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riya

@Riyaa16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: shruja
thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late comment
loved both parts
so both couples went to goa
but yeh tanya ka kya kaam hai
kabab mein haddi!!
loved veer protective n possessive
and the most beautiful romantic scene
woww!!!!!!!! loved it word to word
bechara veer toh gaya kaam se
akele nahane mein maza nahi aata! veer going naughty
and "muze haq hai" ya sirf muze haq hai ? to stare neha?
and i am agree with rashmi
yeh veer mein TMH k prithvi ki aatma chali gayi hai
n neha mein nandu ki
but yeh jai mama n agni q apna dimag (jo hai nahi), time n money waise kar rahe hai
loved ur ff !! its like watching beautiful movie of rtmc!!

thanks dear for ur sweet comment😛

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#632

beautiful update...

its so sweet...😳

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: geetap
r u updating today?

no dear...

today she is busy wid her presentation.

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

no dear...
today she is busy wid her presentation.

aaj tho milna chahiye...😳

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geetap

@geetap

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#635

dont tell me tejjo aaj hume phir ek poem likhne paregi b4 u update, sochlo if u dont be ready for our torture

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: geetap
dont tell me tejjo aaj hume phir ek poem likhne paregi b4 u update, sochlo if u dont be ready for our torture

sorry dear bt im not updating today
sorry,try to update 2morrow
becoz todays my presntn n im little tired
pls cont ur poem
i enjoy ur poem dear
luv u
will update 2morrow ok darling

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#637

part 29

both of them hugged each other and smiled...after sometime his phone rang..but he didn't pick up the phone...he was still embraced her...neha pulled him and said-''veer tumhaara phone baj rha''

he smiled-''to bajne do''and again embraced her..she again pulled him aside-''veer phone uthao''he contracted his forehead and picked up the phone..that was dhruv's call-''veer kahan ho tum jaldi se niche aakar dinner karo''

veer-''han ata hun''and disconnect the phone..he looked at neha and quickly stand up-''neha kitni baatein karti ho tum mein tumhaari wajah se late ho gya...ab jaldi se tyaar ho jao hume niche jaana h''

she stared at him -''accha mein baatein jyada karti hun ya tum''veer raised his eyebrows-''accha thik h ab jao''she went to bathroom for change

after sometime they came for dinner.and all of them enjoyed the dinner

dhruv-''chalo ab chalkar so jaate h kal bhot kaam h ''

they moved to their rooms...
in the room

dhruv to veer n rudra-''hume kal hi saara kaam khatam karna hoga''

veer was confused-''kyun ''

rudra smiled and said-''veer samjha karo...parso bhabhi ka dance competition bhi to h na...dhruv ko wahan bhi to jaana h''then both of them gigled...dhruv throw the pillow on him-''ab so jao''

pooja lying on the bed when he saw neha writing her diary..she smiled and said-''neha so jao bhot raat ho gyi h''

she looked at her-''dii aap so jao mein baad mein so jayungi''pooja stood up from the bed and sat next to her..neha smiled at her-''di aap yahan kyun baithe ho aap so jao na''

pooja-''mujhe neend nhi aa rh h'..

neha closed her dairy-''kyun jiju ki yaad aa rhi h''pooja shyly said-''neha''

pooja hesitatingly said-''neha tune mujhe veer ke baare mein kyun nhi btaaya''

neha was surprised-''veer..veer ke baare me kya''

pooja-''yehi ki tum ek dusre ko chahte ho..mujhe to bta sakti thi na tu''

she lying in pooja's lap and said-''dii aapko btana chahati thi par batayi nhi paayi im sorry''

pooja smiled and said-''veer bhot accha h wo tujhe hmesha khush rakhega...''then both of them smiled

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tanya standing near the window when sapna came nearer and said-''kya hua tannu yahan kyun khadi ho sona nhi h''

tanya without looking at her-''aj phir se veer ne mujhe chod kar us neha ka saath diya''

sapna put her hand on her shoulder-''tannu to kya hua...par pyaar to tumse karta h na''

she turned -''pta nhi wo mujhse pyaar karta bhi ha ya nhi''

sapna-''tannu meine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki veer ko samjhne ki koshish karo...tabhi to use tumhaara pyaar dikhega''

tanya listened her carefully...

