Moronic script and loose ends

I was watching the wedding episodes a few days back and just marveling at the chemistry of the lead pair and the freshness in those episodes. Kritika has an amazing timing for comedy and spontaneity that is a perfect counterfoil for Mohnish's underplay.

But for the past few days the show has been in free fall over a precipice of moronic script writing. I know that this is a work of fiction but is common sense also now a fictional commodity these days for the scriptwriters? Consider this...Which bank can just withdraw a loan once issued for no apparent reason? You have a grown up neurosurgeon telling her brother idiotic BS that even if you are fired, I can feed you and your wife for the rest of your life? Oh really...and what about their son who has been shown in two episodes so far. Guess his mother has a full time job of scheming and plotting and is too busy to look after him. And the bank manager brother cant even retort back at this stupid sentence and ask his sister to back off? Just think how idiotic that sentence is ...even if it is there to show how angry she is...the brother can say...That is absurd and I can see how angry you are but there are other ways to address your problem.

Dude...wohooo now this is called...calling a spade a spade..
Excellent post...
Th show ka script has been gng down th drain on n on n on...n th way cvs r handling th most central trck..th love trck...its making everyone pull their hair in frustration..!!!
Just hoping cvs wake up in time to salvage this show before it becomes Rajan Shahis Titanic...

I would like to add one more point.
No child is being discharged from the hospital.( shahensha sayad vag gaya :p ). Are they actually getting treatment ? Or sirf kahaniya hi unke treatment hai ? ;)

🤣 OMG...I can't react to this except by this.

s.. the script is pathetic..nower near to dhoop kinare-a real classic.

I had posted this a few days back...

Oh my...major disaster control is needed...immediately!!
I hope ktlk team is reading this and works on their script as well as screenplay.

Agree to your post word for word. This show is going downhill at such a rapid pace that it really is hard to comprehend what exactly is going on. Some of the stupidity was negligible before but now the tom-foolery is so in your face that you can't look beyond it. And even MB's acting is proving to be a major disappointment. The confrontation between Mallika-Ashutosh was AWFUL, there is is no other word to describe it. She's popping her eyes out of their sockets and howling like a maniac but all Ashutosh does is smile-grin-laugh? One retarded expression plastered on his face while Mallika is erupting like a volcano? And why in God's name did he even proclaim his love for Nidhi to her? He very well knows of Mallika's hatred for Nidhi, he bloody fired her for Mallika's sake and he is also well aware of Mallika's feelings towards him..yet he stands there grinning like an idiot announcing how he is in love with a girl half his age. God! And hail the writers of this show, they left the best bit till the last. Mallika confesses to everything she has done to keep Ashu-Nidhi apart YET, despite of hearing everything from the horses mouth, WHAT does Ahsutosh do? Oh well...he gives a serious expression for half a freakin second and then laughs like she cracked a joke and then THANKS her...I mean, he freakin THANKS her for what she has done. Is this guy plain crazy or an idiot? I thought he would be appalled with Mallika, would be disgusted with her antics, would be hurt with all that she has done and feel the need to protect Nidhi, but oh no, he just stands there smiling like some gawky teenager and thanks the woman who hates the person he loves...What NONSENSE? Its so embarrassing to watch an apparently educated, sophisticated, experienced and knowledgeable character such as Ashutosh banging away at car engines, running around to buy t-shirts, and behaving as if he has no common sense whatsoever. Although MB is not entirely to be blamed...this entire issue with single frame shots is getting more apparent. I don't think his reaction would have been the way it was if Rukhsar was actually shooting opposite him in the confrontation scene. Its disgusting how some peoples inability to manage the actors time and organize the schedule properly leads to such dumb scenes being presented to the audience. Despite that, no one can take away the credit for bad scene from the juvenile writers of this show. They have seemingly lost all their creativity and also their ability to think. The dargah and jungle scenes have been as bad as if not worse than the Mallika-Ashu scene. No explanation, no sense, no depth, no meaning, no impact...the jungle scene was the heights of moronic writing. Wake up you neanderthals! What is with the nonsensical writing and who exactly is writing this garbage? Grow a brain for God's sake!


And I've already stopped expecting anything from the "hospital setting" of this show. The senior surgeon is either flipping or signing files or running in and out of the hospital to meet his girlfriend. The administrator of the hospital is busy gawking at the new designer sitting in his office drawing something. Another senior doctor is getting counseling from her jobless and brainless bhabi. And the best of them all is the awesome intern who is apparently a very good doctor but has been in and out of 2 hospitals in less than 6 months and is now eating maggi all day and doing awarapanti with the other useless person in her house. Horrible! What a despicable depiction of doctors! And specially Nidhi, an educated girl is being shown to be as jobless as a beggar on the street and honestly has no ambition to get her career on track after finding her "love".


Ugh...the buaji, mansukhani, suhasini, rohan scenes have become so repetitive and boring that even if you fast forward through their scenes in one episode, it doesn't matter because you find them doing exactly the same thing in the next episode. It is hard to sit through even the Ahsutosh-Nidhi scenes now because it is so poorly written and executed in an even more pathetic manner. This show isn't even 0.5% of what DK was. The maturity, the subtleness, the sincerity has all gone for a toss. Seriously wonder if things in this show will ever pick up...the writers are really pushing the audiences patience now, if they don't get their act together in this new year then God help this show.

Very well said by everyone. Cs have shown everyone in the show so ambition-less for their career. For instance, Rohan: He is an MBA from IIM but only thing he is doing from past one month is eating noodles at midnight. 😕