Paper Boats - A Poem Dedicated to Khushi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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We know how giving and loving our lovely Khushi is. She does not hesitate to throw away everything she wants to give happiness to her near and dear ones.

This poem I wrote many many years ago, I dedicate to Khushi, she is like this person who will not hesitate to tear every single page from her book so she can give a moments happiness and joy to her loved ones, like the children in this poem. She will not hesitate to tear her life apart and give up her love if it meant bringing happiness to her kin.

Here is to you Khushi

Paper Boats

B
y the river reading the book of my life
I see notes and passages of a lost time
The autumn breeze brings with it
Giggles of children downstream by the bridge
Reminding me of lost innocence
Of lost time, of empty presence

On a whim I tear the first page of the book
That had my beginning, my start, my root
And I folded it into a paper boat
And set it afloat

It bobbed down the river
Reaching a lonesome kid
Who reached out and pulled it over
And looked at me with a smile for more

I tore the second page to make another one
More kids caught the sight and made a run
I gently pushed the paper boat in their direction
It glided down towards their breathless anticipation

The kids caught it and laughed with glee so pure
I tore more pages to make paper boats more
Delicate, white, fleet took shape
Through the waves of cold water they wade

Paper boats filled the gentle face of river
I tore and folded to make some more
Pages after pages from the book of my life
Stories made of trials and triumphs rife

Meaningful words were now dripping letters of ink
I set the boats gently on water so they won't sink
I tore the page of our love story, the last one of all
My book lays empty now, with no pages at all

Paper boats, paper boats made of pages of my life
Putting smiles on children as they grab boats aside
Floating down the river in a silent parade
Paper boats, paper boats with pages of my life I made.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok! i really need comments huh! or my ego will be forever bruised. I am becoming ASR!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Such a beautiful poem
It tells a story
It is worded wonderfully
It shows you how she is slowly letting her life slip away
for someone else
because she cares not for her own happiness
in front of the joy of others
Careless,selfish and kind
Fits Khushi perfectly :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its so so so very poignant. So giving in a way. Happiness is being selfless as Khushi always is. As it says in Gita if you are searching for true happiness do something good for others and just realize what you feel. That is happiness..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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There, you got a comment, happy now :)
Now you must comment on my Fanfic Tearing Ourselves Apart in return 😛,
tsk tsk, you should know there is always a price to pay for creative appreciation!
I joke, your poem is wonderful, I was being nothing but honest in my last post 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ccuteaangel

There, you got a comment, happy now :)

Now you must comment on my Fanfic Tearing Ourselves Apart in return 😛,
tsk tsk, you should know there is always a price to pay for creative appreciation!
I joke, your poem is wonderful, I was being nothing but honest in my last post 😊



Its a price I'd happily pay, could you pm me the link, would love to read it!! there are so many FFs in this forum, i have to constantly bookmark them to keep track. please post or pm the link.

thanks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: serialjunkie



Its a price I'd happily pay, could you pm me the link, would love to read it!! there are so many FFs in this forum, i have to constantly bookmark them to keep track. please post or pm the link.

thanks.

Aww, thanks, that is very sweet of you, my fanfic is probably quite long to catch up on in one go but hey if you want to give it read I would gladly lead you there
dont worry about having to read it, I wasnt being totally serious when I commented ^_^
if you do ever dig up another nice poem you have written do think about posting it, I am thinking of putting up a section of your poem up on my wall (I do that for poems and quotes I like)
😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww, your poem was beautiful and relishing to read. It aptly emphasizes Khushi's character. 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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why is every body hell bent on making me sad?!?!

that was beautiful. mere words can not convey how it made me feel all choked up yet free inside... u get what im saying?

brilliant!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minimuffin86

why is every body hell bent on making me sad?!?!


that was beautiful. mere words can not convey how it made me feel all choked up yet free inside... u get what im saying?

brilliant!


🤗 would this help?

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