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next morning

dhruv went to morning walk with pooja ,rudra,and sapna...but veer was still sleeping in his room...after few seconds tanya came to his room and sat an bed...she was gazing him lovingly..she put her hand on his hea then came closer and kissed him on his cheeks-''gdmg veer''

he turned on other side but still in sleep-''gdmg swthrt''

she smiled-''i love u veer''he smiled in his sleep-''i love u too''

now she was on 9th sky to hear his words..she was very happy n excited..she moved more closer to him when someone knocked the door...she quickly opened the door,,a man standing in front of her

man-''u want something mam''

she looked at him angrily-''no...i don't want anything now leave''

man-''ok mam''and leave

she looked at veer and smiled...then leave the room

after sometime he wake up from his long sleep...moved towards the window and stretched his arms...he was happy to saw dhruv and popja together...then he went to washroom

after sometime

dhruv reading a file-''veer is file par tumhaare sign chahiye''

veer-''kyun chairman to tum ho na''

dhruv-''han but hum 3no ke sign jaruri h''and looked at rudra...rudra smiled at dhruv

veer-''accha to thik h''then he sign the papers

dhruv-''mein meeting mein ja rha hun baaki ka kaam tum sambhal lena''both of them nodded and dhruv leave for his meeting

veer reading a file all alone in the room when neha came silently and curled her hands around his neck from behind...veer turned to looked at her...he smiled put his file aside and pulled her to his side...from a jerk she fell in his lap...veer hold her tightly-''bhot khoobsurat lag rhi ho aaj''

she smiled shyly..veer moved his face closer to her..she pulled him back and laughed...veer looked in her eyes and said-''aaj shaam ko hum goa ghumne jayenge''she was very excited to hear this-''really...wow bhot maza ayega ...sab log saath mein jaakar khoob enjoy karenge h na''

his smile faded-''kya sab...sab nhi sirf hum dono jayenge''

neha was confused-''hum akele jayenge..phir to maza bhi nhi ayega''with a very sad face

veer became angry-''thik h with family chalte h khush''she looked at him innocently-''tum naraz kyun ho rhe ho mein to sirf''before she could complete veer went outside angrily

she was sad to ruin his mood...

at evening
all of them ready to went on goa beautiful beaches...they are very excited but tanya was more excited...she want to enjoyed these moments with veer..veer was upset with neha and didn't looked at her even once

soon they reached at a beautiful beach of goa

all of them enjoyed..dhruv with pooja,rudra with sapna...tanya looked at veer and said-''veer aao na wahan kyun khade ho''

veer moved towards her when she pulled him in water...all of them laughed to saw him...veer smiled and then pushed dhruv rudra.into the water...neha sat on bench and smiled to saw veer

after sometime

all of them went to stalls near the beach for shopping..they busy in shopping...when neha grasped veer's hand and moved towards the beach

she smiled at him..but he turned his face angrily...neha came in front of him-''ab bhi naraz ho''he didn't say anything...she laughed and said-''tum jab naaraz hote ho to bhot cute lagte ho''and stretched his cheeks..he screamed out-''neha kya kar rhi ho tum''
she laughed and curled her arms around his neck -''sorry''

he was still silent..then she moved more closer.-''sorry''he looked at her n pulled her more closer-''tum nhi manogi na..''
she smiled and said-''nhi''and hugged him..veer caressed her hairs...he pulled his head-''chalo ab hume chalna chahiye''she nodded and then they joined them
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they went towards the hotel when veer sensed that someone followed them...he quickly turned ...but didn't saw anyone neha looked at veer tensed..she came nearer -''veer kya hua chalo sab chale gye''

he looked at her-''hmmm chalo''

soon they reached the rooms..as she about to enter in her room veer grasped her waist..she looked at him -''veer kya kar rhe ho chodo koi dekh lega''

he came closer and more closer...her body became colder she pulled him back-''veer jao ''

he smiled and kissed his cheek-''i love u''she smiled shyly

then he loosened his grip and went to his room with a smile

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at night

veer busy in eating..when dhruv and rudra came and joined him...
veer-''to kal ka kya program h''

rudra-''program kya h kal hum bhabhi ke dance competition mein jayenge''

dhruv-''nhi mujhe nhi lagta ki hum jaa payenge kyunki kal meri meetin h mr khurana ke saath''

veer-''dhruv meeting ki fikar mat karo mein chala jayunga ...bas kal tum bhabhi ke saath rehna''

they finished the dinner ..rudra and dhruv moved towards the room when veer felt something strange..he turned to looked behind..he saw a man staring him...veer looked at him and then ignored him

then he moved to his room when he saw neha enjoying her dinner with her sister..pooja looked at veer and said-''neha mein room mein jaa rhi hun tum aa jaana ''

neha-''dii aap mujhe akele chod kar kyun jaa rhi ho''

pooja-''tum akeli nhi ho bye''then she left

neha frowned and then busy in eating...veer came nearer..sat on chair and gazing her..she looked at veer -''veer tum yahan''

veer-''hmmm...'

