Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19
Hey shreya
I wasn't even intending to read it, I actually was searching for one ansah wrote with a similar title but I got yours instead of hers. So i thought of reading it once U pmed me the linkys of your all the till now works. So I quite loved your writing.
Nice OS sweeety👏 rather I'll say a quite small one but still a perfect one. If U would have drag it much it must have lost its essence. The shorter the sweeter.The way U started it was completely different not even for a second reading those burning hot lines I imagined how will U turn the story all though the name suggested some but I didn't paid a heed. Until U took him away, it was sad indeed sad, but then I guess what U did perfectly suits to your title, ever lasting, somewhere what I understood or 😆 this is what I WANTED to understand that people don't last forever but their love does. Truly, true love never dies this is just not some stupid words said out of sheer sadness rather romance but this is so very true. None of us will last forever but our true love for that one particular will be EVERLASTING...
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