Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai~FINALY UPDATED 04/24!! - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
hey everybody..
the reason i haven't been continuing is because i am sick. I have a fever of 102.5,and i would love to continue but i cant.
Sorry!! 😭
trisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Angad and Kripa enter the party.

A guy walks up to Angad and Kripa, and Kripa gives a blank stare at him while Angad just stares at the guy thinking he knows who he is, but is still clueless.

G:hi angad!

A:uh...hi...lekin who is this?

G:Come on yaar guess..

A:um...I don't know..

G:come on guess!

Angad and this guy keep saying this for about 10 min...finally kripa speaks up.

K:just say ur name jeez!!!

Everybody in the party turns around and stares and kripa.

A:Kripa.....couldn't u have said this a little softer?(whispering to her)

K:I am sorry angad, lekin this idiot to apna naam hi nahin baatata..aur tum log to...angu just tell him to say his name before I, Kripa Angad Khanna, slap him

A:Yes Mam!

A-G:eh!!!Apna naam kya hai jaldi bol varna....

G:varna kya angad...?

A:varna....

G:varna...?

K:varna mein tumhe ek thapad doongi..samjhe
G:yes...my name is Ejaz Khan

A:OMG, Ejaz tum?

E:yes thats me!

K:ab koi mujhe baatayega ke yeh Ejaz kaun hai?

E:let me introduce myself...

K:no never mind its ok...angad chal?

E:(Eijaz then cuts of kripa and says)i am ejaz khan, better known as the manager of this hotel(the place where the party is being placed)

K:oh i see...very nice to meet u and bye!

A:Kripa, he's my best friend...

G=Girl

G:hey eijaaz honey!

E:hi..angad this is my wife Kajal.

A:hi.O, and Kajal this is my wife Kripa

KA:hi kripa

K:hi kajal...

K:Angad um...can we go? I am getting really bored!!!

A:but where do u want to go?!?!?!?somewhere where no1 else is?

K:Angad...i meant ghar...

A:thats what I meant too!

Angad and Kripa go to Khanna House, to see a shocked Naina and Dilip staring at some photos with the weirdest glare.

Sorry I wasnt able to continue for a while I was sick! I didnt go to school for 3 days!Post comments or ways I could make the fanfic betta, or u could pm me...it rlly helps me improve the fanfic

Trisha
Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
please please con. soon very nice part and hope you're feeling better πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
hey thats great! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Pooja922

hey thats great! continue soon!

tHaNk YoU!!!

~trisha~

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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: dream_kudi

please please con. soon very nice part and hope you're feeling better πŸ˜›

i will continue soon!πŸ˜ƒIf i have time i will hopefully write up the next partπŸ‘πŸΌ tonight! Also, thanks for the comment. Actually i think i am feeling better! Sab aap logon ki waja se hai!...πŸ˜›

trisha😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
please con. soon waiting for next part πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
i was going to continue tonight lekin πŸ˜• , main last minute pe busy ho gayi..srry..c i was absent in school all week last week so i have to complete all the missing hmwk i had, and that was like 30 worksheets, and i am still not finished!!! They r really hard. 🀒 Actually i doubt i could rite it up tomorrow either lekin try karoongi..i have to write two papers up tomorrow, as well as hmwk and a book reportish type project which is due next week...i will try to continue as soon as possible...lekin please comment karo naa...!!!
πŸ˜†
good news is that Wednesday is a half day...i will definatly post a part on wednesday

trisha πŸ˜•
Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Angad and Kripa look at naina and naina just looks at the pictures at shock

A:Mom, Kya hua... πŸ˜•

K:Mummyji aap teek to hai naa? πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

N:(not a single word) 🀒

A:Mom, aap kuch bolte kyon nahin πŸ˜• (thinking jaldi kuch bolo varna)

D:Angad, tum kuch bolo nahin to hi aacha hoga...

K:lekin hua kya?(thinking...(answering angads question)ya..jaldi karo naa)

D:Kripa, tum kuch bol rahi ho...tum to bolo hi maat tumne to meri bete ki to sab...

K:Maine kya kiya dadddyji, aap kya baat kar rahe ho?

A:Dad, Kripa didnt do anything bad, nor will she...she is the best thing thats ever happened to me

N:(finaly she speaks up) Angad

A:kya hua mom, kuch to batao

K:Lekin i didnt do anything

D:Thats what they all say(lolz)

N:Kripa tumne mere bete ke saath aisa kiya?meri tumse ye umeed nahin thi

K:u know what, I am leaving

Kripa runs upstairs to her room and starts crying, Angad follows her into his room

A:kripa, tumne to un logo ki baat nahin suni chaiye

K:Lekin un logo ko lagta hai ke maine....ke maine...ke maine kya kiya?

A:i don't care kripa don't worry main hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga

After this he walks up close to kripa and sayz...

A:kripa..dont worry..trust me everything will be fine

he starts kissing kripa on her neck then slowly makes his way up to her cheeks and then her lips....

K:Angad...choddo mujhe koi dekh lega

A:koi nahin hai...and kissing u rlly relieves me...it takes my tension away

K:kya baat kar rehe ho

A:fine...mein chalta hoon...lekin tension dil pe nahin le ne ka...

K:whatever..lekin hua kya

A:who cares!!



Saying this, he walks out and has a talk with Naina

A:Mom, yeh kya tumne kiya...kripa to room main ro rahi hai, aur usko to pata bhi nahin hai ke usne kya kiya hai

N:angad, chilao matt tum to sach to jaante bhi nahin

A:I don't care...main jaana nahin chaata

And with this he blasts out of the room, with a tear in his eyes...
Thinking that why did my mom even think of this

A:Kripa kaisa kuch galat keh sakti hai?

Sorry for the short part guys lekin I am still kinda sick and not feeling well, if my mom catches me on the computer she will kill me..and shes coming home any minute

Please leave comments it rlly helps me


Lub Ya....

Trisha
Edited by iqbal_trisha25 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
luvly job trish! πŸ‘ hey! u didnt comment for mine. 😭 lol...jk..cont. soon!
Luv Ya,
Prakriti