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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Mari sis
How r u??
missed u and ur FF a lot.
yup i've finished all of ur updates.
each n very update was awesome...
this one was very nice... i hope ki mayur will confess their love soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
@faru🤗🤗welcome back sis..🤗missed u too..love y🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ye Kaisi Mohabbat Hai

She moved some stuff here and there to look for diary when finally his eyes fell on a bag; she grabbed out it and sat on the edge of bed. She touched the diary with shaking hands; she took deep breath to stable her raising heart beat and opened the diary and the first word she had read it was her.

Nupur..In bold words..

"Nupur,this is her name.. Gunjan called her and my heart beat had stopped for a moment to hear her name and I looked towards the entrance door of classroom and saw her stepping inside the class. I don't know why but again my eyes glued on her face and I was starring her like stupid.Thank GOD she did not notice that.. Her innocence smile fills strange happiness in my heart and I want to see her smiling like this always.."

She flipped some more pages, in each and every page he had written about Her..she gulped down her lump to wet her dried throat and flipped the next page..

"Finally I got courage and said her I want to be her friend and to my surprised she accepted my friendship without any hesitation..:D I don't think I ever could get that much happiness which I got today. I am so happy. You know I m grinning like stupid and even Maa Asked me when she was saw me grinning aimlessly "Mayu what happened to you?Are you Ok" I got embarrassed ..But never mind. Today is Nupur's day,My day':D"

Her lips curled into huge smile and she shook her head..

"You are so sweet Mayank,bilkul pagal ho"she mumbled and some tears tricked down on her cheeks.

She flipped some more pages and smile spread over her lips to read he had written all the moments of their friendship, their fights, their patch up everything..

She flipped the next page and her eyes caught a paragraph which had written with glitter pen..she anxiously started reading it..

"I don't know what happened to me whenever I see her, my heart start beating fast. Yesterday When she hugged me and I wrapped my arms around her I felt strange urge to hold her like this in my arms forever, I wanted to be with her always I feel ache in my heart when she talks to someone else. I don't know what this is'?"

She held her breath for a moment and gasped air..

"Is Mayank talking about me?"

"But No,if he loves me..he would have told me. He never hides anything from me"

She flipped more pages and in each page he had written about his feelings for that girl but he had not mentioned her name..Nupur was anxiously flipping and reading each and every line to get the clue of that girl whom he loved when finally her eyes fell on a folded page which was paste in the diary. She slightly removed the page from the diary and opened it..

"I love her so much,I love her to that extant I can do anything for her,but I have no courage to tell her about my feelings I don't know how will I tell her I love her. I am scared what if she rejected me? What if she could not understand my feeling? I am scared because I have no clue about her feelings. I don't want to hurt her because of my own feelings..

But when I see her face,I feels urge to envelop her in my arms and say her..

"I love you Nupur!!!..i really love you Nupur"

Mine Nupur..only Mine'*dreamy eyes*"

The page slipped down from her hands and tears tricked down..

"Mayank loves me.." these words barely come from her lips in almost in whisper tone.

Holding her face in her hands and she wept without restraint..

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"Mayank please re-think about your decision."Mayank swung round only to see Benji standing behind him with pleading eyes..

"I have thought" Mayank'said firmly holding his grip over his emotions and turned away his eyes immediately to feel the wetness in his eye lids as he did not want to show him his tears.

"do you think Nupur deserve that man?he is so cheap ''"

"Raj is her husband,Diya's father..Raj and Dia are Nupur's family,her happiness lies in them"Mayank spoke loud trying to hide his own emotions in his frustration, frustration and anger on himself for not telling her that "he loves her"

"But Mayank.."Benji tried to say something when Mayank cell buzzed and he stopped in mid way..Mayank looked at screen, his heart skipped like always to see her name..

"Nupur!!!"he mumbled in surprise..

He picked up her call and before he could ask her the reason why she called him she spoke up..

"Mayank I have to talk to you right now!!!come back home"

Mayank got surprised to see seriousness in her voice and he replied concernedly..

"Nupur is everything ok?i mean I have an important meeting. Can we talk at night."

"No..i said..i want to talk to you right now'come home. I am waiting for you" she said in firm tone and before he could reply her she cut the call.

Mayank was hell shocked at her sudden behavior. "What happened to Nupur?why did she cut my call? is everything fine? she seems upset"

"Mayank who was on call?"Benji asked concernedly looking the changing expressions on his face..

"Nupur"Mayank fumbled coming out of his trial of thoughts.. "I have to go home"Mayank took his cars key and rushed out from there to home..

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Mayank slightly pushed the door and entered in her room,she was standing near window.although he was facing her back but he could figured out that she was in deep thought..

He went closer and placed his hand on her shoulder.. "Nupur!!!"she turned back jerking his hand from her shoulder and Mayank got taken aback at her sudden rude behavior but then he composed himself and looked at Nupur who was starring at him..

"Nupur!!!..what happened.."

She cut him in between and went closer to him. She lifted her head in order to look straight into his eyes..

She clutched his collar in her fist and Mayank looked down at her in utter shock..

