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Posted: 14 years ago
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we have seen the way rashi has hurt jigar n hetal it has hurt them so much. But think when Gopi finds out about rashis n urmilla kalakaris how it will hurt her she will be devastated because even though urmilla is harsh on gopi she still loves her, even though rashi says hurtful things about gopi she still loves her.
Firstly i can see the wrath of aham on rashi n urmilla then Gopi will run off to her room she is devastated by what she has just learned about her rashiben n mahmi she is lying on the bed crying her heart out, Aham comes upstairs n goes n sits next too her n strokes her hair, Gopi, she looks up n she says she is sorry she didnt know she didnt know, Aham says i am sorry i didnt know so we are both sorry n he hugs her tightly, he says to her come with me holds her hand n takes her downstairs he doesnt even look at anyone n just leads gopi towards the door into the car n drives off
kokila is now angry n tells jigar call the police call the lawyer these two are never to set foot in this house or near us again, jigar does he calls the lawyer that he wants to file divorce as well as a court injunction against rashi n her mother , Rashi looks at him nahi jigar ji, get out of my house. Urmilla is there shouting at everyone, rashi sits down on the floor, the police come n then the officers asks what is going on, jigar says remember her n her yes mr modi those two who came to report abuse against mrs kokila modi n it turned out to be false yes jigar replies i want them out of my house i have the lawyer coming up with court injunction that they are not allowed 1 mile radious of this house, ji Mr modi just then the lawyer arrives with the court injunction( o come on remember its a india story this happens in minutes ).
Aham n Gopi drive to the hill top where gopi is still crying Aham opens the door n holds her hand n then he walks her to a path where there is seating he tells her to sit n then he sits n holds her he speaks about how they got married, n all the things that when wrong n gopi clarified everything about what happened so they put two n two together, from the mandir fire to the last kalakari of rashi meeting sonal. Then Aham says he tired he just needs 5 mins of not thinking about all of this he lies down on the bench n his head resting on gopis lap he looks up i am sorry for slapping you Aham ji that was not your fault, Aham looks at her GOPI it was my fault i know i have a temper but i am deeply sorry. Gopi strokes his head n he closes his eyes gopi looks out to the view of the sea she smiles Aham falls a sleep she does not move for 30 miinutes, Aham gets up n smiles, Gopi i said i needed 5 minutes, Gopi looks at him n smiles, Aham gets up Gopi its peaceful n beautiful here she says yes i have been thinking, Aham looks at her Aham ji if you want to go back to anita i have no problem with that i dont want our marriage to be based on lies, Gopi i dont want anita she is someone i loved in the past now i love you Gopi looks at him hiraan she starts to cry again, gopi why are you crying, she looks at him n says you love me, Aham now laughs n hugs her we better get back everyone will be worried, Aham ji but rashi n her mother will be there, aham looks at her dont worry if they are then we shall avoid n go upstairs, ok.
By the time Aham n gopi got home Gopi had fallen asleep in the car, Aham looked at her so peaceful. He looked outside n saw urmilla n rashi in the police van he goes out of the car n goes n lifts gopi out of the car she was still sleeping, urmilla mouth wide open rashi still did not lift her head, in front of urmilla Aham kisses gopi on her forehead n then looks at urmilla n smirks urmilla faints sitting in the car 😆.
Aham walks in the house, kokila comes running Gopi vahu, mom Gopi is sleeping she is fine i am going to take her upstairs ok, kokila breathes a sigh of relief, hetal puts her hand on kokila shoulder, kokila fair enough what they did to us but they didnt even spare their own ji mota bhabi . Those two will never know what a treasure they had in gopi, Aham walks down mom Gopi is sleeping i dont want to wake her but i have to tell you all a few things which now make sense, he then repeats everything how gopi was a victim of those two. Kokila said i always knew but you dont know these gopi hasnt told you i caught rashi red handed she was anitas bhoot kokila tells all, then she tells them about what happen at raksha bandan the tickery, then jigar says rashi took the money that he gave her to give to her mother, what a fool he has been.
It was late in the evening Gopi wakes up n the family are sitting at the dinning room table , Gopi says jai shree krishna, Gopi looks at kokila maji you should have woken me up , Gopi vahu you needed the sleep anyway we are here, Aham looks at her Gopi come n sit n eat, Aham ji i am not hungry, kokila gets up i am done, Gopi vahu sit next to aham i will get a plate for you, aham says mom no need we shall share a plate, hetal n jigar smiles, jigar smiles bhai your the best i will leave the teasin for later, Gopi sits down but still does not eat so aham break a piece of roti n feeds her then kokila does then hetal,jigar, parag n chirag, Aham smiles Gopi the reason everyone is feeding you is not to make you happy but to make themselves happy they need you to have strength as they want a grandchild gopi starts to blush, jigar says i want a be a chacha Gopi now is smiling n laughing.😆😳
Gopi was treated like queen she still had the responsibilites of the house but she had freedom nothing went wrong then familys unity got stronger, Aham gopi n jigar all had fun, brothers were stonger than ever as for rashi n her mother who cares but gopi did give the family a grandchild in fact she gave them two twins a boy n a girl😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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well dont cry. u are so awesome Suk. love ur OS so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Suk, it's funny with all the Urshi duo bits but the Goham bits her sweet and family feeing her that was relly good. great fan fic.
Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it suk...hope in the serial gopi also gets to know abt urshi soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really awesome as always suk .totally rocking
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar suk very nice os
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was so cute , I loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow love it shame u not cont end here any way thank goog sff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice. I think i will stop watching the actual serial, keep hoping that all you excellent writers will keep coming up with there beautiful, well thought out FF/SS/OS/VM etc and let my imagination do the rest. What say?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thts awesome👏 ...hope k is ka thoda sa part bhi serial main actually ho

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