Finally got to read this anu!! I loved the pool and water scene! Could you just do a "till now" quick update of what happened from the start?! It would help. Thanks :)
Oh NO. I don't think you can be gross or crass even if you wanted to. That love making was beautifully described. It was intense & passionate with so much love. It was more beautiful than the words itself(if that makes sense). 👏
very well writen, cant believe he pushed her in the water. the way you discribed the two battered and broken women comforting each other was very touching, pls update soon and thanx for the pm.
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