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Posted: 13 years ago
KYA HOGA IS MAHABBAT KA ANJAAM..??????
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ye Kaisi Mohabbat Hai

"Raj!!!"he muttered under his breath looking blankly at screen with wetting eyes and received the call..

"I hope you did not forget your promise" he taunted reminding Mayank his promise.

"I don't forget"

Nupur dazed at him blankly to heard panic in his voice but could not figure out the reason. "I will be call you later'"Mayank cut the call and turned around only to face Nupur standing behind him. She was looking at him with questioning eyes but he did not want to give her answer of any question..

She approached him "Mayank!!!"

"I am sorry Nupur'"but before she could ask or say him further he walked away without a backward glance.

Today she was expecting him to tell or say her something after what had happened between them few minutes ago. But avoiding her gaze he made exit.

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Mayank leaned back against the door, fighting the weakness, the temptation to pull her in his arms again, demand to know if those moments were worth it to remember or cherish which they spent together.

If only she'd had faith in him, tried to understand his feelings, held on, gave him chance to tell her what was in his heart for her He'd loved her so much, would have died for her ' had died. He shut his eyes, as if to shut her out of his mind, his heart. She wasn't that girl whom he loved she was now someone's wife he had no right on her.

He wiped off his tears roughly rubbing his palm on his cheek and dialed Raj's number.

"I want to meet you. I have something to tell you."

"But what do you want to tell me?"Raj curiosity had risen to hear his suspicious tone.

"You have to wait for it."Mayank's said in stiff yet serious tone.

"So we will meet yesterday at Five star Restaurant at sharp 5.i have some surprises for you"

Mayank disconnected the call and took deep breath to calm him.

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It was the start of new day.

After sending Dia for school she joined Shilpa on breakfast table and then she got a piece of news about Mayank he had been already gone for office .Shilpa told her he was saying he had some important work to complete.

It was not unexpected or surprising reaction of Mayank for Nupur she knew him from the childhood days if he had no courage to tell truth, he gave prefer to avoid that person and now she knew after last night event he was avoiding her.

But she knew it was not mistake of the moment or they did not do that in the flow of emotions but there was something in their hearts for each other ,the way her flattered or she felt urge to be in his arms always like that, it was something which she never felt before.

The few minutes she and Mayank passed with each other in the room, she felt something warm and wonderful travel between them. Still, her new strange feelings or may be love for him frightened her. How was she going to put herself back together if he didn't return that love? For so long she had lived in the shadows. Was it possible? That she could finally walk in the sunshine?

She did not know why but she wanted him to beside her always. She wanted to find out about the emotions she had seen in his eyes, in his heart for her..

Nupur thought something and walked towards Shilpa's room.she pushed the door slightly and leaning her head she looked inside. Shilpa was telling Dia a story they both were engrossed in talking she slightly closed the door without making noise and moved towards Mayank's room.

She pushed the door slightly and peeped inside. She hesitantly moved towards his cupboard and opened it with shaking hand..

"I don't know Mayank but I wanted to know what you are hiding to me"

She pulled out the drawer, started to search his diary as once he had told her, his diary was his second friend and he never hid anything to it.

She moved some stuff here and there to look for diary when finally his eyes fell on a bag, she grabbed out it And sat on the edge of bed.

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here is next part.,.i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

SIS...🤗

Awesome update...loved it lodsss...Beautifully written as usual...bt dis was a very short update...as i really wanted to read further...now wht Mayank is gonna say to dat DEMON Raj...by d way nice selection of d resto name...Demon will b in Demon restro...🤣bt apne yeha end kyun kiya????????now i will be dying in waitng for d next part...plzzz update soon...
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
ps: plzzz update..."PWF"
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Api..🤗

Thanks api for wishing..LOL tum to sab notice karti ho..🤗
Btw i loved this part api...
Im so glad that nupur also feel something for mayank now..And im sure she's gonna find out abt mayank's feelings now as got his diary...
But that raj..uff hope mamla isi mulakat mein khatam ho jaye...
Loved it loads api..
Update soon ok..😳
Edited by Auroni.92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Anila,Auro🤗🤗 Auro congrats sweety for becoming IF Dazzler🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

SIS...🤗

Awesome update... loved it lodsss... Beautifully written as usual... bt dis was a very short update... as i really wanted to read further... now wht Mayank is gonna say to dat DEMON Raj... by d way nice selection of d resto name...Demon will b in Demon restro...🤣 bt apne yeha end kyun kiya???????? now i will be dying in waitng for d next part... plzzz update soon...
loved it lodsss
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
ps: plzzz update..."PWF"

ye toh main ne socha nahi tha🤣 Thanksss sweety...everything will be clear in next part😉
i ll update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow. ab mayank kya kahega raj ko. hope nupur finds truth of mayank. continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely ..cont soon dear ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely lovely.. update.. amazing...

what is going between Raj and Mayank
and about what thing.. Mayank is so tensed...
well very well. written..
so finally Nupur is trying to see ..
what Mayank has hide in his heart which
is unknown to her..
for so.. long...

i just hope for good..
very very nice update
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago

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