neha-''tumne khaana khaya''

he smiled smirkly -''nhi''

she stopped eating and said loudly-''kyun????''she put the spoon and feed him with her hands..he enjoyed it

tanya looked for veer in his room...but he was not there..then she went to her room and dialed his no...sapna looked at her-''tannu kya hua''

she throw the phone on bed and said-''mujhe veer se baat karni h pta nhi wo kahan h ...kal uska birthday h ..to mein uske liye gift kharidna chahti hun''

sapna-''to veer ko btaake logi gift''

tanya-''nhi mujhe uske saath shopping ke liye jaana h''

sapna-''accha thik h shayad veer bahar gya ho''

she quickly went outside and shocked to saw veer and neha together...they smiled and laughed together..she fumed with anger to saw her with veer

veer-''neha chalo bhot raat ho gyi h''she nooded an then they leave

veer went to his room after wishing her gdnt...neha moved towards her room when tanya came front of her and said angrily-''tum chahti kya ho''

she was totaly shocked-''meine kya kiya''

tanya with full of anger-''itni bholi mat bano...mere veer se door rho''

now she understand all the matter-''kyun''

tanya-''kyunki veer mera h''

neha-''nhi veer tumhaara kabhi nhi tha''she moved but then suddenly stopped and said-''tum bhagwaan se kuch or maang lo...veer to mere tha mera h or mera hi rahega''

tanya with full of rage expand her hand to slap but neha hold her hand tightly-''yahan sab tumhaare dost hisliye wo tumse kuch nhi kehte...par mein tumhaari dost nhi hun agli baar haath uthaya to todke dusre haath me de dungi samjhi tum''and pulled her hand

she became more angry-''thik h to dekhte h ki subah veer ko pehle birthday wish kaun karta h tum ya mein...or ek baat veer mera hi rahega hamesha''and went to her room

neha was surprised to know about his birthday...she thought something and smiled

Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#638

wowie dowei ud di...🤗...
loved it.
the way neha pampered him, he pampered neha...☺️...
they r really a sweet couple.😳

lekin yeh tanya tintokali- kabhi nhi sudharegi khambhakhat...😡...
sab kuch chopat karne par tuli rahti h...😡...

aur ab yeh kya kiya veer ne- nneend main usse i lov u bol diya.
hO gya na satyanash...😡...
haye! ab tho voh pagal ho jayegi, oh sry! tanya tho pehle se hi pagal h...thodi aur pagal ho jayegi...
kahin voh baad main neha ko koi serious harm na dede...😡...

the way she came n curled her hands frm behind, and he loved her, ...really sweet moments...
may these sweet moments long for longest time...NEER MOMENTS😳

veer has started feeling strange frm dat MAN...
he ignored his staring,😲 at least usse pochana chahiye tha ki kyin ghoor rhe ho mujhe???

ab hoi na! dhwani ki sangati ki baat...ab aayi nah tanya tintokali uunth ke niche...
chaa gyi aaj hamari neha...kya dialogue the-''yeh hath todkar dosare hath main de dongi!!!''🤣

kyun????????/// udd gaye tote tanya tintokali...😆...band baaj gyi na!!!!😛

challenges...i love challenges...
i noe neha will be d one to wish him first...i believe her.
i m with her, god is with her.

VEER KE B'DAY PAR EK SMOOCH THO BANTA H DI...plz...

lets see kya karti h neha veer ko b'day special banane ke liye...but kiss tho honi hi chahiye. must..

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Gauri

@gauri_tvfanatic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#639

superb update dear😊...loved it...it was so long...humein intezar ka bada meetha fal mila😃...thank u so much for that🤗...

NEER scenes were so sweet😳...such a cute couple😳...

so now waiting for spl. NEER celebration on veer's birthday😍...

but someone is following veer😲...oh no...hope veer wii be alright & this plan will be backfire on evil duo😡...

i just loved the way neha answered tanya😆...uska to band baja diya😉...great...

plz plz update soon...eagerly waiting to see what neha does for veer for making his birthday special😍...

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago