OS: Parley by the poolside.

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

This was such a sweet os. Id like to see that happen in the show, but i guess its too late for that. Haha, arnav wanted her to get rid of her pom poms

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Doodle

@Doodle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

I feel so lucky to make this decision to read your OS before hitting the sack on a friday night. Keep writing. 😃

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

This is so refreshing. Although I like Arnav and Khushi bickering but sometimes, it becomes intolerable and I wish that they somehow, have a conversation which really shows how much they understand and are like each other. It's lovely update, Vidhaya. And I think it's not only Khushi but also most of us who like the poolside in Santivan the most 😊
Thanks for the PM.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

hey vidhya

lovely os

enjoyed every bit

loved the cool n calm arnav

thanks for the pm hun

take care

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Lovely OS and a beautiful start for ARHI.

Thanks.

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

nice OS!:) i like it so much! continue soon plis! :)

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

One word: Beautiful :)

Loved the friendly advice they gave each other. This was a very sweet and relaxing read :)

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Nice..LOL on the pom pon part... i am hoping in the serial one day he will yank them off.. Sighh😍

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Have been reading all your OS and SS. You write really well. Why dont you write another one of Khushi and Arnav's trip to Nainital where they get stuck in the dhaba mistaken for newly weds? Its an an old one but could definitely be more interesting than the one that was really aired. It was a an anti-climax to see Aranav leave Khushi all alone in the living room and happily go off to sleep in the bedroom. At least he could have been chivalrous enough to let her use the bedroom :-). And he should have been the one to fall sick instead of her.

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

I loved this short story. beautifully crafted. 👏

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