creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 111

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

simi: I am wroting.. :(


ohh okay
Go sherya!
My night owl queen πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

are we finishing this today ???


 

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

idk maybe nto since no one is updating

 
looks like it might finish now that sherya typing
Edited by Nazmaa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
i cant wait for da nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
simi: the nest part i not yet over..but ek baar u check..Pm karron..pls..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

simi: the nest part i not yet over..but ek baar u check..Pm karron..pls..

okay pm me😳
i will check!
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Posted: 12 years ago
 we play PM PM..hehe

Geet curled her toes and hid behind her veil as she heard the footsteps approaching

Part 32

She looked up thru the veil that covered her eyes and with the slightest visibility she could see that Maan was moving towards her. Inspite of submitting herself to maan mentally and emotionnly way before, her toes curled and her breathing became ragged in feared abticipation. She had no objections in giving herself to a man who loved her beyond reason.

Baaki in Pm..or Mods will come behind me with danda again..😭


Edited by mchopra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part Shreya. What a nice end to an emotional and dramatic love story
 
πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnks ritzy..waise since u are a mother..tht last few line are correct na abt pain and all...
i am seriouly unaware of all this..i am a student yaaraa..i know of all this only from novels that i read..hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was beautiful
lol u can still pm me wit it πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
Edited by sweet cherry - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Shreya!!

What A Beautiful End To Our Dramatic Storyy!!
Loved It...
Couldnt have Ended It Better ...
xxx