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Posted: 12 years ago
Nazmaa..come on..no secrets..jaldi jaldi..we are waiting..
Posted: 12 years ago
I think This Time Its Not That Confusing...
Finally I Have It Written Up..
I had to Re-Write This Part Again
Lmao x
 
Part 16
 

Maan got out of the car as he reached the hospital.. he went to the back of the car and got Geet out.. Her head was bleeding furiously' blood dripping down her face, down her neck and even some in her mouth'

He ran into A&E and yelled for a doctor.. He saw a empty bed and placed her on it and waited for a nurse to come.. but no-one came.. Maan walked to the receptionist and yelled straight at her face'

"I WANT A DOCTOR NOW OTHERWISE KISS YOUR JOB GOODBYE!" He Yelled at her.. The nurse started shaking as maan yelled out instructions.. she picked the phone up shakily and called for the doctor' Minutes later the doctor came And saw geet bleeding..

"Oh God!!" he exclaimed "Isse tho bohat khoon beh rah hai.. Quick Nurse Isse Operation theatre main leh kar joa.. Abhi!" he said fearing for this young girls life'

Maan was shocked about the outburst and became scared for her life'  he remembered her smile, laughter and her happy excitement.

"BTW sir humme is ki parivaar se koi ek ka signature chahiya.. or we can't operate'" the doctor explained..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_QGcwwLaok[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
oh dil se dil ka rishta juda

pal do pal mein mitta nahi

bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi

 

Maan stood near the phone unable to dial meera's number.. He was unable to tell his sister ' in ' law what Had happened to geet.. He called the doctor back and told the doctor the events that Geet had occurred without naming any names and gave him Meera's Number'

 

(tere dil ka mere dil se

rishta purana hain

in aankho se har aansu

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain )

tere dil ka mere dil se

rishta purana hain

 

He walked towards the operating Theatre and saw the nurses trying to stop the bleeding' He saw her pale face and it looked like no blood was running in her veins'

 

                                                                                                                                                                                       Teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun

main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam

dard baat lenge ham sun

in palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain

tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

 

he remembered the look on her face as she tried to hide her feelings for him' the look when she found out about his engagement with sameera'

 

kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona

dekha nahi jaata hain sun

shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain

khushbuye lutati hain sun

 

He remembered her tears when his engagement was announced.. he soo badly wanted to wipe them tears and take her in his arms.. he wanted to tell her it was all a joke.. he couldn't take the tears in her eyes.. it hurt..

 

udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain

tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

in aankho se har aansu

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

 

He broke out of his thoughts as he heard a woman calling him.. he turned to see Meera' Her eyes were puffy and she looked tired.. she had his two year old nephew Ayaan in her arms fast asleep..

"maan Agar meri geet ko kuch hogaya na phir mein tumko aur tumhara bhai ko kabi maaf nahi karonge.." she wept silently..

"Geet ko kuch nahi hoga"

"vo tumse bohat pyaar karthi hai yehi uske bari saaza hai, ke vo tumse pyaar karti hai" She said silently unaware of Maan who was stood next to her listening to everything'

Over To The Next Person..

Edited by Nazmaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
god kathie you just turn the whole table in part13

vickey & arjun that evil

am clutching my feast for arjun did to geet ðŸ˜¡ ðŸ˜¡

i want him dead ðŸ¤¢ & have shame in accepting it  also 

may be vickey's phone will give chance maan to kill arjun for me ðŸ˜ˆ
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Nazmaa..come on..no secrets..jaldi jaldi..we are waiting..

 
iTS DONE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
mrs. msk that was so painful ðŸ˜­

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

omg Sherya..fab update!


Really hating this Arjun...how cold he? does he not have any concious at all?
and that Vicky ugh..he is so weak he doesn't even deserve to called a man

Nazma did you give us hint of what you are going to be wriing next? Secretly?😉

 

 
Did I??
Maybe Maybe Not?? Lol =]
Lets just say he needs to get back on meera's good side.. lol :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh Naz...poor maan...and handa ended up in the hospital twice alreaady..i am afraid one of us may kill her at one point ðŸ¤£..sowieee..i couldn't help the thought..

Great job Naz...

do we have another writer who wants to take over ??

Reya <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome Nazmaa...my heart went out for Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shreya r u writing the next part or I can try
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Posted: 12 years ago
p.s...me loved the song u chose Naz...i really hope Maan can take away the tears from her life...

Reya <3