"what do you think about yourself Mr.Mayank sharma?Do you think yourself an angle not human being?or you are a person who just thinks about others happiness does not think about yourself or your ego will hurt if you will tell others what is in your heart?"she shook him hard and Mayank heart fluttered to feel pang of hurt in her voice,he had felt tears dwelling up in his eyes but he was out of clue what had happened suddenly or he did wrong which had hurt her? He composed himself gulping his lump and tried to restrict his tears..

"I am Mayank .Nupur,a simple human being like others. So I can do mistakes but I am not getting clue Nupur why are you angry at me..what I did wrong"

He had beard the pain of her separation but he could not had seen anger in her eyes for him.Nupur felt pang of guilt to see tears in his eyes; he was that person who had scarified his love, his happiness just for her happiness.

"Mayank why did not you say me''."she pause a bit still starring in his eyes "about what?"he exclaimed still not getting the clue what was in her mind..

"You love me Mayank.."Mayank jolted in shock after hearing her words looking at her blankly. "Why did you hide your love? Why did not you say just once you love me Mayank?"she was starring into his deep eyes wanted to hear his voice, No ,not only his voice but The truth was that , she wanted to hear those words from his lips as she had been lost her heart in his love, gasping air Mayank pulled him away and tried to compose himself.. "Nupur it does not matter now I love you or not it gets too much late even to talk about this..you are Raj's wife.you have your own life..Dia needs father love, she wants to see her parents together and I promise you I will mend everything. You no need to be worry..i just want your happiness.."

"Do you think I can live happy with Raj?"

He knew it was not question but she wanted to hear what he wanted. As she gazed into his eyes with so much love, his body felt as if it were shedding years of musty cobwebs to become moist and dewy. The Love was in her eyes for him was so strong, he wanted to run from the reality, but at the same time, he wanted to stay here forever.

"Nupur!!!"tears dwelled up in his eyes and he called her name almost in chocking voice still in dilemma ,the love that he had been in her eyes was for Him.

She came more closer and now there were no space left between them, her face was so closed to him that he could felt her warmth breath brushing his skin,

"Mayank today just think about you, not me. Look into my eyes and tell me what you want? Please Mayank don't let me go back this time, hold me, wrap me in your arms, just think about your love, my love, our love.. Please Mayank don't let me go this time.. please don't hide anything today?say me those words which I wanted to hear" hiding her face in his chest she let them her tears to flow and tears slipped down from Mayank's eyes.

"I Love you Nupur..i love you so much"he wrapped his arms around her tightly squeezing her body with her and she smiled in her tears after listening those words..

"This time I will not let you go, will wrap you in my arms for forever,I love you Nupur"hiding his face in her neck Mayank closed his eyes crying nd smiling in happiness..

"I love you too Mayank"she smiled feeling warmth of his arms.

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Epilogue

Three years later!!!

"Beta Mayank be ready. Today Nupur will not leave you" he warned and prepared himself to face Nupur's anger as he knew today again he had broken his promise due to his stupid meeting. They had made plan for going on outing but could not get the time and now he was coming back at night..

Mayank pushed the door and entered in as expected Nupur was sitting on sofa crawling up herself pretending to read some magazine while Diya and Ayan was playing with their toys.

"Where are my princess and my prince?" he opened his arms bending down on floor and both the children ran towards him almost shouting in happiness.

"Papa"

They came in his embrace and he enveloped them in his arms affectionately kissing them on their cheeks while Nupur smiled to see an adorable sight in front of her, No matter he would have tired or upset after coming back home he would do first thing to see his children to picked up them in his arms and to gave them kisses on their cheeks affectionately. How much he had love in his heart for others and she had proud to be loved by this person who was her, only her..

"How is my queen? I know she was missing me so much "sitting closed to her on sofa Mayank placed his arms around her shoulder and pulled her towards him and Nupur came out of her thoughts and turned her face only to look at him and realized she was angry with him.

"i am angry with you"she said giving him angry glare and turned her eyes. Mayank shook his head and leaned towards her ear

"ohh really!!!but few seconds before you were starring me lovingly" he teased her and blushed crept over her face and she could not help but smile looking at him.seeing her smiling he got courage and held her hands in his hands and lifted her face so they could stared into each others eyes

"I am sor'.."She placed her finger on his lips and Mayank stopped in mid way.

"I would love t hear those three words "she almost said in whispering tone smiling shyly as Diya and Ayan was still in room and Mayank lips curled into huge smile, leaning his face closed to her he whispered in loved filled voice..

"I love you Nupur"

"I love you Mayank"

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The End

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
mari sis u ended this ff so quickly
i never expected it...it was really a quick ending
but the ending was mind blowing ...
finally mayur confessed their love and now they r living happilyyy...

wonderful update sweety

loved it to d core


keep it up
Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was amazing end
i just loved it..
very very nice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
not fair maria u ended it ...woh bhi baghir warning k...shock hai yeah...


beautiful part beautiful confession and beautiful life ahead...loved it to core...but i wish u have elaborate there confession..i really wana read tht..as i loved this story..to much...

thnks for writing it
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ending...
loved it...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing update
beautiful ending of beautiful story
loved it
plz do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update!!!
it was really beautiful SS...you portrayed emotions beautifully
i will miss it
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
you ended it?
it was so beautiful SS..i loved this Mayank..
i loved all Mayur scenes,ending was superb and epilouge was so adorable
loved it

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