Pyar ka Ehsaas updated pg 33!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry for not commenting sooner! iluved the parts! They were really sweet! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

CONTINUE SOON





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MY FANFIC

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=169882&P N=1& TPN=1

Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

sorry for not commenting sooner! iluved the parts! They were really sweet! Cont. soon!



thnx jaan  i am writing the next part😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
"Kripa do u love me and this time I want an answer"


"Pata nahin" She turned her back

"Kya matlab pata nahin, I know u love me, I know u do, then why don't u admit it dammit, kyun tadpa rahi ho mujse"

"Look Angad, we can talk about this later"

"No, I wanna know now, agar pyar nahin karti toh shaddi kyun kar rahi ho mujse? I don't want a wife who doesn't love me. I loved u and I will love u always. I want u to be mine kripa but with ur wish. I am not like him kripa, u knw me naa. Mein tumhare saath waisa nahin karoonga, trust me kripa even if u feel for me a bit, apne past ko bhul jaoo, and start a new life. Agar tum kaho toh I will tell mom and dad to cancel the engagement. He turned to leave when kripa held his hand

"Angad I don't know if I love u or not but I know that I care for u, I dream abt u every night, I remember u every morning after I wake up, I remember u when I am alone, I remember u when I am depressed, I remember u when I am happy, I daydream about u in class, tum mere liya bahut kuch ho Angad, u mean a lot to me. I don't know what I am gonna do if u are not there with me, I will die Angad. Kripa was crying now

"Sssh, kuch aur maat kaho, tum meri ho kripa and I know tumhe ekdin pyar ka ehsaas ho jayega. Then Angad brought his lips to hers face and sucked her tears. He whispered to kripa "this is ur valentine's gift kripa" then he kissed her so passionately and kripa couldn't help kissing him back the same way. The background song was playing

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai


Angad asked her for a dance

nazrein bichade
pehre laga de
dil pe
par dil kisiki na maane
Kaaton pe chalke
sholon mein jalke
roke
milke rahenge deewane
o o o
chahat ki lau to
aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai

ye mulaqatein
yeh teri ankhein
ek pal na main bhool pau
kitni mohabbat
hai kitni chahat
tumse
kaise bhala main bataoo
Acha lage jo
toh samne muskuraye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai - 5

Angad tried to kiss her shoulder when kripa turned around

"Kuch toh baqi rakho shaddi ke liye" She chuckled

"u don't worry jaan, bahut kuch baqi hain abhi. Mujse nishu jaise 9 bache chayee"

"Kya" Kripa asked confused

"U knw I love cricket and kids so I decided to have a cricket team, toh 9 babies chayee"

"KYA in ur dreams" she said with a killer look

"hey seriously" Kripa asked getting scared

Angad smiled " no yaa, if ur happy then I am happy, tumhe jitna chayee uthna hoga. Aab toh kush ho naa meri maa"

"Haan" kripa nodded

Then they shared a nice dinner, and Angad left her home at 11'0 clock

Preview: The engagement, Khavya's entry

Ps: ok this is the valentine's special, I know I am late about valentine because I couldn't continue for some days. I hope u guys like it, I tried to make it romantic. Lev lot's of comments

Love ya all
Anamika

Edited by DASA - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

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there u go, i continued😆. this is my first attempt to write romantic scenes so bear with me and leave comments.

Ps: i know u love harry potter and wht's ur name😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was really good 👏
it was meanigful+romantic+cute u are going exactly according to the title
keep it up
and do read my fan-fic i want to know wheather u like it
i really like yrs
bye take care
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

that was really good 👏
it was meanigful+romantic+cute u are going exactly according to the title
keep it up
and do read my fan-fic i want to know wheather u like it
i really like yrs
bye take care



thnx a lot, i am going to read it , i am sure u r much more better then me. keep commenting and give me suggestion. 😳😉

With loads of love
Anamika

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow anu aunty i didnt noe u cud rite
keep up the gud work
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanb

wow anu aunty i didnt noe u cud rite
keep up the gud work



thnks lil' sharu😆 and i read ur story to losa. it was really good😉