Originally posted by: -purnima-
DON π³π³ long time no see π...DON vanishes for long πππ...but still glad to have him back ππ ...though, it was π₯Ί to see him still not conscious ππ...- hehe bhale he makes guest appearance but it leaves an impact
Rajveer's Flashback ππ...was touching, poor him ...coz of past, what present has turned out for him & future too seems complicated. π€...whats in store for him - hmmm well lets see
Alekh dat was mean & scary π...taking out blood pipe ππ what if, Naina didn't had re attached it π...thank god, she still somewhere down the line she has soft corner ππ too early to name Love love πππ but still, when Rajveer wakes up, he will be happy to know & see Naina's concern for him π³π³... - well of course no matter what situation she will not kill him herself
Hope gradually things go well for Rajveer -Sameera too ππ - yeh lets see
Get well soon DON π€ ...& Be back Soon(er) this time...& back with a BANG ππ - hehe
Originally posted by: RNpoint1857
Read all parts! It is indeed a very nice story. - thanks very much
I am really enjoying Rajveer's dark shades. But then he is not really that bad! - glad u think so
π And the way Rajveer-Naina's relationship is proceeding it's beautiful. π³He is ready to wait for her, that's something good. π He is using his authority n force just at right place, like feeding her. π Saving Naina from Huda, showed his caring nature again.π - yes he is forcing her as well as not forcing her at the same time . of course he wud do anything to keep her to himself
I am not a big fan of Huda so I enjoyed his character here, I mean the moment I witnessed his character, the way you portrayed it, I somehow knew he is soon going to get beatings from Rajveer π - hehehe ab kya kahu wo isi ke laayak hainThroughout the story my interest remained intact. Looking forward to the future updates π - thanks very much
Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey arwa finally read the update and just loved it the way you used the song portraying Raj's feeling and his trial is going on. I am sure God will give him another chance to bring a change. Raj is anxious to know his decision and God is taking time. - thanks Vertika. yes it is a very critical time and he is very anxious
I just liked a new relationship which is building between Naina and Alekh. Alekh finally found that no matter what would have been the circumstances Naina has started feeling something for Rajveer which is affection and care. - yes over time they will bond very well and she is in denial but she doesn't want to see raj deadAlekh is really not only a good friend but also the bestest brother. Only blood relations doesn't matter it's more than that. He has to take care all the responsibilities when Raj is in this condition but still he is attentive and trying his best to do his best. - that he is . always the best
Naina's frustration came out when Alekh tried to make her realize her new developed feelings. Naina denied it her best and she is not wrong Raj has done that mistakes which has changed her life and now she is completely isolated. - yes of course she has every reason to be mad
Finally Naina has got some senses and she realized that no matter how much she denies the fact it remains unchanged. Alekh's small test made her feel that she has now started to develop a bond with his culprit.- yes it revealed a lot
Naina is now taking interest in Raj's past and Alekh has told her that he was not the same Rajveer which he is now. His life was happy and peaceful just like others but the circumstances has changed everything and now even his real sister doesn't believe her and she trusts Alekh more than Raj. - yes he has had a terrible past due to which he is what he is
Any brother would feel hurt if his sister does it but he is a good brother so he gave all responsibities of Sam to Alekh which he is doing at his best. Naina is taking very much interest in it and asking questions at every moment where her interest was needed the most. - definitely he trusts Alekh more than anything. ANd yes Naina finally is seeing the real picture
An emptiness which was fulfilled by Raj in Alekh's life and he is almost like a family to him. The tears formed in Alekh and Naina's eye for him shows that he will be back and he has to be back as Alekh needs him and Naina needs sometime to understand him more. - yes everyone seems to need him some way or the other
One thing which I didn't get was first why Raj's dad hated him and pempered Sam? And the next thing for which I am waiting for is the result of Raj's trial. I know soon he will be given a chance to prove his point. - well because she never defied him or intervened with anything he did so he loved her and Raj was always a rebel. Surely he has already put his point of view across of how he has done good
Continue soon darls
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