bt 2 diff personality...i m excited for wats gonna happen next...!

update soon n thanks for d PM..!

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AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hey Kankshita..thats a very beautiful name..BTW what does it mean? 😊

Well coming your ff...loved the update...v interesting to see Swayam and Sharon like this.,..Swayam the compulsive cleaner and i love this Sharon, the sarcastic one. Dere character sketch is totally different refreshing. Eagerly waiting to read how the story unfolds. Thnk you fr the PM.

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manasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

ok... First of all me too a jacob fan...! I love the way these two are each oders only friends... Inspite of being two different personalities... I love the british feel in ur FF... Haawww but swayam hating india... *sad* but dats cool... And thnks for the pm and hmm nice to see u r keeping up ur promise of updating regularly...!

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without-fathom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I find their monologue/dialogue a bit disjunctive in this chapter - or is that intentional K?

ps: Oh yes, X and XI make sense now =)

pps: *smacks Sharon for sarcastic passe at Doritos* child-woman needs to acquire quality taste of a junkie 😆

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Savage
I HATE Bella, I LOVE Jacob

Sme pinch...
Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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Radioactive.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

really nyc update...i luv d way u write d FF...very nice...but is Swayam not liking India??? angrez kahinka...hehe...thnx 4 d PM...n update soon...

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Anshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

This Is It Gurl... O.o
Yur FF Got Sumthn' Reallie Different Frm Other FF's ...Though I Ju'x Read This Chapter As It Was Quite Confusin' Coz I Dint Knew Bout The character's First And Then Got back To Read The Other Chapter's Too :">
And Luvd The Way Yu Described The Character'x And Narrate The Story Line..
Must Say..Yu've Got A Nyc Britishian Accent In Yur Writin' Skill..
Update Soon :)

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