FF-BIRTHDAY GIRLS(UPDATED PART 8) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
that was so sweet!
thnx for the pm
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update, plz continue soon nd thanx for the pm...
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hey love chabilal n ramira
n 17 cards ..idea was awesome

like this part its awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

awsum awsum awsum simply awsum!!! woowww kriyaansh chabilal-ramaira mode! gosh im missing it thse dyas! hayeee kitna cute hai dono!! loved it loved loved it! plzzz updt soon ur a damn gud writer plz updt soon thnkx 4 d pm :)


OH WOW, IM AM A GOOD WRITER THATS SO NYC OF U!!!!!!
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rey giving kriya 18 cards awww luvd ur update ty fr pm n update nxt part soon
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OMG 18 cards!!! dats sweet!!!

continue soon and thnx a lot for d PM!!!😊

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awesome fantastic speechless what else can i say...so sweet n romantic part awww...n than than alot 4 the message that was awesome...
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plzzz come wid the nxt part soon...
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PART 7:
After the dance rey n kria sat on a sofa...
rey-so hw is chabilal?
kria-sweet.
rey-n rey?
kria-super sweet...
and they both hug each other...they sleep on d sofa itself...there in sharons room swaron also hv slept...lyk d way dey were sitting at d end of part 5...
mrng tym...
swayam ke cell me alarm bajta hai...both swaron wake up...dey see each other n realise d situation
sharon-tum...tum ab tak gaye nhi...
swayam-main ...main pata nhi kab aakh lag gayi...
swayam goes to d window n looks outside...ladder to kria ke room ke bahar thi...
swayam inhis mind-ye rey bhi na!!!!!!!he calls rey...
in kria's bedroom...
rey,wiping his eyes-kaun ye subah subah...?????
he sees kria sleeping on his shoulders...den looks at his cell...
rey-swayammm...kria...
kria bhi uth jati hai...
kriya(still in her dreams)-rey kya aap bhi...sapne mai bhi aaye ab khuli aakho se bhi dikh rahe ho!!!!!!!
she blinks her eyes...thinking rey gayab ho jayega...par aisa nahi hua...n his cell...it ws ringing as if koi tufaan aa gaya(sachme)...
kria-rey aap ab tak gaye nai...mom aa gayi to(hyper mode)kya sochegi mere bare mai...
rey picks his phone...
swayam-rey tu kaha hai??
rey-kria ke room main...aur tu????
swayam-sharon ke room main...
both ab kya kare?????????
rey aur swayam apni gfs ko respectively samjate hai...
kria-kya????swayam sharon ki room mai...
sharon-kya????rey kria ki room main hai???...
rey calls swayam...
rey-dekho sayam...ek kaam karo...tum aur sharon kria ki room mai aa jao...ladder to yahi hai...yahi se hum koi raasta dhund lenge...
swayam-ok...
both swayam and sharon tip toe to kria room...(imagine d old detective music-tadang ta ...dang tang tang tang...)
they slowly move 2 krias room along wid luking here n der...2 see koi hai to nhi na!!!!!!!n they finally reach...sharon locks d door behind...
sharon(2 kria)-ab kya kare?...
kria(2 swayam n rey)-dekho...tum dono abhi khidki se chale jao...
suddenly dey hear footsteps ...dur se...
sharon n kria-oh fish!ab inhe chupana padega!!!!!!
rey n swayam r standing in d middle of d room...n kria n sharon marching all over d room trying to find a place to hid their bfs frm der parents...
kria-curtains ke ppiche chup jao...
sharon-no ways.udhar pakde jayenge...wardrobe main chup jao...
kria-arre sharon usme ye dono fit kaise honge...
sharon-washroom mai chup jao...
kria-no ways...mom ne door bandh dekha to shak ho jayega...
swayam-dekho tum dono shant ho jao...hum bed ke niche chup jate hai..waise bhi bahut jagah hai ...hum dono fit ho jayenge...
they both hid under d bed...
ders a knock on d door...
smriti -beta darwaza khol!!!!!
kria opens d door
both mom n dad enters...
both-happy b'day beta(to krisha)...
both kria n sharon-thank u mom n dad ...they all hv a family hug...
smriti-waise ye darwaza kyu band tha????
kria-wo...wo..hum...
sharon-hum secret dance practice kar rahe the na...function ke liye isliye...surprise fr ya!!!!!!!
smriti-accha chalo thik hai...
ab wer swayam was hiding udhar rey ke kria ko diye hue flowers pade the...
swayam-aaa,,...aaachooo...
smriti-ye awaz kaisa????
sharon-woo  wo mom mujhe chik aayi...aaachu...mausam bahut kharab hai na!!!!isliye...
smriti-thik hai beta...ye lo main tum dono ke liye dresses layi hu...aaj ke gathering ke liye...(those anarkali type dresses)...
sharon-dress ...but mom...
kria-thik hai mom...
smriti-kya tum apni mom ke liye itna bhi nhi kar sakti...
sharon-ok mom
rey n swayam looks at each other-dresses...!!!!!hmmm
nw parents chale gaye...reyam cum out...
rey-dress waise achi dikhogi...tum dono...
swayam-rite rey...pehle kabhi dekha nhi...
sharon-ab tum dono jao ...chalo...
both rey n swayam go out frm d window laughing...

so frnds kaisa laga?????sorry for d short update...promise next part will b bigger n soon...plz do comment n lyk