*Mayur SS/OS Gallary#4* NTL on pg 151 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ending.

bt very rush ending i think😕

bt wht abt raj-mayank hidden condition???😕

aur raj ne aise hi diya ki custody nupur ko de di???😕

bdw, very nice ending.😊

finally mayur n family r happily together...n diya too accept mayank as her father.😊

thanks for the pm.


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u end this on a quick notuce. this is not fair and epilogue was also too short :(
but it was really a nice ss...
i loved it...
hope u'll cum up soon wid another exciting ss or ff...
love ya dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
whaaaoo...the first part is sooo sooo nice!
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Posted: 13 years ago
itna jaldi khatam!! nooohhh :(( it was tooo gooodd!
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Posted: 13 years ago
A TRULY FANTASTIC ENDING PART! WRITE MORE! CONTINUE TO PM ME! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

After a month or two i am going to post anything on my OS/SS gallary...this OS is my Winner entry for Valentine OS Contest..i hope u ll liked it
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Indeed it was again beautiful valentine day


The weather was bit chilled and air was cold and soft, standing at the window of her room Nupur closing her eyes feeling the cool breeze playing with her hairs and touching her soft skin. She opened her eyes and gave look to clock hanging on wall,

"8.PM!Again he will be come late" she murmured under her breath shaking her head slightly, As usual she was waiting for her husband, Mayank Malik. A well known businessman, who always gave preference to his business but there was another fact too and that was he loved his wife a lot and that was the reason which did never let her feel that he had took her as granted. Though there were less moment which she could count or remember when they were together and had spent some time together alone.

She could remember the day when he had proposed her, how much he was nervous and hesitant to even say her "he loves her"and when he said those words that too in typical businessman tone like he was going to finalize an important deal. Her lips curled into smile. But that was the thing which made her fall in love with him truly, madly, deeply. She liked his honesty, his simplicity and had accepted him the way he was. So she had never complained him about anything.

"Nupur!!!"two arms crawled up her waist from behind and she shuddered to feel soft warmth breath closed to her ears. She opened her eyes and smiled. After how many days she felt his strong arms around her body, squeezing her possessively. "Mayank!!!"his name escaped from her lips in bit surprising tone and she turned around still in his strong embrace and looked up only to find his two brown hazel eyes starring her with soft smile on his lips. The intensity in his eyes had made her heart skipped and then she realized after how many days she was actually seeing the same intensity and passion in his eyes which she had felt that day when he had confessed his love to her.

"Ap aa gaye!!!" trying to control her raising heartbeat to feel herself in his arms. He leaned forward starring in her eyes.. "Are you expecting someone else" he said in bit naughty tone widened her eyes in shocked she playfully hit his chest. "It's not like that.. I was just asking today..you."she startled feeling his intense gaze on her and felt her cheeks turned red. She opened her mouth to say something when he shushed her by keeping his finger on her lips and Nupur rolled her eyes in confusion and instead, his full lips curled up at the corners which caused a definite break in her heart rhythm.

"Cant you give me chance to say you something like you gave me at the same day 14the February a one year ago" she stared into his eyes, he was too serious but love was reflecting from his eyes was raising her heart beat fast. He brushed her hair aside from her face which were blowing due to air and was disturbing his view. She held her breath for a moment feeling the contact between their skins and slight audible moaned escaped from her lips. He cupped her face and made her look at him,

"I love you Nupur"

The same loved filled, husky voice flattered her heart and she stared into the glittering sincerity of his eyes and her lips curled into huge smile while some tears brimmed in her eyes. She felt as all complains, all the memories of those moments which she had spent without him waiting for him had been removed after listening those three words. He removed those tears from her cheeks holding her face in his hands'

"I Love you Nupur, truly, madly, deeply. You are my life, you know Nupur after spending a busy day in office when I come back and see you standing near the window waiting for me engulfs happiness in my heart that I have someone in my life, who loves me immensely. Thanks for loving me back "he smiled completing his sentence in huskily voice and she grinned starring into her eyes. He pulled her for hug and she willingly came in his arms, in her husbands' arms.

"I love you too Mayank"she whispered hiding her face in his arms and he tightly enveloped her in his arms. After how many days they were feeling each other presence. They pulled apart and Mayank lovingly caressed her cheek, holding her hand he dragged her towards mirror. He stepped behind and hugged her from back encircling his arms possessively around her waist while Nupur was taken aback at his sudden action looking at him surprisingly." I have something for you"he whispered in her ears. "What"she said anxiously and starring her reflection in mirror he smiled to see a small frown on her face.

He reached into the pocket of his suit .He put a closed fist in front of her face, and then opened it. A diamond necklace with a heart shaped pendant dangled from his fingers, "this." Her sharp intake of breath was audible, "Oh..Mayank it's beautiful." She felt her eyes moisten. "But not more than you" he said kissing her cheek and slight blushed crept over her face. "Happy Valentine day and happy our first confession anniversary too" He fastened the necklace around her neck and planted kiss on her cheek. She looked at him surprisingly, he remembered today was valentine day, their first confession anniversary. She thought he had forgotten.

She shook her head as she always claimed that she knew her husband very well but today how would she forgot the fact" he loves her truly, madly deeply and this fact cant never be changed". She turned around and encircled her arms around his neck and this time Mayank turn to gave her confuse expression.."Now it's my Turn!!!i mean you deserve reward" she said looking at his lips but then the smile which had been appeared on Mayank's lips to see her blushing had took her breath for a moment and she lowered her eye lashes.He pulled her towards him and she collapsed with his chest, holding her breath she looked up and he leaned down looking at her lips.

"Thanks for beautiful reward" he whispered huskily and she closed her eyes feeling His warm breath feathered across her cheek. He slightly brushed his lips with her and captured her lips for passionate kiss...feeling each other close to them, they surrendered them to each other...

It was indeed another beautiful valentine day...

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i hope u ll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
indeed it was a beautiful os.. congrats once again dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

indeed it was a beautiful os.. congrats once again dear

Fiza🤗🤗 Thanksss dear🤗and congratsss to u ,too🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was indeed beautifull os..
so lovely..
and amazing...

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