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Posted: 12 years ago
seriously kathie..me and simi just finished the other one..i am gonna stalk this one..no more responsibility..hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

seriously kathie..me and simi just finished the other one..i am gonna stalk this one..no more responsibility..hehe


yeah shreya lol
you are right...thank god we finished the other oneπŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

I really hope all the writers don't abandon this like the other oneπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

But anyone Kathie you know that I am inπŸ˜†

 
 
Well i'm going To Try This One So I'm In...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

 
 
Well i'm going To Try This One So I'm In...


yay!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


yay!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I'm Abit Nervous Though So We will Have To See How It Is...😳
Btw Who's Writing The Next Part...
Has Anyone Decided??.. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats !!!!!!!!!!!! gr8! idea ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

interesting start ...

continue soon ...
Posted: 12 years ago
I Hope This Is Good.. Its My First Try On This So Please Criticism Are Welcome...
 
Part 2
 

As she stood numb in the middle of the road Geet couldn't help but think about her weird reaction.. She had no idea why she didn't like the recent events that had occurred. Geet  couldn't help but think about the times he had saved her, the times he helped her with her work or when he started well being nice to her before the almost kiss..

As she was thinking about him the truck was coming towards her at a fast speed. Not hearing the truck driver blasting that loud horn she kept walking..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=keQ1yCqLvQs[/YOUTUBE] 

Rabba mere ishq kisi ko

Aise na tadpaye... hoy

Dil ki baat rahe is dil mein,

Hothon tak na aaye,

Na aaye...

 

Geet remembered how she used to see him working in his cabin and how he looked up at her as if he sensed her looking at him . Coming out of her thoughts she saw him standing infront of her, smiling with his arms out wide as if asking her to hug him..

 

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

She ran towards him and tried to hug him only to see him vanish.. She hugged herself and cried.. She fell to the floor and just cried' She felt a hand on her shoulder and saw maan'. She got up only to see him gone again'

 

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna... 2

 

Tujhe har khushi de di

Labon ki hansi de di

Zulfon ki ghata lehraayee

Paigaam wafa ke laayee

Tune acchhi preet nibhayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

She remembered the time they went out to mr chopra's party and they danced.. She remembered telling him a joke and him laughing' she smiled as tears streamed down her face..

 

Wo chand mere ghar-aangan

Ab to aayeega

Tere soone is aanchal ko

Wo bhar jaayega

Teri kar di god bharaayee,

Teri kar di god bharaayee,

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

She got up and carried on walking towards the truck.. still crying still thinking about what she had just saw at the khurana mansion..

 

O mahinyaa, O mahinyaa

 

Khata ho gayi mujhse

Kaha kuch nahin tumse

Ikrar jo tum kar paate

To door kabhi na jaate

Koi samjhe na peer parayee

Koi samjhe na peer parayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

She remembered the look he gave her as he proposed to sameera.. The little smirk he had on his face.. She walked towards the truck still as it came towards her at high speed..

 

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Dil roya ki ankh bhar aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

Tujhe yaad na meri aayee

Kisi se ab kya kehna

 

She cursed maan and felt herself getting pulled out of the road.. She looked at her arm and saw a hand.. A Familiar hand'

 

Well That's It guys.. Hope you all like it'

Give comments I'm A Tad Bit Nervous'

Edited by Nazmaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

seriously kathie..me and simi just finished the other one..i am gonna stalk this one..no more responsibility..hehe



plz send me links of your other works 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
proxy for one more besharam πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kathie I'm so glad you're back with this! Nazmaa you did a great job with part 2! :) I sure hope that familiar hand was Maan!😳

Looking forward to part 3 already!